[Crew Battle]JOOKZ Vs. tuCKzz [TB VS AS]

JOOKZ Vs. tuCKzz
The Bo$$e$ Vs Artistic Sydnicates


due date-7:00 PM EASTERN TIME
line limit- 15 line MAXX
HOUSE RULES
NO DRing
checkin 2day or tommorrow
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checkin in...............good luck................

100 post 2 vote in this battle

................................iight.. im bout to drop

ok.. check

quit rappin... its the only way you can bring people joy
if rappin was football, this kid would be the waterboy
da bosses? if you guys say your good and its true...
then how come Syco_187 keeps beggin to join our crew?
.. you guys have no future.. but me, ima be a rap star
puttin a rock in your mouth and spitten it out
............is the only way you could spit stuff thats hard
man, in this battle im the hammer, and Jooks is a nail
his rhymes are older that food than gone stail
you done, finished, your punches are never hittin....
while im on some Pop'eye shit, eatin Jooks up like spinage
im like Mike Tison before he retired throwen these hard punches
i deliver what people want quick.. like fast food lunches
your crew is done kid.. in this battle A.S is takin the trophy home
we are mutha fucken kings.. YOU CANT remove us from our thrones

nice verse.......tuckzz

thanks ex.........................................

yeah......tight drop....pm me when he spits n ill vote....

....................iight no doubt homie...........

np.......

hmm.. i guess he didnt feel like showing??????????????

The Nigga Aint Even Online Yet Maybe The Hurricane Blew His House Away

.................................................. ....lol

Naw 4real On Someshit He From Florida Ithink The Hurricane Hit There Today And Fucked Up The Wires And Cable Wires Over There And Shit Adr Aint On Chicho Aint On See What I Been

Mean***

yeah.. i see what you mean.. my grandfather lives down there, and he lost all of his power.

iight

if this cat was grass i'd be mowin tuckzz
this bout to be worse than murda mook vs. loaded lux
i'll bust in ya bitches inside and call it loaded fucks
let a nigga try to plot im loaded fucks
and if ya team wanna be prezidents, you'll be loaded bucks(dead presidents)
actin like your lines could use, move or lose me
you are wat you eat your girl tell you, smooch me coochie
you buy her jewls, i juss call her mi groupie
my jewls love to speak, so live n let stare
but u might get blinded if u look ya next glare
oh ya boy's move guns and they got techs, where?
you not a man you just a big bitch wit chest hair
drop the basket ball lines, stop ya dribble
im a really big guy and hot you little
why i call your girl my car is not a riddle
cuz i treat her juss like my hood and pop her middle
they say u fucked with the wrong peeps
cuz they'll leave ya face with cracks in it like concrete...(JOOK$)

uppin 1.................................................

quit rappin... its the only way you can bring people joy
if rappin was football, this kid would be the waterboy
^^not a hot punches... but okay^^
da bosses? if you guys say your good and its true...
then how come Syco_187 keeps beggin to join our crew?
^^thatz tight^^
.. you guys have no future.. but me, ima be a rap star
puttin a rock in your mouth and spitten it out
............is the only way you could spit stuff thats hard
^^okay^^
man, in this battle im the hammer, and Jooks is a nail
his rhymes are older that food than gone stail
^^ha ha that was aight^^
you done, finished, your punches are never hittin....
while im on some Pop'eye shit, eatin Jooks up like spinage
^^ok ok i liked that^^
im like Mike Tison before he retired throwen these hard punches
i deliver what people want quick.. like fast food lunches
^^good^^
your crew is done kid.. in this battle A.S is takin the trophy home
we are mutha fucken kings.. YOU CANT remove us from our thrones
^^an okay closer could have been better^^

now............... jookz verse
if this cat was grass i'd be mowin tuckzz
this bout to be worse than murda mook vs. loaded lux
^^hmm.... not hot^^
i'll bust in ya bitches inside and call it loaded fucks
let a nigga try to plot im loaded fucks
^^rhymes "fucks" twice boooooo^^
and if ya team wanna be prezidents, you'll be loaded bucks(dead presidents)
^extra line n shit... NOOOOO^^
actin like your lines could use, move or lose me
you are wat you eat your girl tell you, smooch me coochie
^^okay^^
you buy her jewls, i juss call her mi groupie
^^dammit another extra line^booooo
my jewls love to speak, so live n let stare
but u might get blinded if u look ya next glare
^weak son^^ weak^^
oh ya boy's move guns and they got techs, where?
you not a man you just a big bitch wit chest hair
^^hmm... not too good^^
drop the basket ball lines, stop ya dribble
im a really big guy and hot you little
^^BOOOOOOO^^ do i have to say that agian?
why i call your girl my car is not a riddle
cuz i treat her juss like my hood and pop her middle
^^weak man.. what doez his chick have to do with thiz?^
they say u fucked with the wrong peeps
cuz they'll leave ya face with cracks in it like concrete...(JOOK$)
^^not not not^^

okay my conclusion is, that tuckzz came with a better flow overall. his punches & disses were stronger. jookz, i dont know what you were doing but that was not good. that was extreme bullshit. your flow was completely off i barely understood it while i read. the structure... oh my jesus, that was horrible.... hideous. you acme with "some" good lines but they were a mess not formed out well. tuckzz came with a nice flow, the bars were in nice structure and his vocab was more on point came with creativity at times. jooks, you ahd nothing creative nor interesting in your shit. seriously n honestly... elevate... improve....

vote/tuckzz
no hate
much luv
1

uppin 2............................come on lets get some votes

yo juss cuz u wack doesnt mean ppl cant understand my flow..BITCH ASS..uppin for 1

lol........nigga come at my crew 1 mo time fagget do it do it!

...............................is Jooks talkin to me?

idk....but he didnt say anything back......guessin he wass

uppin................................to get it closed

yo mooks i was talkin bout lady streetz..shes loca en la cabessa..but its all good come on ppl uppin for votes....1

uppin 4...........come'on people lets get some votes

Quote:

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Originally Posted by JOOKZ

yo mooks i was talkin bout lady streetz..shes loca en la cabessa..but its all good come on ppl uppin for votes....1

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get off my dick ya'll lucky to even get a fuckin vote tired of these crying ass bitches. shut the fuck up. aint my fault you came shitty mothafucka....

yo u gonna be a cry baby...dont be mad cuz u cant rap MOOK..iight yo uppin for votes lets get it closed....

iight MOOKS come on and vote...lets get this one closed...

yo come on and vote ill vote in anybodys battle that votes in this 1...

damn this shit still aint closed damn good luck

if this cat was grass i'd be mowin tuckzz
this bout to be worse than murda mook vs. loaded lux
i'll bust in ya bitches inside and call it loaded fucks
let a nigga try to plot im loaded fucks
and if ya team wanna be prezidents, you'll be loaded bucks(dead presidents)
actin like your lines could use, move or lose me
you are wat you eat your girl tell you, smooch me coochie
you buy her jewls, i juss call her mi groupie
my jewls love to speak, so live n let stare
but u might get blinded if u look ya next glare
oh ya boy's move guns and they got techs, where?
you not a man you just a big bitch wit chest hair
drop the basket ball lines, stop ya dribble
im a really big guy and hot you little
why i call your girl my car is not a riddle
cuz i treat her juss like my hood and pop her middle
they say u fucked with the wrong peeps
cuz they'll leave ya face with cracks in it like concrete...(JOOK$)
__________________

vs.

quit rappin... its the only way you can bring people joy
if rappin was football, this kid would be the waterboy
da bosses? if you guys say your good and its true...
then how come Syco_187 keeps beggin to join our crew?
.. you guys have no future.. but me, ima be a rap star
puttin a rock in your mouth and spitten it out
............is the only way you could spit stuff thats hard
man, in this battle im the hammer, and Jooks is a nail
his rhymes are older that food than gone stail
you done, finished, your punches are never hittin....
while im on some Pop'eye shit, eatin Jooks up like spinage
im like Mike Tison before he retired throwen these hard punches
i deliver what people want quick.. like fast food lunches
your crew is done kid.. in this battle A.S is takin the trophy home
we are mutha fucken kings.. YOU CANT remove us from our thrones
__________________


jookz- ur gettin better ....be more creative but not bad

Tuckz- not bad either......decent wordplay and punches wins u this battle

v/tuckz

thanxs for being honest..Tuckzz is good ill admit that.but uppin for votes..

iight yo uppin for at least one vote..lol..lets close this...

yo lets get this closed yall can read but not vote thats some shit!!!!!!!!

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=244687

Vote on that^^^

Mayne this waz nuthin 2 tuckz.................he had betta punchez...........betta flo...........structure waz o.k............tha personalz were a tie........multiz.........none........metaz none..........Vote Tuckz........hit up my battle yo please........itz a crew battle

uppin for closure votes... come'on get this closed

v-tuckzz,for better pucnhes, and wordpla, but both of ya need to elavate

Uppity Uppity 4 Tuckz................................