St-St-Stutter-keystyle

Are you having problems trying to get words to come out?
Have you bottled up feelings that your whole life is about,
Anguish is what i really see, i don't mean verbal deficiency,
You can speak clearly... but you words come out fearfully,
Freedom Of Speech, wrong words give reasons to impeach,
Type of shit they try an teach, but it's still like the 17th century,
So elementary, I didn't know words could be,used as weaponry,
You better duck and cover, given you reasons for why you stutter,
So should you have problems all bottled up inside, keep it secret,
These days you have no-one to confide in... just don't speak it,

You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get deleted...

but this was pretty good i thought here...your structure was real good overall....flow was on point here kinda got off at a few spots though but still good....you had some good multies i liked those....kinda short though but still good....overall good piece...keep at it.

lol my bad, i forgot about droppin the 2 links things, ive been gone for a couple of months, came back, ill get to doing that asap, promise

well i lost the links but i remember that i've been at:
Chrit,
A2Z,
Fgee

uppin for some quick views?????

AHHHHHHH too short man. It was soo good but then it just got cut off which messed it up. I was enjoying the piece. I would love to see an extended version lol. Good drop.

It was short....ummm...I really don't know what to say to this....

the rhyme scheme was good....just lengthen it.....and I'm not sure what you meant to say, but shouldn't it be deficiency, not indeficiency?

good real shit

nicce topic and good flow

keep postin up dawg

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word Muh, u rite lemme fix it, its short cuz i did it in a hurry lol, yo lets do a remix of it skiddz,,,,,,,,,get at me