Elevation Thread.

That was a nice verse. Good structure and the flow kept going through the whole thing. Im gunna use his terroristy topic to dis him.

Hes back in the US a terrorist names Osama
He wants his momma, gunna fuck her with a rigid condom
Dont fuck with Osama, well last time you did that nigga bombed ya
You wack imma use his other topic to dis him, you say the devils back
Shit after me you gunna be dreaded like wyclef , and how he back when i never left

Next topic
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Antarctica

this for Terrys verse too..good nice homie I know the Cassidy thing was a joke its all good..pretty good structure..it had an iight flow.keep working on ya raps ..

Whyte Gunz that was good pretty basic but overall good..

Ill drop later gotta things to do..

Yeah Im In The Elevation Thread So Im A Think On A Higher Level
Cause I Murk Dudes That Come At Me Sideways Looking Like They Riding A Bike With One Pedal
So I Handle Dudes With My Best Friend Son
Its Not My Mom Or My Dog So All That Leaves Is My Gun
My Trigger Finger Catch Cramps Cause I Squeeze Too Hard
After School Im Hitting Everybody The Kids, The Parents And Even The Crossing Guard
So Think Twice Before You Come Out Dog Cause U Wont See Me
I'm Bringing It Back Like The Snipers In Dc
And Those That Dont Believe Me......check Your Chest Cause Im Shooting Throught The Pc

i liked that had good punches good flow..keep it up..Holla at me so we can do our Callabo


yo how could these peeps handle the heat
if they scared to creep and scared of beef
call me Chinese like Jin cuz i cook these cats
My Juelz shine when i sun dance like Cassidy
plus i toat Biggie Macs yall aint no lions where the Kitties at
looks u know Jookz and NYC r slinging these words
u in Geenwood so i know u feeling disturbed
all u got is 2 pennys n this is a all dime PUR-POSE
so Jookz and Word is ready for ON-LINE MUR-Kage..(JOOK$)


N/T how would u survive in a 3rd world country

Could work on the structure, good wordplay and stayed on topic with punches, tho none of them were hittin hard.

I'm running and gunning, motherfuckers dont want it
and when i gotta get mine, step up or step off kid
Natural causes wont kill me, this warzone is building
Dyin to live, but its these nightmares in living
Cops is crooked, thiefs is looking, hustlers be cooking
So a day at a time,selling out the trunk,and trappin on the side
But no statewide felonies, making business on nicks and dimes
But I re-up on weekends, the hood know i be on it
Hustle for the struggle, one day you'll respect it

some shit i came up wit

new topic
- whatever you do to pay your bills

i dont pay bills cuz i dont buy shit, i save money waitin to pay bills

see i dont pay bills i work n save im like a slave
i just get paid n sit n lay up in my house waitin to get a raise
cuz im a supavisa in a grocery store, n yeh i hate it
but it brings money to the table at least i "kinda" make it
happen for me n my family i wanna live good but a good payin job is hard to come by
thats why i save up for college credits to get the knowledge like the next guy
the closest thing to bills is payin for gas and a buss ride

n/t: Evolution vs God

What do you believe in science or god?
The evolution, or an invisible mod?
What made darwin, come up with apes and shit
But how could have the world, just happened by one atomic blitz
Were we born as whole, desendants of adam and eve?
Or were we born from an ape, sit back and think while i leave.
Did God make us what we are?
Or has science stepped up. Maybe gone too far?

N/T:You against racism

that was nice i liked the way u stayed on topic.. pretty good vocab.. keep it up homie

Yo I base racism as a high sate prison
theres always a way to change ya way of living
yeah ima Caucasion but im not hating
keep it real never faking n facts is what im stating
cuz it dont matter bout color
if u tight wit me then u my brother
juss listen to 2 pac cuz specifically theres a G-Place
where color vs ethicity is E-RASED..(JOOK$)

juss a lil freestyle..

n/t what would u do if u owned ur own country

my flow so lazy, sit back n blow hazey dance dirty sumtin like patrick swayzey
my talents is wut god gave me, i got gats n bullets so i call em biskets n gravy
someone save me im drownin in ill rhymes and maybe, ime be the next nigga on top crackin the whip but i aint talkin about slavery

i dunno im mad bored

new topic: killin someone just make it bloody and horrible

yo smart guy you supposed to leave feedback so i suggest you do it next time

^^Did that have anythin to do with the topic Jookz set, no.

I step on the head of a man who i just killed,
leave him lyin in his death bed, blood drained and drug pilled
I understand he was another man and shit
But he tryed ta wreck ma clan, so he got hit instead.
Now i remenice and wish i wasn't so develish
When i popped his head and dishelved his body, and took the piss
I taunted him while i commited the crime
What i did.......Is to atrocious for this rhyme

N/T: Being kidnapped

Nice Flow Pakeveli Walking Through The Alley With The Lights Dim//
Seeing A Jeep Roll By And Someone Screamin Out ''its Him!!'' ''its Him!!'//'
Waking Up In Darkness And Notice That Somebody Stole My Heat//
I Feel Around To See Where Im At And Notice Im In A Backseat//
I Could Hear The Jeep Pull Off An Burn Rubber//
The Only Person I Could Think About Is My Mother//
Now Im With No Protection And Im In Enemy Lines//
Its Crazy What Goes Through Your Mind When Your Whole Life Pass Before Your Eyes//
To Throw In A Joke Im Hoping My Kidnappers Or Girls Who Think Im Hansom //
But I Soon Noticed That It Was Dudes Holding Me Hostage For Ransom//
Now I Got The Gun To My Head Like Damn I Cant Even Say Goodbye To My Peeps//
Im Telling Them That Niggas Is Gonna Be Looking For You Once This Hits The Streets//
Thats When I Get Smaked With The Glock And My Lights Is Out Again//
Getting Thrown Back Into The Alley...where It All Began//
With My Back To The Pavement And My Face To The Sky//
Thinking About Your Life Getting Took Gets A Nigga Sensitive....but Thugz Dont Cry//
Next Topic=the Hard Struggle

word i've seen u round here alot
u know u good so there much i can say other than ur shits pretty damn hot

lookin behind my life was just a struggle
I know some where down the line i should have tumbled
but i staid tuff never 2 let it let me crumble
i cant realy relate 2 the thug life
but metaphorically it was much like
ruthless peaple just hatin, kickin me over for no ryme or reason why
but like i said i stuck it tuff
i cant take you all on at once but
i'll be sure to retaliate some how in pure syphany discust
ooooo boys i told u it was comin, sweet revenge
all of yours n then sum, the greed will bleed outta me till the end
it felt like my soul had reimbersed and reamerged once agen
now u can figure how the rest goes
i caressed one of those queers wit my fist 2 his nose
blood just scwergin me jist stopin on his face till his bones exposed
but by that i didnt prove shit 2 nobody but that one little bitch
regressed some of my own anger but that was about it
but this viciuos circle just doesnt end till someone gets murked then its ur turn ta git hit

u being one of the colombinist

that was pretty good..juss work on ya structure n spelling.. and some of the things u said didnt really make sense.. but overall good..


I got bullets bigger then midgets n blades that r rigid
how u gonna talk about the struggle when u never lived it
u dont smoke u juss pass blunts
u think u hott juss cuz u joined last month
I gotta crew for u.. with some news stating u far from the best
heres some clues for u..u couldnt be wild if u lived out west
this is juss 8 bars and it toped ya whole verse
yeah i rate stars..and u gotta be the worst
Im not Juelz but Im what the games been missin
u never seen blood unless it came form a chicken(JOOK$)

n/t who influenced u to rap