aight once again this is the real shit
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aight once again this is the real shit
I'm feel you. Checking in so lets begin.
This is only the ‘beginnin’ Time for your mine ‘bendin’/
A ‘cleansin’ by fire fuck “hydro” - I exhale “Nitro” when ‘spittin’ -
lava ‘engulfin’ your ‘endorphins’ so you’ ll feel the “pain” /
of my lyrical “flames” ‘scorchin’ the hell out of your ‘origin’/
until you ‘morphin’ into a bitch cause a corpse named ‘Morgan’/
donated her ‘organs’ after this ‘torchin’/
I’ll “blaze” you until you eyez “glaze” like ‘crispy crème’/
Fuck with Sizz and become a part of a ‘crispy scene’/
So I ‘quickly bring’ your “azz on” as you ‘fit between’ /
The “talons”of a true fire spittin ‘Dragon’ that’ll make you “shit yo jeans”/
Another cleansing by fire.
What's up Shadow. I Know he didn't vanish into the night on me. Is this a TKO or what. First battle and it ends this way/////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
whoa...thats serious..... your comp will probablly post tomorrow after he consult is vote buddies and advisors
Thanx for tha respect playa. I don't underestimate anyone in a battle though. We'll see how this turns out.
all i gots to say is that real sizz's verse fuckin blows fo sho
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nice verse dawg
will poll a vote when he spits cuz a shud be 100+ then....
thats gona be difficult to beat.....dont think its gona happen to be honest....
keep it up man!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97113
aight my bad i forgot about the battle
ima spit now
ayo...
i spray bullets at nigga's who come to test me//1
fuckin wit shadow will get u 9 bullets in ya chest b//2
im leathal and ill//3
i shoot to kill//4
i got sizz shocked payin my electric bill//5
by the end of this battle this cracker be knocked out cold//6
while i got his girl goin up and down my dick like a go-go pole//7
ima take this white boy though my own version of hell//8
you aint catchin bricks bitch, u catchin shells//9
better hope the crowd save u by the motherfuckin bell//10 (final)
aight my bad i forgot about the battle
ima spit now
ayo...
i spray bullets at nigga's who come to test me//1
fuckin wit shadow will get u 9 bullets in ya chest b//2
im leathal and ill//3
i shoot to kill//4
i got sizz shocked payin my electric bill//5
by the end of this battle this cracker be knocked out cold//6
while i got his girl goin up and down my dick like a go-go pole//7
ima take this white boy though my own version of hell//8
you aint catchin bricks bitch, u catchin shells//9
better hope the crowd save u by the motherfuckin bell//10
Aiight.......
Heres da breakdown!!
sizz:shyt wus weak.....flow wus off,i think 1 or 2 lines didnt even rhyme!!...Punch's were weak(elevate)!!........Overall Verse succed,jus practice more!!
This is only the ‘beginnin’ Time for your mine ‘bendin’/
A ‘cleansin’ by fire fuck “hydro” - I exhale “Nitro” when ‘spittin’ -
lava ‘engulfin’ your ‘endorphins’ so you’ ll feel the “pain” /
of my lyrical “flames” ‘scorchin’ the hell out of your ‘origin’/
until you ‘morphin’ into a bitch cause a corpse named ‘Morgan’/
donated her ‘organs’ after this ‘torchin’/
I’ll “blaze” you until you eyez “glaze” like ‘crispy crème’/
Fuck with Sizz and become a part of a ‘crispy scene’/
So I ‘quickly bring’ your “azz on” as you ‘fit between’ /
The “talons”of a true fire spittin ‘Dragon’ that’ll make you “shit yo jeans!!
^^ dis kid needs da book "Rap For Dumbies"!!
Ok Now
DA:This wus an aiight verse punch's werent dat strong but dey were there,flow wus good n on point,structure wasnt bad.....Overall da verse wus goood!!....Keep it up!
i spray bullets at nigga's who come to test me//1
fuckin wit shadow will get u 9 bullets in ya chest b//2
im leathal and ill//3
i shoot to kill//4
i got sizz shocked payin my electric bill//5
by the end of this battle this cracker be knocked out cold//6
while i got his girl goin up and down my dick like a go-go pole//7
ima take this white boy though my own version of hell//8
you aint catchin bricks bitch, u catchin shells//9
better hope the crowd save u by the motherfuckin bell//10
^^ not bad keep elevating!!
Vote:DA
Reason:I feel his verse is dominant over sizz!!
Aiight nice battle DA,..as for sizz elevate kid!!....u'l get better!!
Aight thats wassup
already im uppin by 1
so the score is shadow :1 vote
sizz:0 votes
Oh yea u do know sizz
if i get 3 in a row its a T.K.O.
aight people lets get the votin
aight yo >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>uppin>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
aight ya get ya votes in asap so we can decide who won this
aight ~1~
aight.....merking in the process with this one............................................... .........................
DA took it in every category......dont need to say nemore really!
vote = DA
Personals- Tie (None stood out)
Punches- DA (His Hit... Sizz had a problem Imma Later talk-about)
Multis- Sizz
Flow- Sizz
Vocab- Sizz
Wordplay- Tie
Overall- DA
Synapsis- Now.. this is a weird VOTE cause by categorys DA should lose... but the 2 main Categorys in battlin' Punches n Personals were taken by DA... Sizz's attempts for punches were word'd wrong... They werent' hittin at all... DA came weak as well... but threw punches that connect'd... Both of yall will Elevate tho... Keep spittin' Pz
Vote on my ISH! :-p
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