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Your topic: Tainted Rhythm
hi kids, do you like violence?
wow...Tag'd and SS
...This Means Something...
*Contacts Ms. Cleo*
im going 16 lines, macth me
Plummet Beneath Earth Greens...Come Meet The Undead
& Come Hear The Tainted Rhythm Alive Inside My Head
Mocking Laughter Always Broods...Such A Shelll Of A Life
Find Myself Hating The Day...But Fearing The Come Of Night
I Just Come Alive... A Soul Live And Die By The Streetlight
Hailing All The Garbage Halos...In Fear Cluchting Wreath Tight
No Reason To Exist...The Voices Never Imagine To Forgive
Just Writhing In The Pain... But I've Grown A Sense To Love It
The Man In My Skull Says To Avoid..No Choice But To Persist
Wake Up In The Morning ...With Visions Of A Burning Crucifix
Nagging Pain In My Core..A Pain That Remains Unnamed
At Wake Pleading With God To End Life...He Remains Unweigned
I Cant Take It Anymore...Camels Back Is Breaking By The Grain
The Life I Live Is Deadly...Of Tainted Percussion And Of Pain
....Free Thoughts (My Akward Walk)
So My Rhythms A Little Tainted... My Walks A Little Akward
I Carry A Pistol To Protect Me... Cuz My Consciense Is A Stalker
All This Nonsense Is Offered & Like Adam From Eve i Take It
Swallow n Digest Till The World Spins N I Cant See Where My Space Went
Impatient For Success Yet Patient For What It Brings
I'm Filthy - Even My Trunk of Life Is Surrounded By Rings
The Sound Clings To My Every Wish & My Every Desire
But Theres my Stalker Pursuing To Give Up, Let Die, n Retire
How Can I Uplift and Inspire? My Feelings Are True but My Moods A Liar
under so much heat, The pills take me higher, away from the fire
What Can Be Worse? Here I Fall Asleep Anxious n Wake Up Tired
Then I smile Like A Liar, I Walk that Walk n I talk that talk
Dance with a Slightly Tainted Rhythm and Step With an Akward Walk
- Mystery
edited b4 votes
Wow..This is one of the toughest SS matches I judged
A2Z has the imagery category on lock, his story was well presented, flow and structure was there, and it was one of the best verses to be done.
M.M You have the similies and the metaphors which really gave an interesting effect to the verse. Your verse was also presented well, with the weakness of your structure, yet I never lost the flow.
Vote-M.M...I really think that he just barely got this. Both verses were wonderful to read, but in the end, after reading the verses about 3 times, M.M had the better verse. Good shit fellas.
wow this was hard...seriously, i honestly thought you came almost dead even. but ... i dont know.
a2z, flowed and rhymed perfect...nice imagery, and let off steam...like u said everything needed to be said
mm- good drop. again flowed and rhymed. vivid imagery...so i guess i just barely slightly enjoyed mm more. so this vote will go to him
props to both..both ya'll showed your talent...
a2z-feeling ya flow most def..stood out a mile...quality of story was good and your scheme/route jus led a good path for a good conclusion,,rating=8.5
MM-a2z flow was better but you did have a better overall verse..the story/topic was well executed n you delivered beyond my expectations...you def showed your worth/rep here....rating=9
make sure to check my match up pz
thanx for the votes, good drop A2Z...
ah you fucking hoes..
both of you came exceptionally well here.. and i applaud both of your performances.
i just wish that one of wouldve half assed it so the vote wouldnt be as hard...
but i think that M~M's first line was what forced me to decide in his favor. it was a beautifully said line that grabbed my attention..
vote- m~m
Mystery~murdera (4-1)
a2z (2-1)