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ite dogg,
....................10 lines,
.......................both spit in 15 mins,
.......................no feeding or freeposting,
........................no crew d/r or hate votes,
.................................................. ..............................checkin good luck,
.pz
checking in................................................ .................................................. .................................................. ...................................pz
Chek... 1
chek... 2
chek... 3
Let the games begin...
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ayo if i ruled the world i would elevate written just to drop fire,
cut ya mic cord then break ya keys and leave you hotwired,
ya wack man just a rap fan bout to catch a backhand,
i see thru K's fake image---like a cat-scan,
equip wit teks and glocs wit infra red beams to direct the shots,
your first impression was "tek's just to ill" and then you hooked second thoughts,
your death filed away completely forgotten,cause ya styles-gay,
im merderous,your made of plastic.. only hooded coz ur KKK so rippin you is childs-play...
your too slow my whole crew flows to leave you in dust and wackness,
your a slut coward---stab you during rush hour...and leave you stuck in traffic,
~ok?~
alright heat,
.:K:.'s enterd the room.................and already you can feel him overpowering,
tek's words only wash on himself and his boys........simular to him showering,
ive got the remedy(crew) for your soldiers(crew)......"Give up" thats simple and plain,
cause ill be hitting hard like hail~and leave you comeing soft like rain,
when this faggot joined his crew.......he was under the impression he was an imposter,
but then Dominator reashord him.....there's plenty of quiers on are roster,
i wouldnt let you win........even if this bitch payed me~teks crazy,
he was an error from birth..............simular to the croos on his avy,
ive got the record~the posts~the respect.....im running a nice tight ship,
whereas tek aint got shit....he hasnt seen me elavate cause recently~hes been as unactive as his dick.
.pz
yo ite good battle man,
line 8 on mine is mena read,
simular to the cross
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blah... w/e
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Tek's Verse:
ayo if i ruled the world i would elevate written just to drop fire,
cut ya mic cord then break ya keys and leave you hotwired,
^Tight ass opener, str8 wordplay
ya wack man just a rap fan bout to catch a backhand,
i see thru K's fake image---like a cat-scan,
^nice punch
equip wit teks and glocs wit infra red beams to direct the shots,
your first impression was "tek's just to ill" and then you hooked second thoughts,
^good personal, decent multi
your death filed away completely forgotten,cause ya styles-gay,
im merderous,your made of plastic.. only hooded coz ur KKK so rippin you is childs-play...
^hard punch, combo w/ TOUGH multi's
your too slow my whole crew flows to leave you in dust and wackness,
your a slut coward---stab you during rush hour...and leave you stuck in traffic,
^LMAO>hard close
~ok?~
Nice verse here...
K's Verse:
.:K:.'s enterd the room.................and already you can feel him overpowering,
tek's words only wash on himself and his boys........simular to him showering,
^lmAAAOO -hella nice punch
ive got the remedy(crew) for your soldiers(crew)......"Give up" thats simple and plain,
cause ill be hitting hard like hail~and leave you comeing soft like rain,
^good personal, nice meta
when this faggot joined his crew.......he was under the impression he was an imposter,
but then Dominator reashord him.....there's plenty of quiers on are roster,
^HAHAHA, another tight-ass personal
i wouldnt let you win........even if this bitch payed me~teks crazy,
he was an error from birth..............simular to the croos on his avy,
ive got the record~the posts~the respect.....im running a nice tight ship,
whereas tek aint got shit....he hasnt seen me elavate cause recently~hes been as unactive as his dick.
^decent close -LAST line, FIRST line (9th) suffered tho...
Ayo, this was a NIIIICE battle, hard to call, so here's tha breakdown:
Open: Tek (wordplay)
Close: Tek
Personals: K
Meta's: K
Vocab: tie
Multis: Tek
Flow: Tek
Vote: Tek
oh yeah,
Punches: Tek
Thought I'd list that too
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Werd Spek... nice breakdown dawggy... appreciate it
yo an drop links if u want em peeped... i aint goin searchin!
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both of you spit some nice shit. It was hard to make a decision but when it came time i decided to vote for tek. Tek got muh vote. Ur goin places tek. do me a favor and return the favor in one of my rap battles. either
one.http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=98419
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=98102
^ite fair play.w/e so 0-1 tek.his avy was an error wenm i dropped this but w/e................................................. ......................drop sme links............................................. .....................................pz
overall good battle
flow/draw
style/k
punches/k
personals/tek
meta/draw
multi/draw
opener/k
closer/tek
my vote/k
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Edit: Vote DQ'd, not explained at all - BTK
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