a little tease before the dance.
youre so demanding geez lol
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@Elegant Elephant , come talk to me in here about your writing, instead of chucking a spazz in your feed.
Come explain your concept so I can try to understand it.
Your last five drops were titled...
one liner hiaku 3
my AV wants to Haiku.. dont "judge" him
2 liner haiku 3
one liner haiku
untitled 60
it makes no sense to me cause the subject matter follows suit.
What are you on about?
Thanks for the HOF Nom Emily
those are actual pieces
They're actual pieces of shit.
@Emily You do realize he's just trolling right? You have been patient every step of the way, which is admirable haha but you're feeding into the game, therefore fueling it :P
Thanks for dropping heat Truth.
I loved the sizzle.
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Do we need a translator? From English to English? I know you're American and I'm Australian but is it gonna be that hard for us to communicate?
I named your actual pieces trying to show you how confusing they are, and I explained that the subject matter was just as confusing.
And your reply is "those are actual pieces".....I know Elegant Elephant. I know they're actual pieces.
What I don't know is why you're dropping one liners, some that make absolutely no sense at all.
And I think I've been pretty lenient so far but if you're gonna keep taking the piss then watch this space...
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Humble man. Few words. Golden.
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I like to give the benefit of the doubt. More than what I should. I'm watching where this is going.
The next piece of work will be make or break.
You yourself wrote in feed of his work that he...."...ACCIDENTALLY wrote something profound ..."
I'm giving him YET ANOTHER chance.
And I'll wait to see if I step on cash or crap.
Don't let this guy shit all over your forum, Em. You have bigger cojones than most of the men on here, get rid of his doo doo before it gets on your combat boots.
I'll keep my eyes open and the beer close.
I've seen the beast many times, it's like a sour patch kid that's sour all the way through.
^That movie was so sick back in the day. I had such a thing for that mad bitch.
Fairuza Balk will always be my dream bitch.
Damn, I didn't know her name or anything haha You're a borderline stalker.
I wanna write something. I wanna feel challenged.
I want poet society back. I want the weekly challenge that made me spew about having to write.
The nerve of my confidence going balls up, swinging to neutral. Pissed me off.
Until I felt the vibrations of a mood. And then I got words.
As it seems, I'm writing to jack shit currently.
And this rant is ode to that.
i wanna weakly haha, check that spelling, and also wEEKly challlenge, HI @Elegant Elephant , I'm finally on your planet.
I wanna comp where I don't have to run it, but I want something.
And I want it NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! cause i wanna write.
I can't keep dropping haiku in that lil ol thread over yonder.
I gotta write.
Someone give me something to write.
oh
jukon
save me
save me and find someone
find someone to run something and make it where we enter and itll all be fun
i cant do this shit any longer lol lol
seriously
i love you guys but im chasing my tail and my need for passion in poetry is gonna make me get a gun licence.
@Poeta Demonio @Karaoshi
fucken do something
lol
IM OVER IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lets run a comp in chat. yep. i could run that. a comp in chat. screw legalities, the crossed t and dotted i.
Let's get a comp going in chat LOL. Love it. No order. As a member of the civil disobedience movement, I endorse this.
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@ILLunatic get me for non compliance of some law.
Writing is hard yakka sometimes. I don't tend to bother forcing it.
Sometimes I have to force myself. Last year I wrote the least I've written in 13-14 years. I did not like that shit.
I know forcing it is bad, but i also saw how a challenge made me write, when I didn't know I had it in me.
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yeah, I hear you. I think its true mayhem in the soul of a real writer when he can't write.
It's turmoil in my mind and I feel a frustration that urks me and puts me on edge.
Last chance to nominate for hof.
I'll leave it open a couple more days.
Can someone give me motivation to write something.
I need a picture or some shit.
WRITTTEEEEEEE SOMMMMEEETHHHHHIINNNNNNGGGGG YOOOOUUUUU CUNNNNTTT.
Too harsh?
@Messiah.
http://i65.tinypic.com/2wcfltg.jpg
it has to be titled "The son i never knew" and you have to entendre the shit out of it!
you know, i kind of like anyone and everyone feeling free to chuck a pic in here and letting anyone who wants to write a haiku to it.
Thanks guys for taking it on and actually writing to the pics.
not everything has to be structured and sometimes free reign is good for the soul.
So yeah, thanks people for giving this casual chat haiku thing a chance.
@Poeta Demonio @Emily , wow thanks for the nom, guys. did NOT expect that! really appreciate it, especially coming from u two.
also, Em, Jukon told me he doesnt think you can write a character sketch piece to this picture
https://vincentchongart.files.wordpr...-rain-girl.jpg
i told him....son, do u know who u dealin with?!!