Tha Remix v. MC Rory Breaker

10-12 lines (5-6 bars)
No D/R, Hate Votes, all that.
You spit first.

hey man can we make 15-20 lines?............................................ ....................................

Yeah, that's cool. I'll make the changes right now.....
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thank you....... do i spit first or you?.............................................. ..........................

Crap, I can't make the changes, It isn't working, but it is still OK for 15-20 lines. All voters make sure they know this.

ok cool.................................... i'm almost done wit my rhyme........................................

You spit first, I'll drop after that.........
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actually 10-12 lines is better for me........sorry i was eating............................................ .....

I'm an ill lyricist like king kong hear me roar//
I'ma tko this shit and have u yellin' NO MORE!//
Like busta "call an ambulance" cuz you gon' need-one//
Man u couldn't spit quick if u were "boricua" like big-pun//
I gotta big-one no not that silly fagg, a big-gun and it's just for you//
I'm spittin' kid while u playin' games like jump rope and skip-to-my-lou//
Steppin' to me is like steppin' to tha plate of an all-star game of baseball//
I'ma finish this off before he elevates haha "IF" he elevates just in case-y'all//
So with tha ending of this shit allow me to switch it up quick//
Tha way i spit will make u shit bricks while ur girl lickin' my dick//
I'm out for now as i leave you with a lyrical scar of defeat//
I'm tha king of these forums so sit back down in your seat//

Whatever, just spit your verse, and I'll drop afterwards.
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good luck.............................................. .................................................. .......

Tha Remix, The newbe thinks he's got skills,
But I'll make sure to show this guy the drills.
Brother, the only Remix you need is for your style,
I am the Judge and Jury, and this is your trial.
You wanna challenge me, Well you gotta have the crazies,
After this battle, you'll be pushing a lot of daisies.
This is your orientation, after this you'll enter the fray,
You gotta learn to challenge an MC that won't blow you away.
Now I know you're new to this, and you're gonna have to learn,
If you keep up the Herb ways, you're gonna crash and burn.
When this battle ends, hopefully you'll gain a thing or two,
Like some skills and flow after your pitiful debut.

not bad not bad.......i ain't a newby to this rap game just to RB...............................................

i liked tha remix. he had betta flow n' punches good battle tho

thanks hostile spitter........but can u poll vote cuz i see u have over 100 posts........... thank you props to rory breaker

omg man you lookin to go to the top you remix
bro for a 8 poster you got skillz but not enoughtto beat this guy

rory=vote

props to remix i was shitty when i started out but you looking to go to the top

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ghlight=spirit
hitmine up please ^^

i liked tha remix. he had betta flow n' punches good battle tho could u guyz just peep my battles?

Thanks to both of you.......please keep droppin' honest votes and don't vote for breaker just cuz i'm new.......

nice word rhymes .

i don't get it?........................................... and how did u avoid tha 100 character limit?......lol

tha remix is off da hook

thanks man......can u please poll vote though otherwise it's kinda pointless....if u have over 100 posts anyways

remix got this in my opinion he had better punchesand flow, props to both tho nice battle
Vote - Remix

thanks crysis i appreciate that.............................................. ...........props to mc rory breaker

please uppin' for more votes............................don't sleep.............................................

I'm upping this, my first one, don't sleep on this battle, this guy has skills, and you will be reading more from him I am sure.

Man...

If every line Remix spit had been as good and tight as his "borrica/big pun" line...

He'd have won this battle easily...

But, unfortunately, that's the only one of it's kind that I saw.

Breaker came steady all the way with solid punches and blasted the closer.

Good work...

Remix, ya have potential, but ya IN NO WAY can battle with lines like, "skip to my lou"...

Just isn't and will never win battles.

am i that guy? lol......................uppin for more votes this is my 2nd up..................................

3rd............................................... .................................................. ............

i was feelin rory cuz he had (not a lot) but some personal punches and when you have that it gives ya verse a feel of more dissin.....plus i think his was a little more original

poll vote=rory

just wondering but how did he have personal punches?..........just wondering for some good criticism

he used your name like once or twice which made it towards your.........but yours coulda went towards anyone....................my voting is fucked up right now so tha votes are still tha same peep my battle with emcee abilities when he spits!

oh ok i get it.......................well it was obviously directed towards him......thanks for voting..........

my vote goes to Tha Remix his verse was better and punches were more consistent ...they also hit harder...wordplay was iight


vote- Tha Remix

This battle wasn't worth votin on
it was obvious it was a newbe battle
But here's some advice for both of ya'll if u want success on this site
Upp the vocab a lil, and bring harder punchlines
no hate tho
~1~

I'm upping this, my first one, don't sleep on this battle, this guy has skills, and you will be reading more from him I am sure.

who me??????.......................................... 4th up................................................ ....

Upping this for votes...tight newbie battle, you don't see many of those, let's get some votes, alright.

uppin' for my last time.............................................. ...........................................

i would give it to tha remix better punchlines and vocab, but i cant vote :( could you give an honest vote on this?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&pagenumber=3