Ace vs SmokaJoka666(tight)

aight...
should be a tight one...

here are the rules:
10 lines max
no cheating in any way
no feeding...
you can spit first...

good luck
have fun

peACE

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peace
4:20

aight sounds good then..............
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due tomorrow...................................
...................uh....by noon..lol..aight
peACE

yo....how bout i battle one of u after thursday???

too busy now...just decided to see whats up.....oh yeah

^^i've already battled u....so u can battle Ace if u want....

uhh......Ace ur not on duke....i will drop later...

peace
4:20

im on yo..........i'll drop asap then........and yea..gametime...
set it up if you want...you spit first tho.....
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peACE

yo..i'll set it up right now.........i say due by tonight or tomorrow...whatever.....cuz i got work to do but i'll try to spit.........tonight.............me first???
i say anyone goes first.....doesnt matter cuz no feeding....i'll post rules there...late

Lets do this...

Rapid recollections of revelation of you being vanquished start to enter your brain//
Wouldn’t reach my verbal saturation if you spat your verse in a denser terrain//
Your mentor’s my name, how much losses will it take for you to realize that you’re the center of shame?//

Leave ya game in E-dub son, cuz there ain't no way you'd make it off the net//
Scared ur ass badly got you to quit smoking now you'll live to regret//
Keep given'em shit, thats all you seem to be doin, might as well quit//


Ease your mind, with adhesive rhymes, the residue of this is how you were made insane//
But the killah half is just an illusion like the vets that have said to played ya game//
watch me fade ya name, remove the rec on ur sig cuz without it, newbs like you behave the same//

had to go easy......make it quick son..due time is over

peace

^^damn long lines...lol...nice though

If U Don't Get Punches/Wordplay Or Personals...Don't Vote!!!!
I'll Make This Faggot Quit, Steal Ur Initials And Turn U To The Ass Of Spits..
Put A Car In Reverse And Hit Female Dogs Is The Only Time U'd Tag A Bitch..
Just Relax, Ur Wack I'm The Ultimate Weapon Of This Entire Rap..
Pile Uneven Numbers In Ur Head, To Show How The Odds Are Stacked..
My Rhymes Released, Please Believe, That Bein Gay Is Ur Pet Peeve..
U Ain't Deep, Leave U Stuck To This Fore-Arm (forum) Like A Wet Sleeve..
My Punches Like Steppin On Nails With Shoes, They Pierce Ur Sole (soul)..
Like A Highly Intelligent Pillsbury Doughboy, I'm On A (honor) Roll..
Ace Says He's Unknown, But I Know Ur Location Is A Gay House..
I'm Known To Serve Cats Like U In 10 Minutes Like Chinese Take Outs..

peace
4:20

Open- tie
Metas - ace
Creavitity - tie
Personals - smoka
Flow - smoka
Finish - tie
Abuse - smoka

vote = smoka, close but i fel smoka's punches more

My Battles:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=92417

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=92568

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Originally posted by Dek81
Open- tie
Metas - ace
Creavitity - tie
Personals - smoka
Flow - smoka
Finish - tie
Abuse - smoka

vote = smoka, close but i fel smoka's punches more

My Battles:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=92417

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=92568

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....Seems about right.... Vote Smoke

my 2 cents

flow----Smoka
punches-smoka
creativity---Ace
laughs-Smoka
personals--tie
overall---Smoka

Ace it seems you try to use to big of words and they look inpresive i guess but the just don't mean nothing
but a aight verse by u

Smoka had me laugh the hole time with the tag'd a bitch line

good shit

anyways this was a average vet battle
Please return the favor and vote on battles

ehhh...Emcee Universe's vote don't count...so it's 2-0....nice work Ace............................................... ...

peace
4:20

this was really close but smoka got it. betta flow and punches

Put A Car In Reverse And Hit Female Dogs Is The Only Time U'd Tag A Bitch..

^^hahahaha great line smoka

word...appreciate the votes people.....uppin #1................................................ .......................

peace
4:20