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Ed Casey - I should write a Book!
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Up.
sickness up.
voice is gay
flow was iight, I don't think this was freestyled
agree^^^ The voice was kinda annoyin
But this wasn't a freestyle ben.... it was wrote on how he shuld write a book over it........
Flow wuz decent..... Delivery was shaky cuz sometimes it seemed ya slurred ya words or maybe it was the effect ya put on ya vocals cuz i couldnt really understand em for like the first 30 seconds...... Lyrics couldn't tell cuz it was hard to understand ya but im sure if ya worked on the way ya delivery was and made your voice more clear this song would be good...... Can't give all that much feed as i couldnt really hear the lyrics and beat wuz wierd also.....
RTF - http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=329284
i dunno the effects sorta do fuck it up... but it sounds like your tryna 2 sound like lil wayne on this track too.... i cant really give feedback.. hah cuz i dont want 2.. all i can say is work on it mann...
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yea it was aight tho still
but freestylin isnt about a book...
its all in your head
PEACE
Nice Track . keep it up .
Word again your quality is bizzare but still I aint gonna lie your lyrics on this were sick. I dont get why a lot of people hating on this lyrically this was very sick your style needs working on just cause sometimes its not that clear I think its just ur mixing you need to get down and then youll be str8.
return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=326130
get a new mic, freestyle is okay. the way u flip is cool
i couldn't really tell what u was sayin most the time, but id freestyle battle you.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=329360
get at that
preciate all the love & hate..
& to those who think its not freestyle....thx, thats a compliment...
& I aint try to make the qwality good, I was just bull shittin......
Just provin my pointe that rappin is to easy....gone
oyea check out the other freestyles under the battle section of my siggy.......thx
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Originally Posted by Edward Casey
dog... respect is respect... but this wasn't a freestyle... in the least. and when are you going to try to make the quality good and stop bullshittin..?
maybe by freestyle he means, i wrote this very fast!
no way was this a freestyle you are so full of shit
I free'd the first part..fucked up half way threw...cut it...then free'd the second part....what is so hard to fuckin believe?
I dont write no more....the only time I write is when Im battlin & I need a good personal...or in a text battle.
But thx for the comments...my homeboy is over here laughin becuz I told him yall dont believe I free'd that..lol
Owell...I guess I'll just keep pumpin em out till yall believe it...gone
go into yahoochat
if your so Ill then you should be able to freestyle while using the words I throw at you...we'll both do it
you have a s/n?
Thought casey died,
sounds like your talking out your nose or somthing
your voice is anoying
your mic is shit, stop thinking so damn high of yourself, you're not greatQuote:
Originally Posted by Edward Casey
wait what homie? then thats not a freestyle. who cares about what your homeboy thinks, fact is you stopped the recording when you fucked up..everybody fucks up, shoulda just kept with it. not stop and spit another verse full of shit you remember. thats not freestyling, what the fuck?Quote:
Originally Posted by Edward Casey
doesnt matter how many u pump out until u actually prove it
remembered some old shit?Quote:
Originally Posted by enef
did you not here me say i dont write....& how do I get a s/n..I'll do that word throwin shit....I do that shit everyday anyway...it aint nothin to prove the truth....a wise man told me...dont try to prove...just do it
& enef, you sound like your mad that im sick...probly just a inner hate you have for yourself becuz you know you cant freestyle like that & that I free better than you can write on a good day...but thats life...
bwahahahahaha
okay
Im glad you understandQuote:
Originally Posted by enef
why do you have 200 posts in a matter of a month and a half?
cool guy
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Originally Posted by enef
cause we kept banning him... for about a good 3 month stretch... but dog you say it's a free... it's a free... word.
wait, youve banned him how many times and he still posting?
dude needs a life
they banned me..cuz I was battlin the mods like fuck it...lol
But yea its a free.....one of one million
dog don't cloud the truth with your Sith lies... We banned you because you were super annoying... you battled me... and lost horribly... when I didn't try... Eddy don't get it twisted man...Quote:
Originally Posted by Edward Casey
How am I being annoying..this is my thread & your in it...im not talkin shit in your thread....your like a stalker of mine or some shit
I kilt you...you just have more Dick ryders than me..you dont even freestyle....your a fan
& dont bann me for this..you started it...we can battle again if you want..but you cant get lucky twice..so you wont do nothin that stupid
youve got two names? damn yo, that shit is pathetic as fuck
wanna battle?
dog... read it. You killed me..? be serious... I said you were annoying... all past tense... duke you want to get owned again... let me know. real talk... I'll take you to rapmusic and son the fuck out of you infront of your heros... watch your mouth duke... you didn't battle "the mods" you battle me for RB "President" of your own free will... hell you made the "RB Presidency" up yourself... come on man... you and I BOTH know... You can't win. Stop with the jokes.Quote:
Originally Posted by Brandon Heat
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you dont wanna battleQuote:
Originally Posted by (E)=m(C)2
ill embarrass you.
why instead of a yes or no answer..people always say that...that shit is most obvious form of ducking ive ever seen...it alows the challenged the oppertunity to look unshook when in reality he is....PFfft...wat a dykeQuote:
Originally Posted by enef
I listened to brandon n ur battle awhile back. Liked your verse better. Anyways as for this freestyle... I dono mane i'm gettin kinda tired of your voice, flows purdy good and lyrics are good for freestyle, with some diff mixing techniques you would sound alot better, N make thangs a lil more catchy..
yea, im ducking. got cash?
lol@"i battled the mods"...
obviously you didn't battle me...
not like i'd actually battle you or nothin tho... just sayin... i missed that week you battled the mods.
"not that i'de actually battle you or nuthin" ??? I am by no means on anyones dick so plz don't go there... I'm jus sayin, why not?