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good verse
Never done this before
yo ima kill this pit with nothin but a q tip
shove it down his throat, bitch'll be sick
then ima kick him untill he whimpers
make him lick his puke like a microwave dinner
break off the q-tip and stick it in his eye
pit will be wondering why earwax made him die
or i could shove it up his nose till it gets the brain
how can such a little object cause so much pain
i guess i pick next topic (Your dentist is Paul wall)
if my dentist was paul wall i'll have an iced out grill
hopin he wont fuck my shit up but he probably will
he says this might hurt so to put me to sleep i took a pill
woke up so druged and tryed to leave but took a spill
he like ay word i heard your tape i like your skill
im link good looks but now im just tryin to chill
let he gas out in the air and got him so high that he paid his own bill
n/t=getting a track with eminem
Ok, well as the last guy FUCKED IT UP by not leavin a bit of his feedback ima do just that................
What a load of shit. That was truely pointless in readin. U gotta elevate man. Ii wanna topical battle u. thats another time tho......
Many men want to work with my man eminem
but he wont spit with just any men
no men, in fact coz the don just retired
he felt like his life in the business expired
but he do it for me, just one last time
coz I'm a V.I.P. n ive got an ill rhyme
n i shine when I step up on2 that stage
we put our minds 2getha n release our rage
coz we both been caged in similar surroundings
n we both escaped thru our ill soundings
thru ill flows we escaped into the studio booth
n when we put pen to paper, huh, im a neva lose
next topic, blowin up (take the meanin where u want)
that was pretty good man, i like the wordplay you got, need some stronger vocab to toughen up the verse, keep workin homie not bad,
im blowin up with my money like dynamite
its really obvious you could see it with blind sight
hustlin just to buy a pack of smokes
not anymore i make money like ali comin off the ropes
Its called stay in skool but they dont teach thugs
Im playin these fools thats why Im really sellin drugs
Hit me up just gotta chirp me like three six
Im makin more money than marbury of tha Knicks
i got a fat stack bigger then ma girls ass
it look like a gun in ma pants but thats just a wad of cash
n/t We found Osamma Bin laden
decent verse....the structue was a little off and the punches aint hit that hard..you need more elevation
not a day goes by that i dont hope to see us catch that punk
but we got soft soldiers, all neat freaks like that dude from MONK
you gotta get down and dirty if you wanna catch this BASTARD
if i catch 'em i promise to all of ya that i'll leave bruised and PLASTERED
osama bin laden caused alot of hearts to be shattered and broken
still remember the day i was running from all the smoke and chokin
faggot ass nigga wana come and try to terrorize the city
now we got 'em running scared with his turban all stained and shitty
i wish i was the president cause i'll make sure osama know no to fuck wit me
cause i'll put more wholes in 'em then the southside of queens did to 50
n/t= being a soldier
ok heres watcha need, heres the key ta bein a soldier/
ya gotta have balls, big guns, N' ya gotta be bolder/
cause freedom aint cheap but its still in the hands of the holder/
N' I told her that ud be shocked just from sight/
not to mention wat goes on when ur forced ta fight/
plus aint no sight for this war to be ending/ only political truths/ and those truths often bending/ plz ring N' let me wake up from this dream/ fuck u george bush for making me part of this team
n/t: shitty ass weather in chicago right now
the flow wasnt as good as it could have been, anyone can rip the topic of being a soldier i'd say take the / outta your flow and tighten up the structer
i live in ky but i heard in chi town the weather is gray and gloom
bring your self there and you'll be feelin like your gonna meet ya doom
storms, clouds, no blue sky's....thunder, lightning, it's hecktic
the weather down there...................its not really that unexpected
bizare thing is im dont give a fuck and i dont know about chi town weather
i just know that where im from our storms dont stay long so my towns better
what else can i say not too much about this wack topic its not terrific
you dumb fuck for this shit you should have your account permantly suspended
next topic - getting charged with possesion of marijuana
that was good it was fun juss reading..kept with the topic i like that good vocab too
this real life shit is not fun...and last night was so not the one..
to get in my face cuz i almost got charged wit posseion of pot n a gun..
i wasnt mine but who knew that??... here are some facts!!
i couldnt juss chillin n relax...it was my car n i didnt know a thing so they cuffed me n put me n the back..
i never been here before.. i truely thought the lord was gonna close the door...cuz i was lookin at 10 years or more
i was in for the ride of my life so i was buckled up..im fighing this in every way bare knuckled up..but Jesus sought fit to give me one more time..WOW did I luck up..I got his sign..but what if he was busy?? damn I would have been fucked up...
tru life shit..
n/t y u hate cops
Jookz, I was trying to follow your story
It seem'd a little scratch'd to meh' didn't exactly stay on topic of just getting charged wit possesion of weed
But if that is your tru life experience I can relate...good shit
Why I hate tha cops
Man piggies wouldn't be so hated if they took time to relate wit
Tha youth in tha places where they storm in and take faces
Actin like they never made mistakes in their life
Acting like they never did drugs, shot guns or used knives
Actin like their top dawg cause they can wear a badge
I hate tha cops cause they remind me of cabbagepatch
They jump to conclusions, make false statements and wrong accusions
Don't take the time to prep and go through shit just get right to it
Shootin their guns in tha slumbs cause they know they'll get shot down
Because of their own actions of not taking control last time they came round
Their fuckin actors, playing a role of authority
When God is tha only one who's got control of me
S0 fuck a pig I'ma smoke a cig
Then open my house door and flip tha bird to a jake
topic: Having a mission to assassinate your bestfriend
nice stayed on topic i liked it..but i know i didnt stay on topic that much but what i said happened last night so..i thought it would kinda work.lol but nice drop keep it up homie..
thanks meng, you gon post on my topic?
i'll continue with the same topic since aint no new one ''why i hat the cops''
im glad this topic was mentioned...cause i cant even leave my house without the cops asking me questions
always put a nigga money on holds like i cant eat
cops still at me cause i aint locked up from that case i beat
so that gives them that much more reason to hate
i was due upstate...but i over did my bid so i was late
wanna flash they badge like they big and bad
happiness come them when they beat on victims and its sad
cops always would find that one nigga on the block to snitch
but these cops aint shit...without they badge thay nothing but a bitch
walking the streets of the hood like he wont get shot like the next man
i once told a cop that bulletproof the protect the head so watch your mouth fam
i'll sacrife a bid to show they punk ass that i aint sweet
cause im a type of nigga to kick out windows when im in the back seat
so now they think twice about coming to the hood when they them guns pop
i got one thing to say from all this..keep gettin money and FUCK COPS
n/t=9 to 5
I know bout working tha 9 to 5 and then some
I put in 8 to 5 five days of the week then rest some
I work on these wealthy folks boats, tha mechanic that fix em'
They act all snobby like I should show respect and kiss em'
But my boss tha man so I stay tru to homeboy
I know he got connects to tha mob, I'm just waitin to hear summin
Cause them kats don't hear nor sayin nuttin
You get picked you can't get ask to get picked
So I work this 8 to 5 cause I know it will be happening
I respect him he respect me
I work my ass off to get that cheese
He spot me a G' if I needed it
Straight cash 50 Jackson's not Curtis or Michael
Then I'de hit him right back like that shit recycled
So yeah I'm tha lyricist who twists tha wrench
But I'm a lyricist who never sat tha bench
I'm a lyricist who won't follow in shadows
I'm a leader god damnit you can lick my asshole
I work tha 8 to 5 whatever 9 to 5 your daily work schedule
I ain't on tha block doing extorsion and imbezzle
I got a 99' Camry black on 18 inch chrome that I put through tha meadows
Put tha pedal to tha metal I got pride just like a medal
Legit money for me even though sometimes I think he's launduring
But thats ok, I don't know shit, not even pondering
I don't no nuttin why you wondering
I work tha 8 to 5 cause I'm hungry B
topic: sitting in jail
another nigga that dont leave feedback man i hate that shit dont drop nothing in here unless u gopnna leave feedback man
dat shit was str8 mam i liked it
im sittin and patiently waiting
thinking about a plan of escaping
this cell block
i might be shipped and handled and in up in ya mailbox
got tally marks on da wall not for days
but for how many times i beat my tallywacky
man just da smell of some puss would make me happy
lounging on this bunk wondering bout da outside
when i was sentenced i was kickin and screamin without pride
wanna leave but da securitys hard with all these security gaurds
so everynight im locked behind these security bars
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50 & GAME