Lost Souls...Back Again [[!!TRYOUT!!]]

yo check out my rhymes on da free agent forum, c wat ya think

no get out ur horrible....

uh huh! fuck up

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Originally Posted by .:KLePTo:.

yeah i have to agree wit spicy on that one......i thought your first couple of bars was good...but you kind of lost afterthat... i think you was messing up your flow by stretchin your lines a lil to much....still wasnt a bad verse though

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Originally Posted by Spicy_One

lust go look at the feed man, i think he got you on that one man........but i thought urs wasnt bad either.....

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iight thanks.........I'll not do the 3 line punch....and I'll keep my lines shorter.....thnx

Da King.....I dont know what everyone else thinks, but I say no.....you need to elevate

ok cool

Pac-Man in.

*starts to break dance while kicking shellz in nuts* o sorry :D

wut up fam?

LMAO at D..

sup Klep

sup crew

nothin much you?

shit nuthin Shellz...gettin hungry fixin to grab a bite

nmjc homie

lol and um shellz .... :bored: *smacks* y u put urself in a crew twice people know its u..