10 lines
no hate or d/r
no group
30 mins to spit
Check in
Consider this my check in
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10 lines
no hate or d/r
no group
30 mins to spit
Check in
Consider this my check in
checkin in... you drop
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fuck man, you take sooooo long to write ten lines............................................. .................................................. ...................
They say "save the best for last",but ima spit my verse first,
Cuz I'm twice as good as you,even when i spit in reverse burst.
Lets start with the end,defenently da worst,
21 years old layin in a hurst,closed casket,cuz what i did to ur face
Broke your bong,cut of your noise and put a dick in its place.
Choke for long,i did it with poise,took my time it wasn't a race,
It took me 10 minutes, to Pot you blood,thats one hell of a pace.
By 420 i was done,cleaned of my gun,makinsure it was MCnookie
cuz in 10 dayz santas comin ,so ima feed him an MC cookie.
That was me wackest shit ever im sorry.What else can i say but that....lol
*hes 21
*likes bongs
*belongs to the 420 crew
*christmas is in 10 days.....
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nice lewd.............................................. .................................................. .
rippin up this trippin Mizzou, like a drippin with dilemma tissue.
this lewd dude with canada attitude, is as wack as his crew needin hands for rappin's dues. havin wack back scratchers, to slap up their blasts at rappers, and distract the masses from clappin, at other crap thats spat, whats happenin?
i spit at you slow like your blood from the bit winter snow, i know thats why this quitter's so cold, he's frozen, so's his times up for goin.
you prewritin, and slow typin, buyin some time, tryin to find a rhyme that's bitin. i finish you off with a hot cuppa coffee, and some pot, that i'm sparkin, cause see i'm hot, to melt your ass with.
excuse my ass for bein late, i am actually at work at the moment...
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MC Nookie, you need to work on your structure, Lewd didn't have that many punches, but the flow was working, MC Nookie, your shit is kinda plain, you need to work on it a lil, Ima give this vote to Lewd.
Good shit both of ya..
Return da Fava
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=99087
UPPIN lets end this battle soon please............................................ .................................................. ...............................................
aight my 2 cents since i can't poll
both were very basic and not realy creative--um flows were off at time but some sounded good
if i could vote i would have 2 say lewd reason it sounded better but as far as cata gories nothin was really great
id say lewd on this one, nice flow good rhymes, and a lot nicer looking structure__________________
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i would say lewd won this one
keep doin you thing
I know my posts' is low...but I've been on this site for a minute. So when I'm voten, consider it respectful for both emcees.
From readen both, i thought lewd was a little weak, attacking wise.....his words weren't that put together
Same with MC Nookie though...he had some words that rhymed, but I got lost in his flow a little bit....but overall...with rhyme and attack and wordplay...i liked MC Nookie....
Vote=MC Nookie....
~.Nise.~
Lewd Is DQ'ed For Droppin A Link In My Battle... Before I Dropped A Verse... If You Have To Resort To Droppin Links... DON'T Do It In A MOD's Battle... It's Obvious You'll Be Caught.
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