i wanna battle sumone
10-15 line max
no crew, hate, dr, feedin
due hour after we both check-in
check in and i'm in start ya verses
blind spit yo
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i wanna battle sumone
10-15 line max
no crew, hate, dr, feedin
due hour after we both check-in
check in and i'm in start ya verses
blind spit yo
Checkin in...
Good luck to ya.
Droppin here in just a bit.
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His location's 'my chest' cuz he can't elevate ta my face...
It's like this soldier's obsessed...with coming in second place.
Ya'll are all weak, I crushed ya boy Dominator just yesterday...
Cold merked him...and now you're leaving the exact same way.
I like the flames in ya sig cuz it relates ta how ya burnin down...
Cremation in effect so I'll spit an urn and drop ya in tha ground.
Ya shit's pathetic, don't recognize one name on ya win list...
Take a look at mine...now you've got a real reason ta be pissed.
It's destiny for you ta end up there, you were born to lose...
Good thing ya military, cuz this loss has dressed you in blues.
born to kill ya culdn't force a thrill-even if ya tried to masterbate/
and i'm not suprised still, at ya age-ya'll need viagra to push up the pace/
look up and get sprayed, cuz cut's in that flowin-mood/
ever since ya last birth-day, ya not gainin weight? ya just blowin-through/
holdin-true with that many wins and ya still got no-crew-each of ya shows wearin thin like posin-nude/
since it'll take ya a decade, to get any ass-ya'll just be growin-prude/
treat ya like the houston 500, and have ya changin up fast/
like a pit-crew-can't stand to look at u-sit down i'll start arrangin a mask/
ya culdn't be hot money if ya were blazin up cash/
your a fuckin headhunter? that occupation is pinnacle/
cuz the truth is, ya really are dominant-with how many dicks u blow/
i dun't wanna figure it out, either way ya biography is gay/
from u'r avy, ya alredy dead-so u can call me bone-crusher today/
check his profile if ya dun't get any punches---
peace gl
cutastraphe won it with a bit better punches... the only line i really like in B2K's verse was the flames in the sig line...
no hate... 1
of course no hate.....................
flow-Born
metas-Tied
punches-Cut
open-Cut...
shut-weak
vocab-tied
Cutastrophe got this.........Born To Kill shoulda came harder........
Use more metaphores....................................Chec k out my battle.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=90920
Can I get some votes from peeps who understand punches, wordplay, and personals?
Uppin for reality.
Peace
hmmm....u both had good punches....but born had better personals and wordplay....cut had kinda old lines...and old personals....check what i mean so u understand...
Quote:
From Sureal: (11-10-03)
34.Only Member Of The Site...That Needs Viagra..
if u read the verses instead of looking at them to just see whose looks better....i gotta say Born got this....personals against Born are just old.......(about his age most specifically)...but u both had good flows and vocabulary...but like i said Born had better original personals....and he had some type of wordplay in almost every line unless the line was used for a personals...so i gotta go with Born on this....good read from u both though....no hate...just a vote....Quote:
From cutastraphe:(11-12-03)
at ya age-ya'll need viagra to push up the pace/
peace
4:20
His location's 'my chest' cuz he can't elevate ta my face...
It's like this soldier's obsessed...with coming in second place.
nice..nothin special..decenct opener w/ personal not bad
Ya'll are all weak, I crushed ya boy Dominator just yesterday...
Cold merked him...and now you're leaving the exact same way.
nothin special again..another personal w/good flow
I like the flames in ya sig cuz it relates ta how ya burnin down...
Cremation in effect so I'll spit an urn and drop ya in tha ground.
liked this one better..another personal..consistent so far
Ya shit's pathetic, don't recognize one name on ya win list...
Take a look at mine...now you've got a real reason ta be pissed.
first line was ok antoher personal..2nd line was kinda blah...
It's destiny for you ta end up there, you were born to lose...
Good thing ya military, cuz this loss has dressed you in blues.
decent closer..another personal..not great but not bad either...
very consistent verse born..no played concepts.nothing but
personals and a safe flow..decent wordlpay...nothing really stood out..but overall decent verse
born to kill ya culdn't force a thrill-even if ya tried to masterbate/
and i'm not suprised still, at ya age-ya'll need viagra to push up the pace/
first line was ok i guess..2nd line played seen it too many times
look up and get sprayed, cuz cut's in that flowin-mood/
ever since ya last birth-day, ya not gainin weight? ya just blowin-through/
better punch here..was fellin the wordplay more
holdin-true with that many wins and ya still got no-crew-each of ya shows wearin thin like posin-nude/
since it'll take ya a decade, to get any ass-ya'll just be growin-prude/
[b]nice multis but the flow got lost..lines were too stretched[b]
treat ya like the houston 500, and have ya changin up fast/
like a pit-crew-can't stand to look at u-sit down i'll start arrangin a mask/
ya culdn't be hot money if ya were blazin up cash/
first line decent..2nd was kinda of forced..need to be worded better..3rd was a filler not needed
your a fuckin headhunter? that occupation is pinnacle/
cuz the truth is, ya really are dominant-with how many dicks u blow/
i see the personal but it seemed forced.flow is off here too..
i dun't wanna figure it out, either way ya biography is gay/
from u'r avy, ya alredy dead-so u can call me bone-crusher today/
not feelin it truthfully...i see the personal but wasnt feelin the bone crusher concept
b2k gets this and heres why..
first of all look at his structure..you can tell right off the bat it is going to be easier to read..
cut need to shorten his lines and fix his structure...
2nd born had an even numer of lines (10) while cut had an uneven w/(13)..try to end the verse with an even number of lines it helps the flow alot..
both had personals...even though some of born werent that great to me, they were consistent and got the point across
cut yours seemed forced in some areas...
overall both had punches and personals..but borns wins the
structure,flow and wordplay...
this is my reason for voting the way i did
deal with it and please dont bitch about my decision
thanx
poll vote=born to kill
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Well i tried to respond to this before then i got booted. I just want to say very nice breakdown and i was sayin that ya see more flaws in my rhymes then i do. Which i guess is true in everyone. Anyway, even though allot of my disses were played or used already this is the first time i battled this kid. So look at it from my point of view it aint like i had time to research on this cat. we spit quick and i had to diss em on the obvious. anyways uppinnnnnn for more votes----peace
^^^^^agreed homie.........
but heres my honest breakdown
opener-b2k
closer-b2k
punches-b2k
personal-b2k
multis-cut
complexity-tie
originality-b2k
enjoyment-b2k
overall-born to kill.......honest no hate vote
opener-b2k
closer-tie(niether that nice)
punches-cut
personal-b2k
multis-cut
flo-b2k(easier to read, flo'd better)
overall-b2k
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=severe+lyrics
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...179#post903179
drop a fair vote on at least one of em
Floh: B2k
Structure: B2k
Wordplay: Tie
Multi's: Cut
Punches: B2k
Overall:B2k
Vote: B2k.
Explaination... like what was said play'd punches on cuts part but no hate both came tight....
could ya'll hit my battles up being slept on in my sig.. much appriciated.
born got this...no hate
flow = born
structure = born
multis = cut
punches = both
personals = born (had good 1's specially da 1 about "peep his wins and you'll get pissed or some'n' like dat) lmao lmao....got that line
vote = born
hit this battle up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=91418