(LM)cutastraphe vs. (HIV)TECH-NINE aka Paknheat

10 lines max
no crew, hate votes dr or feeding
due in say 2 hrs. give us sum time
fo the hell of it. but i'll be postin soon
blind spit after we both check-in
check in!!!!

NOBODY GETS THIS WIN!!!
-Jay Pana

LMAOOOOO NIGGAS HIGH AS FUCKKKKKK THAT'S LSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS LYRICAL FUCKIN SOLDIER GONNA RUN U TO THE GROUND AND STEP ON U GET OUT MY NINE U KNO THE REST-------LOL

lol
checkin kid...........
This shud be titeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeee
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teck nine with his best-rhymes, 'fuckin sucks'and i'm not talkin bout his 'sex'-crimes/
nigga culdn't get 'outa ' bar and even with his 'stretched'-lines/
beat me before but who runs with 'HIV'? they aint 'hard'-core/
my skillz a far-more, wut arts for-he culdn't make a 'hit' comin out the 'closet' from a 'car-door'/(gay ass nigga)
This crew battle is hype, and i can see this kid already-losin/
while i'm steady-provin want to make me 'look wack' then switch 'cut' with 'revolution'/(the thread says LM...get it LM's in The Revolution)
want's me to end this abusin, nah though i'm a keep-on/
cuz gettin 'pussys' rare and he still watches 'HBO' to 'Dream-on'/(dream on: old datin show on HBO)
raps easy to sleep-on, not to feed-on-but he'll always serve 'beneath' me as summin to 'pee-on'(peon)/(peon:look it up the)
lose the keyboard and mic and he'll be screamin dear god my career's-gone/(lol...)




tennnn gl
pzz

my name ain't Dean Cain but Teck nine came to "rip" cutastraphe..
"Believe it or Not" blood leaks from severein every artery quickly..

Nine stays shifty..unpredictably witty..never takin falls..
it's blood sport..not pool..but still known for breakin balls..

create withdrawls..cuz when I spit..ya look like Jodeci..
"Fienin" for my lines with the shakes waitin hoplessly..

provokin me's.. like "suicide"..cuz in this zone ya got found..
with the BPC lookin like the "Jim Jones" compound..

I'm runnin through you.like I was an I.V.you comin tight.that's highly unlikely..
only chance of votes for cut is if they die typing..

Ya punches where typical for an average heavy weight differential..
This mite be a crew battle but ill hand u back half ya crew intials..(L M half of it is a L)

aighttttttttttttt nice spitttttttttt liked the ender---------let's get sum votes---------------------

i read 2 lines from cutastraphe drop then i just stoped reading it..........
im just sorry....

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Gone
-Axe

u'r fuckin wackkkkkkkkkkkkkkk ya have to have explanation vote this is a crew battle. and ya alredy polled for him? wtf ya just hatin on me so stop it befo i merk ya ass too. explain ya vote otherwise we takin ya poll away.

^^^^^^^6wuteva im up 1-0
upinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

If anythig read my last line..............................................
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Bring this to investigated reports....... that vote does not count.... especially in a crew battle..............

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THIS WAS A HOT CREW BATTLE NOW FOR DA BREAKDOWN:

OPENER:CUT
CLOSER:CUT LMAO
VOCAB:TECK
MULTI'S:CUT
WORTH READING:BOTH
WORTH BATTLING:CUT
PUNCHLINES:CUT

THIS WAS A ONE-SIDED BATTLE TO ME KNA MEAN CUT'S VERSE WAS CREATIVE AND ALSO VERY FUNNY ESPECIALLY HIS LAST LINE WHILE TECK'S VERSE WAS JUST WELL JUST A VERSE IT DIDN'T STICK OUT OR ANYTHING TO ME KNA MEAN SO MY VOTE GOES TO CUT WHAT...

u forgot to poll dawggggg??????????? and i'll try to bring it to IR see if i can get that vote taken off cuz that's just wack hate vote by the wang.

uppinnnnnnnnnn
on sum honest vote
.^^aite...uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Flow: Teck
Punchs: Tied
Metas: Tied
Structure: Teck
Enjoyment: Tie

Vote: Teck

You got no idea how hard this battle is to vote on...cut had some nice punchs...but i heard all tht shit before..mostly played..teck was more original which is what wwins him my vote...punchs were at the same level...this battle is hella close

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=90832

in return...hit that up

yo honest

flow-TECH
metas-Cut by one
personal-not really
finisher-Cut
vocab-TECH
opener-Cut
Punches-Cut

Good verses but Cut took more areas.............honesty only.........

(I dont know yall like that to hate vote)........................................

Could yall return the favor............................................. ...............

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=90920