HarDKor3 Vs. double-0 seven

aaight this is my second battle open and shit
20 lines no more no less
no fag or bullshit votes
no feeding recycling
check in and spit as soon as i can but hopefully by tonight

aiiyyo..........check in.......................its 6:03A.M over here in U.K...................... i aint been able to slep................. i'll also try an spit as quick as i can!!!

aight well that other dude aint spit yet so ama check in this and ill spit right now and shit

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i thought you was spittin dawg............................ is you or is you not............................................... .i had my shit ready for a while now..........................

yo....


ayo, u must be retarded, gettin shot by the sig/
over before it started, just gotta split ya wig//
u actin like a gangsta, but u lack that kind of mental/
leave ya body fuckin lost, couldnt trace it wit a stencil//
you spit in blurbs, while i spit in verbs...nouns and conjections/
this kids a fuckin fagget waitin for the hot beef injections//
how could it be i keep gettin stuck toastin herbs/
ur voice is too squeaky, i cant understand the words//
now im knowns as HK cuz i keep Hitting Kids/
only reason i aint ur daddy cuz he had a higher bid//
so do u look like ur pops, well, we'll never tell/
cuz that dude is long gone, and ur mom looks like a male//
this kids only 16 wit a rep like 50.../
50 other faggets that claim to be emcees//
this is just a warm up for the event ull soon notice/
plus u gt merked in all ur battles, sure'll u must know this??//
i aint spit one fuckin personal, and didnt use one full sentence/
and this dude gonna call me a genie cuz i granted his lil death wish//
one more win on the chart, its something ive grown used ta/
i think i might get arrested, for being a verbal child abusa(absuer)//

fuck my bad, i was doin other shit and what not so put ur verse down and lets get some votes

blah blah blah blah blah blah blah balhb alhb 100 char.

aiight im gon key up another few lines cos i didnt think u was gonna drop 20. i'll post A.S.A.P........................................... ........

so many punches, leave him like his avy, eye hangin out,
if hes as wack as his sig, no reason for him to run his mouth,

you gon need protective custody, an psychotherepy soon,
he gettin toasted, burnt more than a heroin addicts spoon.*

hit you in fast forward so hard, that i reverse your innerself,**
soft core, leave you in critical condition by reducing your health,

i leave your down sized, unable to write, fingers paralysed,
cryin blood from eyes, mouth dry, ubleash hell from the skies,

play your cards right, an you'll be in hospital playin patients,
an i aint on about the card game, admit your defeat gracious,

some like they shit, rare, but i roast, only serve well done,
only waiter that givin tips to peeps, battle not gone be won,

you put power behind your punches, shame you lightweight,
listen as your bone crunches, as i put my wins to two time eight,

only thing u got common with nas Nobody Aknowledges Simlicity,
some throw some wordplay and vocab, verses need, comlexity,

last line supposed too say
u should throw some wordplay and vocab, verses need, comlexity,


the *, ya'll know what heroin addicts do right,
**soft core, hardcore, reverse him!!

00 got this 1 but was close............................................. .................................................. ....

^^^ dont be gay and vote like that, atleast drop some critizcism if u cant poll vote, cuz thats fuckin wack, gettin my hopes up, thinkin u voted and all u said was, 00 got this, 1

aiight 1st time uppin............................................. .................................................. ...............

double got this with better and harder punches and personals without a doubt......Hardkore had a better structure and flow.....but double gets it in every other category in my opinion....no need for a breakdown..i already said HK only got structure and flow...double 0 go the rest.....good read from u both though...no hate...just a vote...

peace
4:20

I agree with Smoka I understood the metaphors and the vocabulary coming from 00 I also like your flow I did however like Hardcores structure better but Overall my vote does go to 00 seven. It's not a hate or anything just a vote constructive critism

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aiight nice battle,

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