Naive thinkin

When your goin through school, like a fool you think life’s easy but its cruel
With hindsight I could begin to put right with experience’s tool
After leaving, for a while you do fuck, you pass the buck with a bit of luck
-A job’l fall on your lap, naïve thinkin, easy to fall in the trap
6 months later done shit, still hangin with my dawg’s smokin weed and getting pissed
-missed it in a blink, sitting staring thru the tunnel of my glass drink
time goes, i rose from nuthin to college, easy option but I didn’t acknowledge
half way thru the course I deferred it, preferred it getting up when I didn’t have to commit
flitt-n-it round, bit of that, bit of this, entertaining bland thoughts sittin inside, outside perpetual mist
-the abyss of my world full circle over and over like a rehearsal a commercial
showing my life dropping at the first hurdle
from 18 to 23 in a phase of negativ-ity but determined me to make the most of livin
back at college for good, willing, giving 100% til I meet the duration
don’t get me wrong havn’t ‘reformed’ my salvation, still pumpin my body with contamination
-I just split my world in 2, one climbing the ladder, the other hittin with my crew
-thru life’s lessons and blessings ive learnt its all a balance and the pivot is you

come on people, can i have some feedback thrown this way...........thankin yall....................
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nice to see all the feedback flowing in........lol
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i can totally relate to this. school sucks, it always will suck, and it always has sucked, keep it up

eh! dont think you quite got the message, what i was saying is when goin thru school you think its huthin, but later on you realise how important it actually is, you see?............peace

come on people, whats wrong with ya dawgs, aint ya givin crit no more.....lol

Im feelin this one a lil i know what you sayin so i can relate to it. Cause right now im at the state when i think school dont mean shit

this was nice verse yup im feelin it actually makes some good points so keep writtin

thanx foe the feed, can i get sum more here.........
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i like the positive look towards school, but this sounds more like a poem instead of a rap, but i guess i would have to hear it. overall it was pretty tight.

as alwayz y'all damn Englishmen got the vocab on point...;)...and I like the concept...it was creative...but shit...I been outta school for a coupla yearz now and I still don't see shit that it's done for me...lol...

i hear what ya saying dawg, but i been out it a whole lot longer that you............everyone's got their own opinion, so aight man...its all good......peace........