Elevation Thread.

that was nice nothen i see wrong wit it nice personals , nice rythm
the person who influnced me to rap
was the same person who influnced me to bust a cap//
my main homie that will always have my bacc
the first person who ever gave me a dub sacc//
my locc since way bacc n the day
befo we ever had to make money this way//
u da big loc on da blocc
i remeber the day i said i need some help N u passed me a glocc//
homie u was allways there and will never be forgot
even when im spitn on mtv @ that #1 spot //

next topic : beef

LET ME TAKE IT BACK TO BEFORE I ENTERS INTO THE RAP GAME//
WHEN I WAS IN THE STRUGGLE TO TRY TO MAKE ME ID A HOUSEHOLD NAME//
SPITTING ON THE HIGHER LEVEL CAUSE IM SMOKING THE LEAF//
EVERY CORNER I TURN THERE SOME PEOPLE WAITING FOR NEW BEEF//
BUT I GOT SOMETHING TO HANDLE ALL THEM HATERZ CAUSE WHEN I GO TO WAR MY BULLETS TAKE SHOWERS//
SPARKS FLYING BUT NEVER TAKE BULLETS CAUSE IM SOMETHING LIKE THE TERMINATOR...TO THE 3rd POWER//

NECT TOPIC=FIRST BATTLE

Picture me as the steam comin out the pot
elevating//
Step 2 the mic never second guessing nonhesitant though i'm
impatient//
Growing weary of the industry entertainers real live wankstas
talkin bout emptying chambers
but i'm a take'em to da cleaners take out da wrinkles, starch'em
hang'em up to dry no hangers//
Workin with the wrath of the ArchAngel
i'm fly without wings packin steel things
make'm you tap out like Bojangles//
Cuz they Bullwinkled bullshittin
While i keep it real keep it trille the way i'm spittin these rhymes
I'm pullin shit man//
strategize the game focus place scope on it take a breathe place aim
another hit man//
You can't see me bitches I'm tryin to get riches
Been in the trenches i'm authentic accentric//
I cut the track so deep it's gon' need some stitches
some the RB muthafuckas comin off suspicious//
hoLLa

nice dropp homie. just elevate no hate...................

man this forum is inactive. cmon peepz elevate....................

wtf u just took my name and put it in ur custom title hoe

well camo didnt leave feedback or a topic..so ill just do it for him

some of your vocab was decent, it could use a little bit of work, and you seemed like you kinda stretched out ya lines a lil, overall jus try elevatin your vocab...and fixin up some imagery...stay up homie

my first battle was decent, but i admit it was weak
80 odd posts later, im ready to give'er a lil tweak.(haha)
nah man, on a real note, ive taken the feed to heart
i make that shit build me up, not tear me apart
although i didnt win it, i was growin lyrically
im down to battle whoever tho, aint nobody scarin me
picture this, i was 14, tryna rhyme every word
what i didnt realize, it wasnt even my turn
now its my turn to shine tho, n ima keep elevatin
im like one of them old houses, i gotta keep renovatin

next topic - commitin a crime

Topic: Comitting A Crime

felonies... enemies killed to my own melodies
hatters dealt with quick cuz of their jealousies
but feins love me, cuz i distribute everything
i do what i gotta, to rock this heavy ring
and it'll leave a impression, cuz its heavy weight
impressive, but hatters mad their cash comes at a pennies rate
u made a Denny's date, im at red lobster
ur with some imposter g's while im talkin with a mobster
crimes what i do, its normal every day type shit
im doin it, livin it, yall just written n typin it

didnt leave feedback, or a new topic holmes

and do u think 1 ounce of me gives a fuck?

feeback for Malikia: "Your lyrics are so fly. And even though my son hates on you, your still the best writter on RapBattles. I love ur dick too! Malikia, Your my favorite!!" -Breez's Mom


Topic: Killing Breez...."Holmes"

your a hater, mad cuz u cant rhyme like me
your a hater, mad cuz u aint got style like me
your a hater, mad cuz u cant write good
your a hater, hattin on me cuz ur type would
your a hater, wishin you had my essence
your a hater, even though u love readin my message
your a hater, deep down u know u love me though
your a hater, made cuz the only pussy u can get is a ugly hoe

next topic: killin breez

its sad that you spelt hater wrong that many times and didnt figure it out...
and homie, if you thinkin you number 1..
why dont ya step up n battle me son

how are you going to tell me i "SPELT" something wrong??????

set the battle up if u know how, im leavin right now, so post ur verse tomorrow, pm me when ur done, and ill post mine.

spelt's a word homie, go check in the dic
unless ya too busy............................
............................learnin new "tricks"

Main Entry: spelt
Pronunciation: 'spelt
Function: noun
Etymology: Middle English, from Old English, from Late Latin spelta, of Germanic origin; perhaps akin to Middle High German spelte split piece of wood, Old High German spaltan to split -- more at SPLIT
: a wheat (Triticum aestivum spelta) with lax spikes and spikelets containing two light red kernels


u dont really wanna fuck with me u faggot, ur not up on it. get ur fuckin game up b4 u come at me like that... got it?