10 lines max
u corny so i'll spit first
40 minutes max no excuses
no recycling
no hate d/r or rew votes..
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10 lines max
u corny so i'll spit first
40 minutes max no excuses
no recycling
no hate d/r or rew votes..
check in tho its been a few minutes now an still no drop from biddy this mite be takin u too long man if u dont hurry up i mite not have any option but to Get this CLOsed
~say he poor from the street but he stay reppin the akademik tag/
~wrong word on my block ya ride home be the paramedics in a bag/
~i be like a ghost that strolls through ur dreams every night/
~straight winnin this batlle wit out a struggle or fight/
~cuz i be like hannibal lector i eat yah brains and face/
~but after i chewed u up i spit u out cuz u didn't have no style or taste/
~cuz i'm not a rapper I'm more like a lyrical mind demon/
~battle me u fucked urself and left urself lyin in ur own pile of semon/
~so nexttime u wanna battle remember what the fuk i'm about/
~no do like ludacris say and roll the fuk out/
^^^LOL u bouta get ya 7th loss kid damn
If ya a Veteren cuz of flows..you were given the wrong rank//
ya couldn't come up "Big" even if ya were Tom Hanks//
revealin quotes show folks you cant touch my writing//
the only chance for Biddys votes…is if they die typing//
November’s here, it’s clear Centrals number one on my hit list//
Deflict ya spits, First stateing your from the hood then the woods bitch//
dismiss this bitch quick, flip sick-scripts to avenge a loss//
beatin you is cheap too… 1 “buck”-shot is all that vengeance costs//
what ya penned is soft, keep my name out ya mouthpiece//
cause this boards my home and I got shit “locked” like some house keys//
I'm runnin through you.. like I was an I.V.you comin tight..that's highly unlikely//
ya lines hit like beebes..my hollow tips left rips in ya text-ure//
BIddy= NET THUG.the definition given in "Websters"//
yooooo
flow=biddy
punches=pakn
structure=biddy
creatiity=pakn
wordplay=pakn
overall=pakn
close but it hink packn took it cuz biddy wasn't spittin hard and too simple needed betta punches--------
CAn sumone change his POLL vote
its wrong an shud be fore me
as he states
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Begining:
Ending:
Flow:
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If u guys wanna reapay me sumhow for votein... hit this poll up iight; vote honestly iight
Yaz vs shay-d {5-8 lines}
Begining: Both
Ending: bid
Flow: bid
Multies: pakn
Volcab: pakn
punchs: pakn
Ryme Scheem: pakn
Over All: pakn
If u guys wanna reapay me sumhow for votein... hit this poll up iight; vote honestly iight
Yaz vs shay-d {5-8 lines}
I wrote a whole line by line breakdown, but accidentally deleted it...
So heres a short breakdown.....
WordPlay = Pak
Punches = Pak
Flow = Even
Personals = Pak ( both alcked but atleast Pak had one....)
Structure = Pak
IO felt Pak came harder than Biddy, and biddy's verse was overall pretty shit, he's punches came short and Pak took it.....
My Vote = Pak N Heat
pce
uppin thanks for the help feeble..........................................
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aight,
This was again another close battle, I mean, i could hardly distinguish a deciding factor between you, You each had killa flow and wordplay. HOWEVER i felt that Pak n. Heat came out stronger with punches, loved the bar:
"dismiss this bitch quick, flip sick-scripts to avenge a loss//
beatin you is cheap too… 1 “buck”-shot is all that vengeance costs//" - i felt that, that took it.
vote:PAK N. HEAT
sorry about freesposting, but could you return the favour, it'd mean alot:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=88907
thanx.
nice battle
flow=pak
creativity=pak
structure=tie
punches=pak
my vote=pak
holla
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