Carsonjet vs. Pale Horse (Topical Battle)

Topical Battle subject will be on Life, I wont drop untill you check in I know that you have to wait until tomorrow probably just check in and I dont care about who drops first.

Checkin in formulatin right now---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

your original rules said 10-15lines so I am tryin to stick to that:


Don't wanna ~wake-up~ when my days a "nightmare"
Reality ~breaks-up~ insanity surounds me "right-here"
I ~take-up~ my cross that I gotta "bare"
how do I get through this Life when no one else even seems to "Care"

Lifes lookin hard, like thugs sportin "Goatee's"
and Im drownin like a fat kid wearin pool "floaties"
this aint a battle its a spiritual "war"
gettin by like Carsons mom usin crisco to get through the "door"

Im the first cat to preach about peace and "love"
yet I left bloody prints all over the "gun"
Im not "dumb" but my sin has got me so "strung"
I know Im "young" but Is my lifes over before its "begun"

Can I make it wit everything Im "givin"
Life without Christ just aint worth "Livin"

-one-

Carson dont sleep on this dawg-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

lol@westpalmbeach lmao lmao

but neways, verse cud b better and dont quote your words, there is no need for that, makes it look really dumb n noobish(no offense)

thanks for ya opinion Legend (in yo own mind)----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Yo this fagot said that he quite RB in his Sig,,,, he does this after he told me to set up and throwdown.....Does anyone else want to battle against this verse Let me know.