Mary~Jane Vs Tek

10-20 lines...

Due: 3hrs from wen this thread is set...

No feeding...

Dont matter who post first...


Bring heat girl...

checkin in, goinna spit it up now

lets be real boo, ill use ya own name to kill you/
you got rejected from elite, face it, nobody feels you/
I keep this battle locked like braces, im set to blast at faces/
You couldnt capitalize the win if you spit in uppercases/
I know its kinda mean, but no longer will you be 9-3/
Shit you aint even a M_ddle We_ght, your suppost to use your I's to see!/
~Lyrical Soldiers~? Please, ima blast ya wack crew/
Someone said your dope? musta got your 'teeth pulled', cuz they just 'gassed you'/
Dont come with punches about women, that shits redundant like 'curved bendings'/
Theres no feeling to your flow, like clogged nerve endings/
Your 'foreign to rap' like santas workshop invaded by alien hovercraft/
fuck fathering your style tek, ive mothered that!/

This here is ma Mistress...

Avoid it, id rather sprint headfirst into blasted caps spit,
im two faced, plus im feeling generous so i half assed this...

still dont got half a chance, i been rappin since there was jurassic lands,
my raps enhanced, while i tell bitches like this to "pick up your cash and dance"...

foreal your wack bitch,i see your song of lies beyond your eyes,
dont be traumatized,your status is like pistols,cause a mistress is on the side...

lesson learned, femcees burned, my cuss erupts, but ive had enough wit dick suckin sluts,
no matter how far ya get, how ya gonna spit when ya chokin on all the busted nuts....?

thru all drops your only small talk, battle me and youll come back looking ripped,
your fat ass might beat me into submission...but ill never be pussy-whipped.... lol

inject swords in ya chosen, morbid body fear got u frozen,
i'll nut on ya clit til ya pussy hole start closin...

a chick with a dick that tried ta rhyme sick?
dont faget she died ta my shit... better run quick trick...

she dont know it but she lyricaly been raped...
im kickin at her legs continuously, til her shin breaks...

u decide to die, collide with I u didnt mean ta try, visions depict killins, chillin incision leave your blood spillin...

shit peep this little girl she readin my verse lost in space,
u wanna see this bitch?, here watch the r kelly tape.../


done

This shits been up for a week an not a single vote... smh


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Honesly..I Was Feel'n Mary~Jane More::

Felt Here Punches Were Harder Yo::

Tek You Started Off Good Yo..But Going Towards The Middle To
The End Wasnt Feelin It..Just Felt Like You Threw In Extra 10 Lines To Fill In ya Verse...Kinda Took The Umph Out Ya Verse..But Yo Neways The Chick Got It Neways :D


::I Poll Voted::

yo tek, first of all your WACK, that verse suked and you didn't even obey your own rules more than 20 lines your dq'd. mary, that was a nice drop, props to you...........
....... my vote mary....................
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Vote De-Polled... He Called Tek Whack And What Not... But Polled For Him... So Poll Is 3-0 Favor Of Mary Jane.
-Axe

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an fuk u Pinecone... thas 20 lines u dumb shit...


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Flow: Mary
Punchs: Mary
Metas: Mary
Multis: Tek
Structure: Mary
Enjoy: Mary

Vote: Mary

Mary takes this..tek fell off half way through his verse and his punchs that were there didnt hit hard

opener - mary
closer - mary...both wack but mary's made a little sense atleast
punches - mary
personals - tek
wordplay - tek
overall - mary...just alittle bit better