Metaphor/ Simile cypher

wow...only saw like two that were ANY good...yall gotta dig a lil deeper...for real...heres some...

see, im commited, like a mental patient with insomina
i never sleep, im always workin, on a song with tha
lyrics of tha strongest uh, psycho off his medicine
i do it big, like im Odysseus, cuz tha flow is epic mayn

and

u aint even so-so mayn, yall bout as good as souljaboy
i ground up rappers in drink em to wake up like its folders boy

and

no u cant hold me boy, i randy moss em now
somethin like a Jeezus freak, tha way i cross em out

and

yall suck, just kick dust, n then ya ride out
back to tha legion of fags cuz thats where ya hide out

and

ud die for money? thats right, i might even put my dick in it
cuz im in love with my money, thats why we always kickin it

and

mayn aint u whack, call me tha rap abortionist
cuz they aint ready for ya kid, aint that unfortunate?

lets see some more bars guys...

ok king,
am a majician i dont care who i diss
i diss mr and dismiss

am a good boy only in the bed room

you were born crushed i pressed your mother's womb

i would have born early but the was trafic on the fallopian tube

i did'nt wait for my father to have sex i come out of his mouth
thsts why am talkative

i cut off roses to bake my own cake
get it?? we bake wit flower

this isnt a battle thread...learn to read plz...DROP METAPHORS...

ayo, a rain checks only time kids push the wait

you a faggit, talking a good game like hello
so you know I gotta stick ya like a marsh mellow

My skill eclipses bitches, my vicious quips are just delicious
So they eat that shit like fried inspiration

Its sad, not funny, that we give our money to tellers
Indeed, money talks, but its ears are much better

I'm way beyond the new shit -- no one even touches
Because I provide my talent in massive proportions -- like dutches

yall niggas to weak,always being dumped by chick,in a no dumpin area,

Feelin' claustrophobic,
I'm a basilisk locked in a closet, hopin', there's a faucet goin'.

My brain's fucked, ill mind like I'm Hopsin
My style is so hard, that's why they say it rocks man
This shit I'm dumpin' like I shot one
Playa my game had me ballin' from shot one
I'm off the wall like a paintin' that falls
And I punched over ya building sucka, Deck the Halls

I got the sickest doses, don't take it you'll get dystonia.
I amplify a girls screams, 3x than her moaning bruh.
Giving haters condiments from the heavens, call it Miracle Whip.
All the haters telling me they won't fall, they got Miracle Slipped.
I'm making these haters sleepy, insomniacs.
I'm taking the fin out of finish, you noticed that?

You ran outta time like now you gotta use oregano

You ran out of time, like I took your watch I dipped

You ran outta lines like grocery store emergencies

Adjective placements aren't well, like if in English class you failed

You're like an assasination gone wrong, a bad set up
A yellow man because he's scared, like his red blood cell count won't get up

(jaundice {look it up}, in case you lack braincells as well like shock therapy in prison)