REMEMBER ME (A.T. feat. DaO)

Just think for a moment...
How many people pass away in this world that we dont even know,
How many people have we bump into on the sidewalk, exchanged
foul language with and went on not knowing what could happen
to them the very next minute... this is a tribute to those unknown
people... and to our families...


(DaO)
A Simple Rememberence thats all this life Calls For
To be thought of or Brought ups what I Strive For
Hear, When I sing off tune or if i slipped up my words would you still seek me?
See, If you saw me hangin with a girl less than perfect what the verdict be?
Taste, If you couldn't taste my feelins in the air how many props on this set?
Smell, And in those homeless days who the fuck smelt me not as some dead meat.
All senses revoked what do we have in the end?
Fake faggots tryna act like ya best friends.
Affected by none a real man stays true to true men
So im constantly in search of these quilities of a true man
But when i look to see all i get is dead ends and battle beats
Ill be happy if i just meet a Holly Mans Quality...

(A.T.)
Aiyo,
When I die, I want people to remember me for a number of things,
first off as a father, cause I love all the happiness that my baby brings,
Second, as a husband to my old lady and life long campanion,
Cuz I know that if I fell off my high horse onto a bandwagon, she'd back me,
thirdly, I want to be known as a world reknowned prophet for makin you think,
Cause all this bull shit builds up until I smear it with ink, cuz it clears me to think,
I wanna be known as fearless, hardcore, and always fightin with a cause,
cuz honest to God, some of these thugs are fightin for the wrong and writtin wit no balls,
I wanna make you feel like I feel in every song I write, whether its wrong or right,
I wanna make you dry your eyes even if its me thats the one who feels like crying all night...
I wanna have the power to do good and express myself in my music at syncrinized rates,
I wanna simplify all lives and defy all fates, create legal crimes when Im writing in a rage,
I want you people to understand who I am as a man, calloused on the surface but whethered within,
I want you to know that I'm actually lost within, so I'm poppin shots of gin,
Coppin squats on cops just to justify the very same mood that I'm in...
I just dont want to be forgotten...

pretty dope...
dao:
flow:flow was nice...easy to read
vocab:yeah baby...dope...

a.t:
flow:just like dao's...flowed well
vocab:vocab was aight dao's was better...sorry
t.a. you really have a baby,dawg?

anyway dope piece

That was ill just like allik says both the flows was tight but dao's vocab was better

uppin

dont sleep... c'mon

upppin for this shiznit.

i like how you are stayin true to who and what you love in life, and not fakin about some bullshit

very creative drop, i liked the emotion you both brought, very good wordplay and flows, great work

And am i in the omens? i got it on my bottem thing rocken but im not sure cuz im not in the roster can ya pm me the scoop or summin or tell me on thiz thanks peaz

yeah your in dawgy,,,
feebles a MOD as well as our leader so he's a lil busy...
he usually updates the roster every week or so...
~Ashy~

Strengths-Pretty good flow throught, you guys flowed in unison, whihc is hard to do sometimes, but it was good.

Weaknesses-Well your depth needs a little working on, I mean it had some good meaning, but it needs to be deeper.

Overal-Well rounded.

Thanx for the feed.bac.

uppin

i enjoyed it i cant say anything lacked enough to dissapoint me so all and all a second collab for you 2 should be inorder.

this was a dope drop u had some nice vocab and some good flow.......i was feelin this piece it was nice 8 1/2-10

good drop

Strengths- Flow was on-point. Nice lyrics from both, deep shit. I love readin the shit that is deep and has a meaning to it.

Weaknesses- On the contrary, like KFC said, if this piece was meant to be deep, you need to work on the depth. It wasn't as deep as i'm sure it could've been.

A.T. - I loved this bar.

When I die, I want people to remember me for a number of things,
first off as a father, cause I love all the happiness that my baby brings,

Sounds like something Kweli would say. Nice. Dao, you came nice too dog, I was feeling AT's verse a lil more tho.

Overall- Me like.

-Formula