cutastraphe .:V.S:. double-0 seven

you know the rules
no d/r, crew votes etc etc

8 lines max
6 lines min

verses due in a hour, if an extension is needed the just say so

aightttttttt

yo be glad we aint battle earlier, cuz ya'll just have one more loss/
and to add to the embarrisment i think it's adament dun't need god to judge how i'm burnin-ya-corpse/
i give it an a+ as i relay-slugs, die another day? i think today nov 13 is suffice for ya to taste-blood/
dun't ever hate wut, ya needs shape-up like liftin-rectangles/
with hair like sideshow bob but ya only got good brain givin-it-for-pesos/
ya dunt live? if ya say-so, that mean i won't have to bury-ya/
plus ya so off with ya delivery i dunt recommend a job for-the-courier/

peace gl

i leave disaster in my wake, like im a verbal earthquake,
u like an amateur actor, still failing, even after ur 17th take*

i sit here an look in your eyes, as you await your demisise,
i tap into your mind, hear the crys, as u see this defeat arrive,

im a big fish in the ocean, whilst u little in a owners tank,
this thread, im being cruel to kind, but u dont have to thank,

i strip of gravity, leave him legless before i finish cutastraphe,
even if you won this battle, if would be equal to blasphemy,

oh yeh, the * is, its he had 17 battles........................................... .............nice drop

aight word--------------good spit-------------let's get sum votes----------------------------------------------------

Both did good but i think more creativity came from Double 0 seven
nicr structure
gl to both of u in the future
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aight...

metas: cut
multis: none
personals: tie
structure: double
complexity: double
wordplay: none

i don't know wat happened hea...

my vote: double...

peep minez wit names to return tha favor...

cut: yo, u didn't poll vote...poll vote please...

thanks vote appreciated........................... c'mon peeps RB sucks when it comes to votin nowadays.......................................... .......

2cnd time uppin.................................................. ....peeps need to wake up and start votin or RB will fall apart...................................

Flow-007
Punchs-tie
Personals-007
Multis- cut
Vocab-cut

This was even but i think 007 took it with the opener, the 17th take line. But other than that it was even as u can see.

i think double got this....mostly because the last few lines from cut didn't really rhyme to me....i guess it's the way i read it....but double had a better structure and flow....neither of u really had good punches....cut had a few personals...but they were weak....i gotta go with double for a more solid verse and structure....

peace
4:20

damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn 3-0 him uppin for more votessssssssssssssssss i think i gotta change my structure all to fuckin gether...............honest votes please

oneee

ite dis is how i c it,

metas: cut
multis: none
personals: cut
structure: double
complexity: double
wordplay: none

overall= 007.both not bad.........................................vote on my shit...........................pz

flow - 007
punches - 007
personals - 007
structure - tie (easy to read both)
creativity - 007

Overall - 007