Iight check in, got 45 min. after i drop to do your verse, no feedin, goodluck :)
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Iight check in, got 45 min. after i drop to do your verse, no feedin, goodluck :)
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aite, checking in================================================ =============================================
Iight keyin it up as we speak, might take up to 25 min. madd people imin me and wont leave me alone lol, so be patient, and if you want start doin your verse too, that way we post at tha same time or around tha same time, just a thought.
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sound good, no probs with blind spits.
No feeding anyway so I will post when I'm done writing...
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Ayo....
I'll 'scramble up your name' son, to make 'Hidden=0 and one'/
I can tell you think your 'hot' but i been known to turn it up to 'well done'/
I aint a christian but you gonna 'need a prayer', better hope your neighbor's tha 'pope'/
Cuz your rhymes 'rub off on me' like washin off 'grease with soap'/
Damn, you must be 'high-self a steamed' cuz i put newbs 'under pressure'/
You think i became a 'king of a board' by practicin up on 'checkers'/
'Rehearse your act' of rap before you even try to have 'talent-to-show'/
I'll have you feelin 'buzzed and depressed' compressed in this battle of 'hEyE (high) vs low'/
Go ahead and hide, thats why your 'ridin on tha road to victory' in tha 'passangers side'/
I'm tha 'murderer' in this battle, your just tha bitch thats gettin 'victimized'/
'Rehearse your act' of rap before you even try to have 'talent-to-show'/
I'll have you feelin 'buzzed and depressed' compressed in this battle of 'hEyE (high) vs low'/
Explanation: Rehearse your act/talent show, buzzed/high depressed/low, high/hEyE <---- my name :)
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nice wordplay, where were the punches, do you want to post again????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????
give me 5 min, nearly done
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Text champ? and king? Dawg, your shit's a lyrical sedative
an EyE-QuE exam's the the only test you'd get a negative
I'll rip your lines to shreds and scatter them like confetti
you couldn't hack this shit if I gave you a machete
I'm not psychic, but I predict a loss in your future
your only reason for living is that it's illegal to shoot ya
you picked the wrong site, you don't have the skill that's required
from the skills you've shown so far, you should have stayed retired
And, when I merk you, there's no reason for celebration
you're only my first step on the path to elevation
Motherfucker
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Hidden One your opener was retarded
punches...........eye
flow..................Hidden
structure..........Hidden
wordplay...........eye
metas/similes....eye
vote...................eye
Eye won in the more important categories and more or them
Eye Ide appreciate an honest peep on this, thanks bro
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...225#post873225
Iight, damn readin your verse hidden one reminds me of tha old days, you almost brought me to tears. I remember way back when there was tha highlighted words for wordplay and punches, but now a days people consider that wack, well on this site. I know your not a newb i've prolly battled you before or been part or your crew from way back, cuz what you just showed me come from a differant generation then tha people on this site today, goodluck on tha battle tho.
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what're you talking about?
I am a newb, well...
I only ever got up to around 100 posts before I packed it in
I think I had about six battles and lost most
so I have not battled you before
I am a spring chicken
you over the hill old grandpa motherfucker
You talk about back in the days like I was there...
...We used to have to put coal in our computers back then...
I done know you were a general in the civil war
Lol oh you got jokes, no i'm only actually 14, but i been on tha net battlin for 4 years, too me thats a fuckin long time, and i've never seen anyone use tha structure you used except for those who been on tha net on certain sites, WW4, ISN, HHAP in tha past 2 years. Maybe you think your being clever tryin sumthin no one uses idk, i just thought you were one of those vets from back a few years.
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yeah, I though I was being clever
still elevating
But I am really a newb and I never even seen those sites, any worth checking out?
Naa, most of em are gone and WW4 you need to be invited in to join. Actually come to think of it, all of em are gone except ww4, but you can check if you want, www.insuboardination.com www.hiphopairplay.com
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ok hidden yur basic lyrics man truly u a wack cracker jack
punches eye
flow Hidden
structure Hidden
wordplay eye
metas eye
vote...................eye
highlighting pisses me off so good start hidden......wtf?....nah
punches=tie
personals=eye
flow=hidden
sustainmemnt=tie
origanality=eye
laugh factor=eye
overall=eye
you see the battle in ma sig.....hit it up.....hit it up...make sure ya do