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I don't know whether you do gotta go to work or not or whether you can write ya verse in work so no feedin' of my shit.
No crew, dick ridin or hate an' please no vote from verse112 cos he too involved (not sayin you'd cheat playa)
Explained votes please (what was good what was bad)
Your name is the thing that'll be hanging on ya toe
When I kill you in this poll unidentifiable John Doe
This a six syllable rhyme but that aint nuthin' jack off
I'd try harder but I saw your shit an laughed my fukin' ass off
You wouldn't be real whether you took the blue or red pill
Wake up chump you goin' nowhere like on treadmills
I suggest next time you run you maybe try instead hills
Cos you need elevation then next time yoa might not get killed
Hit me back
Sorry missed out a line
Your name is the thing that'll be hanging on ya toe
When I kill you in this poll unidentifiable John Doe
This a six syllable rhyme but that aint nuthin' jack off
I'd try harder but I saw your shit an laughed my fukin' ass off
You wouldn't be real whether you took the blue or red pill
Wake up chump you goin' nowhere like on treadmills
I suggest next time you run you maybe try instead hills
Cos you need elevation then next time yoa might not get killed
You wanted me to battle verse112 an the cat gets played
Then I kill you like in graphitti when a TAG gets sprayed
That was some prewrittin shit. You dun "miss out a line" unless you prewrite dawg. Whateva, here I go
i'll hit this battle up afta tag drops but for now hit my battle up kna mean holla...................................
Me versus you? Dawg you know that fight jus aint fair
You couldn't equal me if you were the best MC squared
Callin me out wanna try and take out a vet quick
You couldn't "beat" me man even if I was your dick
This bitch is bout ta be merked, I wasted MC squared
Leave you mo depressed then a impotent pedafile at a daycare
You battlin ta impress me fag? Sorry but I aint homo like you yo
If I was a tree, and you a squirrel, you still couldn't bust a nut in my hole
You called me out in bitchslapped, but you jus got backhanded
Like a cow crappin at zero gravity, none of your shit landed
MC2 i aint diggin ur shit.............................................. .......................................! its to simple, try and be creative...... I kno i dont battle and thats cos i aint got the skills
Uppin fo some votes............................................. .................................................. ...........
opener/tag
closer/tag
multi's/tag
worth reading/both
worth battling/both
overall/tag
my vote goes to tag cause his verse was all-round betta
damn nigga easy tag gets this simple......
opener:tag
closer:tag
punches: tag
word play:tag
overall: tag
TAG took it easy. The fact that MC2 missed out a line just messed it up as well(prewritten).
Opener=tie
structure=TAG
punches=TAG
creativity=TAG
closer=TAG
VOTE=TAG
uppin, drop a link and it will be hit after you poll an honest vote/.........................................
This is how it went donw. Ooh, and MC2, try to use more complex rhymes.
Punches: TAG
Disses: TAG
Wordplay: TAG
Creativity: MC2
Opener: MC2
Closer: MC2
Flow: TAG
Vote: TAG
Hit this up with a honest vote please... Ape .vs. C-Lo ...thanks.
uppin (3)............................................... .................................................. ................
nice battle no doubt tag got this he came better in every field of the battle mc2 elevate son you need personals and stop with that pre written shit and get better with structure and everythin~1