its sick enough to but u should write a hook to bring it together as a more complete piece
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its sick enough to but u should write a hook to bring it together as a more complete piece
I rock NY fitteds u nice forget it
u write i spit it and there r 2 types of critics
i know u didnt get it the puch was way above u
but thats ok cuz J will always luv you
not Jookz im talking bout the man in the sky
I spit so grusome that fluid lands in ya eye
for certain im a star but i keep bursting u flirting for a hurtin
u only got 21 more years till u end up like that 40 year old virgin...(JOOK$)
juss some fun shit..
n/t what kinda name is Blue Hat...
yo big up to my homie WORD SLINGA...yo lets get that OM poppin homeboy..holla at me..1
i liked that. could of been longer though. o well still good. i loved your closer
yo when i write, i put a hurting on the page so that makes my ryhmes tight
but all this elevation thread means to me is revising my lines and let them take flight
so i murk dudes but pay no attention to those fakes who still rock FUBU
cause in all honesty i got a sweet choclate flow like YOOHOO
repping the streetz to the fullest so you know im coming straight from the top
keep it hot, and always keep the mouth shut when it comes to talking to the cops
the hood taught me well but it made my heart cold and show no emotion
try to let shit slide but holding all this shit in is calling for an explosion
got alot of shit on my chest, which makes my shit heavy
twisted mind at times, which makes me spit deadly
ryhmes that let off venom and poison niggas minds and soul
cause when im about to spit i draw more hype than the super bowl
shout out to JOOKS ay yo holla at your boy
ayo HOTT son keep it up homie do what you do..
Ayo for respect n happiness i struggle n strive
to keep every hot verse and this fourm alive
this is the second day of the new year
keep to ur promise so ur resolution appears
i got mad plans for 06 my accuracy punch hitness n verbal slickness
all the dieases n plagues dont matter if u can spit this sick
never seen pops we not guerillas but always run tough
this not Dblock but my people forever got 2 gunz up
my ways are about short verses and quick merkness
with that Jenifer Love Hewitt couldnt even curse this
I can do anything with the mind body n soul
u went to a palmreader and ur sign was prolly a whole(death)...JOOKZ
n/t how will the new year affect you
straight fire son , keep ya head up my dude
yeah ay yo this new year aint nothing but more green
to help cop that six and look mean when i lean
with a grinch smile on my face to show my wealth
this new year wont afeect me at all......
cause im still gritty and dont give a fuck about ya health
on a mission since i was youngin to get more chedder
my new years resolution is to do what i uaually do but do it better
held it down in 05 so just imagine my grind in 06
i welcome the 06 cause i got some problems to fix
06 means more chicks on the dick cause i spit hot lines
seen one already at my show and she said ay word ''I LIKE YOUR RYHMES''
im like good looking out mami lets go to my room and start the new year right
im hittin it and she moaning crazy and she said she wanna be here when i write
im like chill mami, the 06 wont allow me to but u can stay if u please
cause with you here or not im a still bring in big chesse
n/t=getting a deal
just got signed...ink still fresh on the page...
reason White gets signed...cuz I kill vets on the stage...
wanna bet on my wage...
how bout about a hundred...lightning fast rhymes...
voice booms like its thunder...
cant believe it took so long...thought it woulda happended sooner...
get that ass at all times...morning, night, even after a nooner...
what label signs me...does it even matter bro...
get dropped faster than signed...got me madder than the ha
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Originally Posted by WhitE kONg
gladder den what? i waz feelin dat son
so keep it up
rappin wit feedback
cuz ima certified hustla yea i b dat
sick
yup i mo flowin n spitz
like hosin a bitch hahaha
n dey all knowin it 2
going thru who?
not da hustla
dat a drop u fukaz
bringin da rawkuz
all day
n all wayz 2
cuz break rite thru u
juzt str8 freeing
bezt believen
1 more line n im done
cuz im elevatin so qwik im bout 2 reach da sun
First of all you fucking such... That's good your banned. Read the fucking rules before you post bullshit like that. Work on your flow, your punches, almost everything.
Snice nobody has left a topic, I'll start by dissing this bitch.
Forget this kid, he's a dumbfuck, hard on rules.
Need a fucking wrench you unscrew this fool.
I ain't talking about tools, more like a merkage.
Couldn't hold enough power if your a power circuit.
So don't start shit man, listen to your master.
Don't got time for this bitch, fucking bastard.
Next time post a decent verse, of be damned.
My bad, I forgot, this bitch is already banned!
w/e just getting this thread started up again.
Forgot Topic: Intrusion
Haha that was an iight drop. Flow was good and structure was easy to read which makes it good of course. Rhyme scheme was basic but you got the point across so i thought it was dropped quite well. Lyrically you got potential and I think if you put more time into it or some more thought that could have been a real tight diss. Keep it up.
I'll use the topic.
An open window is my selection so I enter feet first
I immerse in such criminal acts with intentions to reimburse
I enter with minimal facts, this is unfamiliar territory
Yet like water for people, my economic salvation is mandatory
I'm in the first story of such a luxurious home
Yet a sudden noise got me laying down prone
I crawl over behind the sofa, getting closer to the kitchen
In the home of the opposition I stand up from prone position
Clutch my holster, draw my weapon, ready for whoever
Feeling shakey as a lady enters, I reacted by blasting my Beretta
Oh shit, I panicked, paranoia strikes, got me trippin
I'm a sinner, killer of an innocent now in God's submission
I run back towards the window, I'm praying for my life
I see a man running after me but I have to run from this fight
I exit this home, hearing shots fired amidst this confusion
I fall to the ground, hit in the leg while tryna escape this intrusion
Topic: Paranoia
I EMMERGE WIT TESTIMONIALS U NEVER HEARD
I AM A LIVIN WORD A CONDUIT FA MOVIN VERBS
CHICAGO KILLA WIT THE MIND OF A god
ELEVATE MY BODY SO MY SOUL GET CLOSER TO OURS
MY MENTAL IS AN INVISIBLE PENCIL MADE FOR JOTTIN THE FLAME
THAT BURNS SLOW LIKE A BLUNT DIPPED IN HONEY AND CAIN
WINDOWS OF OPPORTUNITY SHOW ME WAYS TO LIVE
ENIMIES GET SLAYED KIDS TAKEN TO YA GRAVE TO SNIFF
CRY SCREAM AND YELL HAILMARY MY RYHME IS SCARY
MY SEMI TELEPATHY IS DESIGNED TO LEAVE U BURIED
IM THE ONE U SEE IN THE SKY NIGHTLY
I FIGHT THE ADVERSARY OF LIGHT HIS BURNIN FIRE WONT SMITE ME.
I GOTTA GO CLASS OUT PEACE
iight yo yall gotta leave feedback..
u thinking to yourself damn he aint bitch like me
punches aint hit like me damn u aint no snitch like me
which is likely the reason his brain doesnt glitch like me
i know on the mic im nasty no opponent will get past me
got a style that is classy poppin faggots fastly.. lastly
i see you from K-town ayo stay down when i make u lay down cuz i gotta K now
fuck with me get outta the way clown u could get smacked wit a trepound
like chinese ppl i keep my fans out in crowd full of straight ppl u the only to stand out
ima tear this man out i got it planed out Jook$ bucked this cat then ran out..(JOOK$)
n/t your hometown
u could use some work on your structure but your punchlines and muties were good,to tell the truth u really dont need any elevation exept for your structure
This for ma niggas who be bang'n and thug'n
if you crip then you criping and you call yo other niggas yo cuz'n
if you blood then you throwing the B, red n black to a T
Chicago loving, we rocking the beat
if you folks then you throwing the fork up
stay black n blue stay tru, you'll be consider no joka
you people, then you throwing the 5, always down for homicide
stay in yo hood becuz thats were you riside
4 corner hustlas and black stones,
gangsta disciple, black disciple, green sneaky cobras and black souls
insains man they focus, vikings, and latin kings
MLD'z, duces, two six niggas, unknowns, and I.G'z
TOPIC: Lost Souls