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yo i'm tha new man , fresh young nigga in tha hood
some know my flow , and they say i'm good
i'm fresh wit this new beat , and you gonna fill my heat
fuck me you don't wanna fill my shit
don't look for trouble man , you'ill start to struggle
so don't play wit my flow ,cuz i'm new in this game:shoot:
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But this was ok....but you should make your open mics a little longer than just 6 lines maybe like 10+ lines so....try to keep your lines around the same length....add multies to this to help the flow though...but overall this was ok...just elevate and keep at it.