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def been tellin me how he tight with god and that woteva he say he obay
cus eva since he found out he battlin tha princess he lernd ta pray
Good shit lol...coulda been worded a bit better but good concept, nice personal
def alwase cums crashin battles n beggin for a return vote
he def by mouf (mouth) n only do txt cus sum i slit his throat
good wordplay usage
man this emcee's style is wack lk marlin mansons makeup
man this so easy lets play cowboys n bring tha stake up
Ehhh...not feelin it
yo but def and rappin is nearly as bad a combination as drake n josh
ill clean this battle up, lk christina from diry afta she started work at tha car wash
decent
this kid a big fan of friends cus he been wishin he had sum
n he fantasise but i spit tha truth n pop that dream lk bubble gum
meh...
like distinys child def think he can make me loose my breath
hell naw iv killed him be4fore he begin as quick as tha spread ov black death
This was cool
U call urself princess of rap royalty,
But u couldn't spit a royal creation if u were screwd...royally,
good opener
Ur like rap royal beats, 'given' away inexspensively,
But nobody's gon buy ya 'ass', y pay when u get it free,
ok sort of a wack concept but meh
U must be dementedly somewhat outta ya mind,
How u gon be a princess when ur herships been denied,
It flows cool but not a hard diss really
Ur used ta bein wit guys, like 'Keys' u always 'fallin',
But u luvin 'Linkin Park', alwayz on ya knees 'crawlin',
The first line was cool second was kinda wack
I accepted this battle cuz i'm tired of bein discreet,
I wanted ta beat* u, somwhere other than btween the sheets,
nice punches rightt there
But u luv helpin, comin inta the site wit a new chick every week,*
So i could slap 'HER' ass while 'U' turn the other cheek,
Its iight
Princess your concepts and punches were good ....you fell off in some spots but it was still, a little bit better than your last battle I read, Def by Mouf you had good structure and flow but some of your punches weren't as witty, and you seem like you got down on a little bit of creativity as well. Princess is lucky this isn't an audio battle cuz some of those bars were a little stretched.
v/Princess
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(Princess)
def been tellin me how he tight with god and that woteva he say he obay
cus eva since he found out he battlin tha princess he lernd ta pray
{NICE}
def alwase cums crashin battles n beggin for a return vote
he def by mouf (mouth) n only do txt cus sum i slit his throat
{WEAK}
man this emcee's style is wack lk marlin mansons makeup
man this so easy lets play cowboys n bring tha stake up
{WEAK}
yo but def and rappin is nearly as bad a combination as drake n josh
ill clean this battle up, lk christina from diry afta she started work at tha car wash
{OK}
this kid a big fan of friends cus he been wishin he had sum
n he fantasise but i spit tha truth n pop that dream lk bubble gum
{OK}
like distinys child def think he can make me loose my breath
hell naw iv killed him be4fore he begin as quick as tha spread ov black death
{NICE}
(def by mouf)
U call urself princess of rap royalty,
But u couldn't spit a royal creation if u were screwd...royally,
{NICE}
Ur like rap royal beats, 'given' away inexspensively,
But nobody's gon buy ya 'ass', y pay when u get it free,
{WEAK}
U must be dementedly somewhat outta ya mind,
How u gon be a princess when ur herships been denied,
{WEAK}
Ur used ta bein wit guys, like 'Keys' u always 'fallin',
But u luvin 'Linkin Park', alwayz on ya knees 'crawlin',
{OK}
I accepted this battle cuz i'm tired of bein discreet,
I wanted ta beat* u, somwhere other than btween the sheets,
{OK}
But u luv helpin, comin inta the site wit a new chick every week,*
So i could slap 'HER' ass while 'U' turn the other cheek,
{OK, BUT WEAK FINISH}
Overall princess threw harder punches but it was very close.
v/ Princess
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prin-
def been tellin me how he tight with god and that woteva he say he obay
cus eva since he found out he battlin tha princess he lernd ta pray
***flows off, but i love the idea, original in my eyes
def alwase cums crashin battles n beggin for a return vote
he def by mouf (mouth) n only do txt cus sum i slit his throat
*** again, fix the flow, add a multi, and its four stars fo sho
man this emcee's style is wack lk marlin mansons makeup
man this so easy lets play cowboys n bring tha stake up
** seems like filler, but not bad by any means
yo but def and rappin is nearly as bad a combination as drake n josh
ill clean this battle up, lk christina from diry afta she started work at tha car wash
** eh, ok i get it, but the flow is waaay off
this kid a big fan of friends cus he been wishin he had sum
n he fantasise but i spit tha truth n pop that dream lk bubble gum
*** i like it, but it aint perfect
like distinys child def think he can make me loose my breath
hell naw iv killed him be4fore he begin as quick as tha spread ov black death
** lol usually i like history refferences, but the flow is of so just 2
def-
U call urself princess of rap royalty,
But u couldn't spit a royal creation if u were screwd...royally,
* royally and royalty? weeeeaaaak
Ur like rap royal beats, 'given' away inexspensively,
But nobody's gon buy ya 'ass', y pay when u get it free,
** ok, its ok
U must be dementedly somewhat outta ya mind,
How u gon be a princess when ur herships been denied,
*** nice multi at the top, i like the punch too
Ur used ta bein wit guys, like 'Keys' u always 'fallin',
But u luvin 'Linkin Park', alwayz on ya knees 'crawlin',
** its a personal, but a weak one
I accepted this battle cuz i'm tired of bein discreet,
I wanted ta beat* u, somwhere other than btween the sheets,
*** nice wordplay
But u luv helpin, comin inta the site wit a new chick every week,*
So i could slap 'HER' ass while 'U' turn the other cheek,
** ok decent
TOTALS-
prin- 15/6= 2.500 (B-)
def- 13/6= 2.167 (C)
vote - prin