u guys want a peep sneak of my OM?
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u guys want a peep sneak of my OM?
yea go on then
Feelings of this being,for he has been left out no one hears his out cries
lack of breathing and him barley teathing,leads up to why his mouth dries
gangs and rape on video tape, shouting north,east,west and south side
a girl hoping for mercy as a deranged rapiest has her on couch tied
Sin's commited by these maniacs,and only spend six nights in jail
and if you want to know the truth the #1 killer is life it's self
as I feel the pain in sorrow of life in a hard place to raise children
the rage building,to overcome this life to the next as brave civilian
as of aids consealed him death his promised,on short notice of life
thinking and and drinking to conclude,thoughts of death every night
Holy sucess of him thinking to be the best,and nothing to confess
judging him the same as the rest,led to another unsloved death
like a task that you must do or die,tried to think of something quickly
then consiplated suicide,and shouts "If I have to go your coming with me"
Gun shots on his once boss,who thought of himself to be an onslaught
then mind control without being brainwashed,sobered in dumb thoughts
tough of luck,and he was buckled up,and he managed to still die
Died slow in the collision,family found out released there built cries
The way I see it,the way you recieve is the way you won't give
and for so if you wish not to die,I'll suggest that you don't live
pshit, ima write a few lines on mine.
dats gd man goes in deep n its serious foreal
makes you think and wonder
word I'll key up a quick 10 too finish
Meh, I'm making my next OM short...want to get it done before tonight...probably 16-20 lines.
yea for real i think a limit on oms should be 30 lins mac co den ppl sleep on it coz its 2 long
well I work on like 3 OM's at 1 time wanna see my 2nd one? it's kinda short
can somebody tell me the name of the song at the beggining of this video?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dl1x-EhgdFE
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Originally Posted by Glitch
yea post it up if u want
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Originally Posted by lyr!cal m!racle
dawg it says the name der, no love
im talkin bout that old school song that comes on b4 the real one does.Quote:
Originally Posted by lOOks
oooh i dnt know homie
Memories of the past and broken hearts leading to a trial of tears
the passion of life and the secrets,that have been held for years
somewhat a regret for what has happened in the violent history
mistreatings,beatings,the reasons remains an unsolved mystery
life scars and soul mates,heart was just a large bruise,being abused
anytime,the harrasment has never been excused,often when refused
sudden relief of stress when escaped from these tragic events
it was a living nightmare the haunted horror from past tense
heart brake during the harsh history of burried incidents
created from a sinner but still living to barely sentence it
in the words not being able to describe except,a living hell
the nice life and excitement...a fraud she wasn't living well
giving birth every nine months father never seen the child
a distance not knowing the feet and yards,between these miles
Learning a different language like reading a whole grammar guide
....the life is just as bizzare as pistol fights against a samurai
but things have changed,now living the life of a celeberty
weightless cries in the past,but the tears raised heavily
as good as it will ever be,blind innocents that she could never see
The vindictive thoughts will not let the heart get me
because a easy future,symbolizes a harsh history
...............
We should collab man.Quote:
Originally Posted by Wireless
yo dats clever man its like an introduction to a movie or sum one narating it i like the way u set it up real gd and creative keep it up man.
If any1 would like to jump on that verse in Green could jump on the OM with me
Bleh, im posting my new OM in 15 minutes...dunno how people will like it, though?
What you mean in Green?Quote:
Originally Posted by Glitch
it is in Green letters
I like 3 topicals to do, but what's the topic and I'll kick something for you.
yo u niggas hold it down for a while ill be back in 30 minutes i need 2 holla at my jump off real fast aight peace ill be back asap
Werd I'm to tell my JO to come over so I can some head while I'm writingQuote:
Originally Posted by lOOks
just a Cruel History and then the character eventually looks back at all the things that happened to them when they are famous or whatever....you got it?
how many lines?
i suck at oms
16+ lines thats wall I'm askin of a minimum of 16 I'll be back in about 20 minutes peace
good luck with yall shit
RECLEZ you should get in this crew
new 25 min OM up..lol..
When you think you gon have it done by?
I've done 10 lines already, I'll be done shortly.Quote:
Originally Posted by Glitch
Glitch idk homie right now im running solo plus every single crew fall off anyway the only crew i no that never fell off was lyricals finest even it aint taht good of a crew and i can go through most of the people on the roster
bleh at LF.
bleh at malicious i don't like him
Lyrical Finest has always been gay to me man
i don't like LF etheir west is coo tho
There are a few good people in there...but they talk mad shit..
juan can you get that gay stuff outta your sig and you callin me a fag man