yet another

"a girl i knew"


short verse


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thanks and pz....................


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noone...........damn.......................


well uppin for feedback...........................

the lyrics was hott, the vocals were a lil low, i liked this flow was there on topic, a lil sad in my opinion, but overall it was tight keep up the good work, and one more thing, is this a true story?

maybe we can collab sometime

shits dope patna

atmosphere beat right?

ya quality could do with some upping, the beat is mad low and shit. ^the guy above who said ya vocals were to low is fuckin crazy or has hearing problems lol.

ignoring the quality etc this is ill, especially lyrically, dope shit homey

voice is trash.........u fell of beat sometimes.....nice story and flow about it......lallalalal nice topic.........lol dossy doo.........u got loud sometimes need to work on quality.....

overall 7/10 nice shit

feddback my shit darnet

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