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Way you favorite ice cream
I thought I told you
Pistachio ice cream for the win
Cookie dough
I’ll update rankings at some point.
See y’all sunday
What
Man’s just constantly letting his intrusive thoughts win.
Lolll
but of course my guy lmao https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=9295651
Hahahaha creased up at you calling a 14 year old white kid the n word
lmao tbh now that I listen to it again the verse was trash but shit was mad old haha.
It was trash other than the work of art/draw attention line but in your defence it didn’t need to be good to get the job done
I never did audio battles before so I just wrote some shit I thought sounded dope at the time and shipped it lmao.
Good shit @Blue Bayou
Salamander ghostwrote for me
I forgot to post smh
I swear you would be dope af if you would just remember to show dude lol.
@Wordz AhGod
Thanks v. much for your vote and feed & participation.
That said, regarding your critique I just want to make a quick note in my "defense"...don't worry; not quite a sway:
Playing off my opponent's bar?
I believe the only 3 words related to his were "he posted early".
Simply a comment that I posted late at night way after him...for a rhyme fit.
If you really think that's playing off his punch man, that seems kinda harsh to me.
It was a nameplay punch using the band's debut album for a quick brag. Relating to his name and my birth-year, NOT playing on his punch. That's my point.
I'm not contesting the vote at all, just explaining a bit.
GL next wk
Swaying but exhibit A) talking about him posting early and exhibit B) he talked about you flying high which you repeated and replied to. Would be very odd if you said that was a coincidence bruh.
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I don’t think it’s worth the trouble of a DQ, we don’t even have enough activity here to care to enforce rules so I wouldn’t trip. Do whatever makes you happy dude.
Wow, Wordz. I did not even know about the "fly' play. Lol.
I truly thought my only pre-play was the "he posted early".
"Fly" was simply a near/inner for "reaLize"....and is the quickest 3 letter word to brag on oneself.
I DID NOT EVEN PURPOSEFULLY PLAY ON HIS FLY HIGH LOL
But you know what, Wordz. I like it even better now that it appears to be a play.-- So yes that does make me happy.
I have no problem docking me a bit for it...
That said, (all) [not talking to just words here]
What exactly does it take for a W here?
Obviously stretched longbar uber-rhymes with simple audio disses - NO
Obviously all the other bullshit I've/others have tried to pull - NO
BUT...This week I just did a nice nameplay/band&album play with a self-brag and opening homo diss.
***cencored sway asking about my opponent's closing Simile***
Is it amazing? Should I "get" it? Is that why he won?
Just musing some open questions?
Wouldn't you if nothing was working? - I had a good punch this week I believe. That's one belief tho.
What'dya WANT?/ I'm versatile.
Lol.~
That’s a good question and I think it comes down to knowing your audience. There’s a specific style that every site tends to follow individually that will generally get you at least consistency. Most of my wins don’t come from me writing overall better shit but rather from consistency. Say you have 8 mehh lines with one amazing line but the other guy has 10 ok lines, he’ll probably take the W even without line of the battle. Text is also very different from writing a song, doing audio, or a live battle. Live battle is usually more of a long bar or shit with no fixed rhythm which doesn’t translate well in RB and NC battles. There are some forums that loved it floating around but this ain’t it. The knowing your crowd part comes into play when you know who’s voting. If I have a lot of NC dudes voting, my style of writing will usually be shorter bars with grimy sounding wording. They’re corny so they like when dudes talk like gangsters. RBs general style to me from my point of view is a bit more playful or less focused on shit like gun bars. This has kind of mixed up over the years and we’ve always jumped into each others sites. Quickest way I think for you to improve is to pick a dope battler or a few that you like or see that is successful and study how they write. Personally I think people like J Hens, Tettris, Orc and Bar (when he’s not being emotional) are great examples as they’re pretty consistent no matter where they go.
I would like to apologise to anyone who took the time to read my punch this week, I was in bed after a heavy night at the pub, half asleep fingering the remains of my kebab when I remembered I had to drop something. At least auto correct made me seem coherent
You good bro.. nobody expected anything from you to begin with.
I think Slayer started typing and then just began hitting the words that popped up on the auto-complete. I wouldn't bother digging too deep into it.
Taking the W doesn’t always mean they came up with anything good/better than you. Your flow is choppy and sporadic which makes your bars hard to read. The fact you keep sprinkling adlibs or random thoughts in your lines doesn’t enhance your bars at all.
Lol.
This week's punch was about as simple and name-play as it gets. Perhaps my PREVIOUs long bar uber-rhyme audio-lame Non-Creative were "choppy and sporadic"....but this week?
I am not talking about my bar here tho
I would like to know the closing simile that swept me 4-0.
IN what way does playing basketball make one "go down in flames" or w/e it was????
I await Slayerr, Wordz OR ANY RB head to explain his final simile.
I'm not as butthurt as you think. As you see, the 0 votes resulted in rebellious keystyle on the playoff signup that is a better song/verse than most ppl who craft one for days/weeks,
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This convo killed RB
Thanks
-Staff
IT'S THE MOTHER FUCKING CHAT THREAD - ZELPH.
I am but one spamming/writing/rapping man.
Didn't know I had such power- Thanks
fucking idiots
still haven't explained the simile that swept.
LMFAO
yeah RB's dead cuz pharaoh swayed and complained for a few weeks
i am speechless.
(well) not really but~