LM vs Funn DementaLL

Any length verse
No d/r and all that
Votes must be explained

Here's my verse which I copied and pasted from the thred which was set up wrong.



This herb couldnt battle if he was a tank/
Shootin harmless punches just to prove that he's wank/
He's still at lightweight rank, tryin to prove himself/
Why you battlin me damagin your health/
I'm skill was wealth then you in poverty/
Scrapin for food and your grovellin to me/
Oh shit you are in poverty...thats what happens when you live in Hackney/ (biography-profile)
Are you at the top of your game, coz your gon' have to be/
Just to get one vote against me, you have to bribe the voters/
Then go and find a hundred four leaf clovers/
Sorry if I've gon over the limit...I didnt know the rules, fuck it I aint sayin game over/
No not yet, I'm a carry on spitten...makin a mockery out of all your pre-writtens/
I'm sayin you should quit...bitch listen/
You've failed this mission...thought you could win a battle when really you were wishin/
If we were in audio I'd merk you with the sound of me pissin...dawg your whack/
You came into this battle but died...next time bring a survival pack to make up for the skills which you lack/.


I didnt know any of the rules so I did any length verse.
I guess the other rules are just no d/r and all that.
All votes must be explained


Good luck

Shit, I swaer I posted my verse but I accidently clicked Reset forum next to submit reply... sorry its gonna take me longer to post coz I gotta start from scratch... gimme an hour!!! peace

I'm skill was wealth then you in poverty

^^^Lack of concentration.
I was meant to say 'If skill is wealth then...'
My bad

Ok, I'm well known for (L)ossening (M)inds/
all dem dam posts an not one decent line/
the easy target, (L)ackin' (M)inerals/
see you lookin' through my spitted bars, like convicted criminals/
I'm-hard-to-the-core, like the earths suface/
Let me tell you, the biggest mistake was havin' my name after verses/
stain your mind wit evil thoughts an voodoo curses/
Rap knowing you wack, my reign... you can't hurt dis/
I'ma make sure only you see through my hidden identidy/
You ain't never gonna make it doug, it jus never was meant to be/
Runn up, jackin' lower motives (LM), you won't even keep ya secrets/
Taking away all hopes an belifes, wha you gonna tell jesus/
sooo supriour, My mature flow makes yours look like a fetus/
late again LEE, laugh while you get cained by your teachers/
everybody put hands in pockets when I say LM/
coz I want you're (L)unch (M)oney, or "say hello to my lil friend/
You're broken, like the promise to you're land/ you need to mend/
Can you believe you're over, an it's still not the end/
coz you need a fix like crack heads, they open off the shit I be sellin' em/
You can't kill me, nigga I'ma be here next millenium/

what's said is said... Funn out

Votin on the side of trhe lord????????????
I donnit know.........

Vote: Funn Dem

Better quality verse, better punches (ie/personal, dissin name etc), although LM came strrong

I feel LM's flow let him down in this

Hit this up....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=90792

Its below yours on frontlines anyway

soz, i clicked on the wrong name...............................could a mod sort this out,.............................................. ................................

Uppin for votes (1)............................................... ............................
Funn....let the mods know bout your vote if you want it!!!

Peace!!!

Nok'd Vizion

Poll fixed, I put you as voting for Funn
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When will we know who won... surely I can't win from dat one vote... come on, cats be viewin' an not replying... I wanna battle record.... (uppin' #2)

^^^You've only upped once. Why'd ya put two............................................... .......................................

Uppin for votes (2)............................................... ............................

Peace!!!

Uppin for votes (3)............................................... ............................

Peace!!!

Uppin for votes, I need dis record win or loose

uppppppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnn nnnnnn
(for sum reason I need to post 100 characters) sooooo 2222222 ttthhhhaaa top

^^^You put two m's in coming. Sorry for the freepost.......................................... ..................

opener:fun
closer:LM
wordplay:Tie
structure:Fun
punches:Fun
overall:Funn damental

LM you need to fix you structure, and stop using so many english words like wank use summert that every one might use in their vocab. Fun nice drop man.