i set up
you spit first
10 lines
house rules
aiight
peace
an
good luck
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i set up
you spit first
10 lines
house rules
aiight
peace
an
good luck
im checkin nigga, u ready 2 go tell me when and ill spit.............................................. ...
spit when you want im keyin up right now............................................... ...................................
aight here goes...
u couldnt merk me if i gave u a desert eagle 4 christmas/
even with infra red beam and a scope 4 distance/
u never had pussy probably never got 2 see/
but i keep flowin u probably wanna blow me/
im ready for war soldier on da front line/
this vietnam bitch, u aint got time to whine/
never had blood on ya face, ill show ya/
then i pick at ya carcass like a starved vulture/
u should know how it feelz 2 be a lozer/
if u dont, good luck cuz i just showed ya/
i'll tell you in the first bar, you should of stayed conspicuous,
not raised alarm, circumstance of deaths,now not suspicious,
an illness infection, could help you spit like, a ragin disease,
spit 'atchoo' wit a flu jab, you cant even take my soft breeze,
i always be at the top of you, dont know why you spat first,
you climbin a ladder with no rungs, kill you in one 02 burst,
cardiac arrest is the outcome for the pressure i put u under,
hit with lightnin and season you ass wit a pinch of thunder,
like an over zealous coke head you seemed to rush your lines,
sit back an be jealous, watch as your crushed this second time,
wasn't a bad battle
but i think that alia took this with his vocab and flow
nice verse from the both of you
1st time uppin............................................. .................................................. .
Flow-Tie
Punches-Alias
Creativity-Alias
Multis-Tie
Vocab-Alias
Kinda a one sided battle here Alias had good vocab and had some punches.......Streetdreamz's verse wuz really basic nothin really stood out and I hated the ending
Vote Goes To Alias
2cnd time uppin............................................. .................................................. ................
I think your vote in my battle was wrong. Everything tied but punches? How effortless was that? Still, since you asked me to vote in return, I will. And I'll give you the vote for better format, flow, punches, and wordplay. Very simple rhyme from Dreemz. Too short, with weak metas and punches. Alias wins.
nice battle.
both came nice. streetdreamz took the flow. Allas took
vocab and complexity. everything else was pretty much tied.
so i gotta give this to whoever had more.
nice job peepz. keep it up. propz to both.
vote-Alias
peace
nICE Battle ere u two...tight flow from both....but-
alias took this wiv beta vocab n punches....but real close everywhere else...gud shit...keep ya heads up!
PeAce
it was alright but alias took this one in my eyes better wordplay and some harder punches but both of yall was alright
opener= Alias
closer=Alias
punches=Alias
structure=Alias - by far
vocab=Alias
wordplay=Alias
overall=Alias
Pretty one sided. Nice drop from Alias.
Street Dreamz, some of your shit didn't even ryhme, didn't really impress me at all. You need to elevate somewhere.