Elevation Thread.

JookZ yow rhymes were a bit all over the place and didn't have a set in stone content, you need to think about what your saying some of the time coz it aint what convinces people you're a G UNIT

Yo don't mind cizzy he's high off some crack, an so what if u guys wish you were black,
aslong as you dont mind wack attacks from cizzy like that ^,
its all in jest, and it ain't the best,
yo its freezin, an im only wearing a vest, :|
vexed? perplexed by these mazy, hazy rejects?
yes? we dont give a fuck like we had 20 bottles of becks, (beer over here you daft ameriCANTS)
next time you load rapbattles.com up,
do me an cizzy an favour, and fookin LIGHTEN UP!!!

B UNIT OUT!!!

n/t when animals attack!

you had as ok vocab structer was off the punches was weird and your shit was not as good as you think it was overall ill give you a 6/10

ok check it out this dudes topic is when animals attack
sayin we wish we was black...prooves that he's the one on crack
look here terry dont think for a second that ya rhymes was dope
cuz they more than that...no they not there just wack
with punchlines that come back to back and ya verse full of fillers
dont evn get started talkin bout drug dealer and fuckin killers
cuz how the fuck do you expect to win with shitty shit like that
dont get mad homie elevate and listen uo to face the facts


just some off top shit

next topic = thoughts and opinions on GOD

ya punches were alright, woulda liked to see more on the topic "when animals attack"
maybe up ya vocab a little
thought it was ok overall tho

ok so heres "thoughts and opinions on God" real quick

in reference to God, is there truly one correct thought?
i find it odd, how many different disciplines are taught
if you ask me, i believe in the one creator, only my one God
but then again ask middle-eastern brethren, and theyll give ya Allah
what matters is not who gets glory, or how He looks in pictures
its the meanings of His stories, the importance of His scriptures
if all people could agree for one moment in time
and rely on His signs, everything would be fine
we'd live in unity for eternity on Heaven and Earth you see
because two becomes one in a Utopian society
so follow which ever religion youre given and just hold on to the faith
for faith is rewarded by wisdom, and love, and by strength

so there ya go kinda quick but whatever

n/t= armageddon

you had some good opinions and thoughts on that subject i liked it b/c i like subjects that can be deep as long as you can use them right

me personally i cant wait till armegeden it'll come so quick
it'll have me all up in heaven with out worryin about shit
i dont know what will happen when it really comes
all i know is i pray god will forgive me for packin ak's with heavy drums
how can i be worried there nothin to worry about
when it does come ima thank god to my-self and out loud
perepleigic mutha fuckaz will be goin to fuckin hell
thats there choice im just sayin fuck it............oh well


next topic = how you would pass a important test

If The Study Time Is Up And Done
I'll Just Copy Off The Next One
Come To Class That Day With Sweaty Palmes And Dry Throat
Taking My Mind Off The Test By Folding My Paper Into A Boat
Try To Switch Seats To Sit The Smart Brain
Take The Test And Get A Good Grade
Spend The Whole Time Looking At The Girls Chest
And That How I Would Pass An Important Test

nice job definently needs some elevation but over all good

i'm silent will i love my one homie my nine mill yet still some gangstas wanna step well they got 2 choices fell how real i am or feel my cold steel and butnin lead until they shot dead just for what they said he lien gaspin for breath and i pop him in the head till he bled out and he thought i was a fake ass what the fuck was he talkin about

Whats The Topic We Spitting About Now?

just freestyle man just freestyle

WOW you need to elevate alot.. that was way to short..you need better punches and better structure.

i will silently ruin your carear
im violently the one you should fear
i noticed that u from way upstate
ya style is 100% FAT so stay off the cupcakes
this is the evil lyrical genius in the truest form(look at his sig)
the author of the leanest meanest MCs yet to be born
ok Mr noweight with eighty three posts
i know you dont like beef so do u prefer meatloaf??(JOOK$)

n/t who is your favorite rapper

Oh Word I Was Gonna Compliment You On Your Verse//
But Fuck It Now Cause I Dont Give Reapect To Dudes Who Carry A Purse//
You Got 257 Posts Dog You Should Be Nicer Than That//
Im Hotter Than U And Deep Down U Know Its A Fact//
You Aint Shit Homie Im A Leave Your Name In A Song//
Listen Man Before U Spit At Me...you Spelled Career Wrong//
This Aint Even Half Of Half My Skill Let Alone My Brain//
But I Got This Nigga Sprung Like T-pain

that was nice dissin me..but you should left some feedback..

like sling shots call me the word Slinga
when things pop i put up the ubsurd finga
i know u sick wit it cuz i spit dieases
try to catch up wit my flow u'll catch fatigueness
being that wack makes it seem u dissin every one in ya sig
Newton ill break u down bar for bar thats what i fig
ya reason for rap... well we no the purpose
cuz lyrically ill leave this homo below the surface..(JOOK$)

you gotta leave feedback..

n/t Is CASSIDY innocent

Listen Dog It Took You 30 Minuted To Drop That Wack Shit?
Im A Give You Something To Nod To And Stomp Your Feet With
You Got Potential Dog I Aint Gonna Lie
But Jooks Is What I Call Niggas After They Die
Yeah You See The Sigs Dog We The Hottest Crew
The Only Thing Im Getting Tired Of Is Murkin U

This is the elevation thread you daft shit. You're supposed to give feedback about the post above you and then either write about the topic left or diss the guy who posted.

Stop fuwkin' it up for the rest of us please. Some of us take this thread VERY seriously.

You aint even left me a topic to rhyme on.

:th_down: :thumbsdow

damn you need to do more then elevate..honestly that sucked but juss stay in this thread and hopefully youll get better.. you need to work on everthing..

if they dont leave a topic diss they ass
old school rhymes..man get out the past
85 you need to be on ya oxy-gen mac-hine
dont hate on G-unit cuz u aint "POPPIN THEM THINGS"
you rap in a home outside of ENG
get slaped in the dome and explode like TNT
ya mom gets on the phone with the EMT
EEWW you talking bout Cizzys dick
damn you crazy but the question's "is he sick"(homo)..(JOOK$)


n/t my topic earlier..Is CASSIDY innocent