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cool...this is my first SIG the one at the bottom...its kind of blah, but its my first one
i just made this DI joint in like 5min
whats everybody doing
yo i'll try out. so u want me to spit or what???
show us your skillz homie 10 lines
yo i'll try out. so u want me to spit or what???
am your ten lines at me act like your battlin me
dawg u wanted to brag, well tha only way your leavin this bitch is in a body bag// dawg i'll smoke u like dutch, puff, puff, pass exhale, i let tha breeze do mah dirty work, i leave all niggaz murked//i'm just underated on this site, pathetic, tha only way your leavin this battle is from a paramedic//I can rap to this game, all i need to do is get rich and fame, but not like tha game, but really tha only one to blame, was 50, cause he thought he was all dat n hot, but i'll tell u right now if any of u fuckers try to take my spot, i'll get all hot, wit my flow, then ya about to get ya face blow, off, just straight from tha top, and i start laughin when it just drop, now my raps are on top//let me tell u this like columbine killin spree leave ya body dead to da 3rd degree, also like titanic deductions, i'll blow u like volcanic erruptions//
so.............what do i do now????
Struc is Sloppy Ja loppy
Wordplay-was hmmmm mediocore
flow-was good at the begging toward the end it made a u-turn
Punches-not really feeling
vocab-it was better than some
self glory-yes
elevate dont hesistate that shit you just spit was i guess to demonstrate/
what ever va says i agree
you cant do nothing but get better go battle some folks get some wins ill check ya battles out
am i in?????
im not one to say im just critiquing
oh iight.. well i guess pm me whether i'm in or not, cause i'm out. peace ~1~