Wogzta be da dopest foo

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=162083
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=162118

... check it b check it

yo yo yo check my flow, i wreck the show
Stretchin hoes, pick me up from da record sto'
I slice with rhymes, entice with lines
Word, when im on the mic im tite
you're super homo, you hurt your butt
your wack and gay... word you suck
My punchlines are dope, i bust rhymes on hoes
w00t wogztas spittin this shit
who's else gonna be rippin it bitch
Only one, your folks are done, i load a gun
Then i blow ya up, like a soldier does
You cant touch me, im spittin it tight
I just ate a kebab, biggest burp i did in my life
your a dumb bitch, i run shit
You be scared as fuck when my gun clicks
Wtf you think you are, you aint got shit on me homie
Ima pimp motherfucker, bro check my multies
I was pimpin on my PC when i heard you rip
You suck plus you're sweaty, word you stink
Cos your sweating like a horny wanker should be
Word my flows sick, im a gangsta textcee

word i put lotsa effort here drop me some feed homies

HOLLA

i b uppn dis gangsta shyt

y no wun b replyin ta dis heet?

word, that shit was tight dawg...............................ROFL

^ wurd homie i b raw

keep da luv comin yo

lol.. umm.. Wack open mics to be funny are so old

*realizes I just did one*

ohh shit..

*leaves*

^ wack????!??!

u b strait trippin biatch... dis shyt is fiaaa! not wack

wattup, you can flow i'll give you that, but you need to have more punchlines and metaphors if you want the props, peace.
reply to my last post.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=162318

my wogizzle dat was the shizzle for grizzle i wanna barbarqizzle for uizzle come overizzle we back the nizzle to pizzle and then frizzle mny gizzlee hahaha yeah wordfight.

^ wurd G i b da rawest clique in da field

ill drop a freestyle for ya'll ma fuckas who b cravin more

yo yo yo check this im dope
i got sick flow, plus your mums a hoe
WORD

yo that shit was tite, nice multi's.pz.

^ no doubt homie i b illy

Thats was some funny shit.
I just ate a kebab, biggest burp i did in my life
reppin kabab kountry, i like it.

fuck shut up fools.... but dat was ill.... tight homie...

warm shit! not really hot, i liked though it made me lagh so props. word of advice it was a little to simple add some metaphores and betta punchlines. good shit though im out.

shit was ill son.......lmfao.....mad ill kid i ain't neve seen nothin hotter....

*runs to the OM nomination thread to nominate this OM*

ya'll b sleepin

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Originally Posted by wogzta

^ wurd G i b da rawest clique in da field

ill drop a freestyle for ya'll ma fuckas who b cravin more

yo yo yo check this im dope
i got sick flow, plus your mums a hoe
WORD

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oooo dam u ripped it lol pretty good freestyle its like 7.5/10 not bad man :laugh2:

lol, made me laugh, thats for sure. the flow was killer, and there was one or two nice punches, real tight. but there was a lot of empty space, fillers, like it was just a freestyle, which you said it wasn't, and the end really sucked, you sorta fizzled out. but you definately know what ur doing, keep it up, and try doing something topical, that way it will all tie together u know? anyways hit me up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=162019

^ ty homie I be elevatin and rippin dese biatches

yo dis shit hot it so hot i gotta put it in da freeza so nobody else can touch it. i hope it gets dat freeza burn shit cuz da shit is hot yo, supa hot yo yo yo yo yo know what im sayin yo dog homie yo ho mo

^ ya'll fools is sleepin

uppin dis shyt

that shit was really bad. i don't think you should ever do that again. The flow wasn't tight. you had multis, but meaningless multis. ummmmm, you need to just stop.

^ fuk you biatch you b playa hatin

i don't hate on shit like that......you are just............I don't know, go take a safari or something.

^ dats it imma fukin run up on ya block and bust a cap in yo ass.. imma murder yo moms

uppn dis thang hurr

Dope! I lyke yoor shit son! Let's do us a collab!!!

~oNe~

^ fa real

murda my mom.......ok, you a nerd sittin in front of his computer in beverly hills........... nobody talks like you do.......you sound stupid

Can't say much but gangsta...
Your multies were just so refreshing
so fresh it was like clean air lmao..

dope verse for shizzle my nizzle..

yeah this shit was alright.....you can flow though, but you were all about yourself; too much self glorification i think. maybe try a topical kind of open mic. use more metaphors and try some punchlines. aight....peace

people need to stop using open mic for jokes...

^ ya'll is all a bunch of playa hatas

cmon ya'll is sleepin on dis

lol Funny shit Wogz, can tell u jus was fuckin around so aint gon critique. Besides, made me smile a bit.

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i didnt like this...
...it was too emo :rolleyes:

^ Im Not A Nerd Rapper

Waaaaaahhhh

hehehehe it was gangstuh.... no emotion... leaves me bored... but this was accualy kinda amusing, chea,,,, wasl alright nothing special..... you soooo dope my freind ;)

check clearing the bush...

^ peace homie G