6-8 lines 30 min after checkin
no bullshit
o ya times come:gfy: then i'ma say :thefinger then your gunna say something stupid with this result:shoot:
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6-8 lines 30 min after checkin
no bullshit
o ya times come:gfy: then i'ma say :thefinger then your gunna say something stupid with this result:shoot:
iight yo MD....u were tryin out for D.O.I.
well 1liner is in D.O.I.
so if u beat him your in......if not then your not in
i will check this out later.....
MD-da `Ill-ist- shit more like Skill-less- with a Ego
Cuz ill-spits till i kill-this kid so his Arrival is D.O
(D)ead (O)n when i spit up and Erupt with thunder --
i'm gunna make uwonder if that dirt is a better place to be under
Shots followed wit slumber-and leave uboxed in hollowed lumber
This Wanna be just got ripd in pieces/
Ate em for Lunch - and shot out with Deceased releases
JESUS his remains can still be found in my fecies
AYO... D.O.I. ban this guys he can't even rip a *line*/
lyrical rhymes?~clean my eye's~sick wit what?~ you gotta die//
u say u spit flames when u really have no lyrical skill...
I stabbed lineer brain with a diseased needle~thats why he "thinkin" he "ill"//
son u a small time why u go to wendy's an get a biggie...
when u lick the toliet was the last time u ever was nasty//
*you* think *have* the ability *been*ing even *close* to me... when u still on the *lined* spittin as a first time newbie???...shhhhyyytttt// ( if u don't get this Creatiavty read the words wit the * * around them
lets go...
METAPHORES - neither
VOCABULARY - neither
PUNCHLINES - MD_killa20
STRUCTURE - 1liner
CREATIVITY - tie
PERSONALS - 1liner
OPENING - 1liner
CLOSING - 1liner
MULTIES - neither
FLOW - 1liner
OVERALL – 1liner
Return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93392
METAPHORES - none
VOCABULARY - none
PUNCHLINES - MD_killa20
STRUCTURE - 1liner
CREATIVITY - more 1liner
PERSONALS - 1liner
OPENING - 1liner
CLOSING - 1liner
MULTIES - none
FLOW - 1liner
OVERALL & VOTE – 1liner
yo MD_killa20 screw there crew come and join my crew MC's'R'US we'll let ya in ours unlike them other bitches makin take one 1liner
and that boi is wack he uses 3 line bars lol. but yet he calls himself 1liner. 1liner my ass
For some odd reason...
i thought
punches...flow...wordplay...creativaty...an some times Vocab won battles.... (so why is 1liner winning?)
oh well... keep upppin
vote on this and I'll return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=92602
aiyo dont be dissin one liner...he will murk all of u...so will I
and one liner took this battle easily....
opening - 1liner
punches - MD_killa20
struct- 1liner
personals- 1liner
flow- 1liner
closing- 1liner
overall - 1liner
yo can u guys check this out ok thanks man
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93798
((((((()))))))))))))))))))((((((((((((((((())))))) )))))))))))))))))))))))))))))(
uppin uppin,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
upppin............................................ .................................................. .................................................. ........................
ayo, return the fav. buy making a vote in the battle in my sig. hommie. Aight then.
opening - 1liner
punches - MD_killa20
struct- 1liner
personals- 1liner
flow- 1liner
closing- 1liner
overall - 1liner
^Im goin with my hommie on this. Hese write^
OUT
-High Class a.k.a Confusion
uppin fo votes .....................plz get this shit closed............................................ .................................................. ...............