Fiori vs. Diverse

yo, rules are:

10 lines max.
u spit first
no d/r, crew or hata votes...nefin else goes

gd luk dawg

peace

You decided to text battle, usually you stick to oral//*
Fiori your a bitch don't you know your name means floral?//*
Falls in love with flowers, at 15 yrs. old he's obsessed//*
point stressed, your battle records good but i'm not impressed//
still bored, this "Warlord" will die by the modern day sword//*
a keyboard, the reason he strangles himself with his own mic cord//
Sayin you smoke herbs, but really you're the herb gettin smoked//*
Should've stuck with football kid cuz your battling's a joke//*
First audio, then text, Fiori I wonder what your plannin next?//
One guess, gay sex your name practically says it best//

explanations
1.usually does audio battling
2.fiori means "flowers" or "floral" in italian
3.he's 15, and his name still means flower
4.he's crew'd up with the warlords
5.says he likes to smoke weed
6.says he plays football..................

fiori, g'luck man......let's get this battle poppin...........

yo yo diverse sum tight shit in there keep it up fiori hit im bk .................................................. ..........

sum gud shit

aight, yo

bin a long time since i lst battled but here go's

man u dissin my name but that shit is just crackers//
cos yours means of differing kinds, u go from wack to wacker//
when u hear my name, next time learn to stay down boy//
or u'll end up bottom like last season wit da dallas cowboys//
yeah, im with the warlords, what crew are you with??//
man, thats a rhetorical question, no-body's that stupid//
homey im so dope, my verse you'd go out and buy it//
you battled me for some credit, so stay off MY DICK!!!//
i do audio, yeah, u aint gon' make it, your just a key-typing geek//
you got a betta chance of yo' dick touchin your feet//

peace......

let the voting commence

good battle fiori............let's get some votes............................................. .....................

uppin this for some votes................c'mon people, drop links here and i'll vote on yours............................................. ........

yo good standard battles guys...i think diverse took the W..his personells will iight...Fiori, ur verse was good too..but may the bater verse win :).. good batle though..

vote= Diverese
PCe

this was a pretty tight battle
punchlines -diverse
flow - fiori
rhymes - diverse
overall - diverse on some illness fo sho
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uppin for some explanations and poll votes...............hit this up so it don't get slept on................................................ ........

/\/\/\/\/\ all those votes should not count...neither of you should accept them

here is an honest breakdown

opener d
closer fiori just cuz diverse that was too much play on his name plus it was wack
punches d
personals d
wordplay none worth noting
vocab d
overal d

/\how it should be done

Diverse came with more vocab
this was close like a muthafucka
punchlines -diverse
flow - fiori
vocab -diverse
overall diverse

hit this up i need to finish this

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&pagenumber=2

thanks for the honest input, greatly appreciated emerge, still uppin for votes.....................................one..... ............

this was an okie battle...but i think flow is a tie punches was diverse, structure tie, creativeness Diverse open...diverse close diverse overall diverse he just came a little harder...i expected better from foiri but like it was aaid it's been awhile...but props to both vote diverse

pretty one sided...i think D grabbed every category in this one....he had some nice punches and went mad personal.. and through in some ill wordplay. Fiori i think ur verse was aight but your set ups sometimes didnt really have nothin to do with ur punchline and thats why some of your punches didnt really land...just some constructive critisizm....nice verse tho no hate...

good battle.


could yall please hit this up wit an honest one??

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...474#post980474

uppin for the last time.............let's get some more honest votes on this................drop your links, i'll respond to your battle as well...................