10 lines
whoever spit first. got 1 hour TOPS to post back.
peace
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10 lines
whoever spit first. got 1 hour TOPS to post back.
peace
set-ignorance
- You From The UK; NO WAY You REALLY Feel Hip Hop
- And With Your ZERO and 3 Battle Record... You Should STOP!
- I Spit *FiRE* To Make Ignorance 'Stop-Roll and Drop'
- And He A Snitch; This Fukkin 'Ass-Holes a Cop!
- If "God Blessed YouR Hand" Then Im *Prayin To The Devel*
- You A Shorty MC; Im Spittin On A Higher Level
- Im Snatchin Ya 'Mic Stand'; And Im Blastin Ya Man
- So You Aint Got No Back Up; Now You Got About 'Half-A-Chance'
- You 'Half-A-Man'; Like You Got *One Nutt* and 'Short-Cock'
- Im Playin YOUR Field Like A Mother Fukkin Short-Stop
^^^ wrote fast as i could
Mystified lyrics, leaving you confused and in suspense//
Tensing your image, as if I was gunna bruise it’s elements//
Like sediments of sand, I’ll crush you to dust//
Like water on metal, making your lines bitter n rust//
I don’t trust no bitch from the Portland shelter//
If that was your best lyric bitch, then no-body felt ya//
I’ll leave you with an image of my ass, so u can dream//
Cos when I’m sailing past, I’ll be ripping out your spleen//
Leaving you spleen-less n un-able to justify//
Your not part of any team, your useless, your shits, jus un-able to fly…
nice...no doubt.................Nebo
took this one clearly tho...tied with structure....
but Nebo took everything else...even made me laugh with
his closer...haha..tight......keep it ill...
props to both~
vote-nebo
peACE
hmmm
opener(+1)-set
closer(+1)-both weak
punches(+2)-set
personals(+2)-nebo
wordplay(+1)-nebo
multis(+1)-set
complexity(+1)-set
originality(+1)-set
cornyness(-2)-nebo
enjoyment(+1)-set
overall- Nebo (+1)....set-ignorance (+7)------Winner....honest vote
This was a good battle...
Set, I can see why ya haven't won yet.
And why ya not winning this one.
Ya got real good vocab, nice flow...
But ya punches are weak as hell.
This was ya best and pretty much, only one...
I don’t trust no bitch from the Portland shelter//
If that was your best lyric bitch, then no-body felt ya//
Even that could have been harder...
Spittin pussy lyrics from outta the Portland shelter...
Bitch, I even fucked ya verse and never once felt ya.
See the wordplay?
Nebo brought shit like that and even though he herbed up his verse with CAPS, *, and "...
What was within, still racked up punches and wordplay on ya ass.
Peace
Nebo
word up... thanks for the honest votes... GameTime. (lol)
here are two more that i voted on... for the record :)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93094
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93085
just so ya'll know i play fair
nebo killed this, every aspect better, tight flow n punches! other guy u need to elevate but battlin gud emcees will help so keep it up n learn from them!
vote nebo
did u poll on my battle wiv aragorn dawg!
nah for real nebo........i dont bullshit......just that i have and always hated those type of corny punches ya know???
fuck a punchline??---
its seriously an honest vote........no hate
peace
^^^ i dont get it... why are you all defensive?! thanks for votin!
and yeah dw i voted on that one with Aragron and you :^
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Originally posted by |[-neBo-]|
word up... thanks for the honest votes... GameTime. (lol)
just so ya'll know i play fair
^^^^ u hinted that my vote was hate and not honest......thats why.....and that aint the case...peace
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oh... okay
lol uppin this BiAeeeCh
comon yall i voted on like 42 battles!!! lol
aight..after readin nebo's verse i was sure he holst, then i read set's and was liek, wow he won.......they were both weak, set's had no disses, nebo had a coupel weak disses taht nearly anyone would eat up...but set couldn't and he lost...no hate...honesty...vote - nebo
OPener: tie
Closer: nebo
Flow: tie
Punches: nebo
Personals: Set (wasn't feelin any of nebos)
Win: Nebo
Can yall hit this battle up please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93223