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20 lines max...
verses due by midnight... or close to it...
No Personals... Punches only...
voters: Vote line for line... period...
this is the new thread...
Checking in.
Audio hell no... not with that lack of rythm...
Ya bones are like my bad habits... I'm now forced to break em...
Quick to rip kids... Come with punches straight relentless...
Not a thug cause when he carries pumps it means his shoes dont fit...
Coming into this cocky?... I'll KO you but dont push me...
Otherwise I'll merk ya ass... But I dont usually eat pussy...
Old school kid... Man ya rhymes should stay retired
Av shouldnt even be at RB... Cept ya mom's jaw got tired.
Jack ya skills... After all I've stolen nothing in my life...
And watch as I lay it... While you just blow the pipe...
This kid's obsolete... Much like an 8-Track collection...
Leave ya silenced with this... Then come back to cash ya check-in.
Ya life is like existence of Bob... There is literally no hope...
Hang with Chrit in a battle? OK... I'll even show you the rope...
Damn kiddo... How you even think you can beat me...
Push ya buttons for better verses.. starting with the delete key...
Seriously wack as fuck... we all loathe this biting bitch...
Especially fans who keep they hands up... praying for you to quit...
Not a FAG... but still bordering on being gay...
Careers in the fast lane.. but speeding the wrong way...
fat flow obese as ever... I'm shakin this whale,
Good things come to those who weight... but Chrit keeps breakin the scale...
& he's the type to write poop, no wonder no one likes you,
When ya battles raps suck worse than King Of Thieves open mics do...
get some slim fast fat ass... I mean this faggots just ooze round,
he's throwin english curreny to sea... hopin ta lose pounds...
Fat Fuck... ya plain Suck... Chrit stop with the burgers n' cakes whore,
keep ya 'eyes open' for ya next punch..? I'll drink coffee to make sure...
while he sucks a large coke... Chrit even bites the straws guys,
I never slept at night... Ryan not on RB's a' site for soar eyes...
lines from my open mics leave this kid stuck when I quote it,
Cause when I said Av ghosted... for admins I meant for Chrit when Av wrote it...
dickrider... Let's be honest Cryptic... in lipstick you do suck,
and with quotes... you add my drug name like... "Avalon's dope... PLUS..!"
don't show up, calm ya nerves, stop pretendin you're rowdy,
Cuase battles are metaphors for ya sex life... both situations are cloudy...
Av's bringin the feast on... you're a midget losin feet dog,
plus, only think you brought to the table is your booster seat homes...
you clock is tickin... silently... soon you should fail fine,
n only time would tell... now you wishin you could tell time...
and I'm spent...
Chrit
Audio hell no... not with that lack of rythm...
Ya bones are like my bad habits... I'm now forced to break em...
... Hmm ... Aight ...
Quick to rip kids... Come with punches straight relentless...
Not a thug cause when he carries pumps it means his shoes dont fit...
... Coulda been worded better ...
Coming into this cocky?... I'll KO you but dont push me...
Otherwise I'll merk ya ass... But I dont usually eat pussy...
... Ha ... Dope ... Very ...
Old school kid... Man ya rhymes should stay retired
Av shouldnt even be at RB... Cept ya mom's jaw got tired.
... Hmm ... Dunno ...
Jack ya skills... After all I've stolen nothing in my life...
And watch as I lay it... While you just blow the pipe...
... First line of this was nice ... But 2nd was sketchy ...
This kid's obsolete... Much like an 8-Track collection...
Leave ya silenced with this... Then come back to cash ya check-in.
... Nice ...
Ya life is like existence of Bob... There is literally no hope...
Hang with Chrit in a battle? OK... I'll even show you the rope...
... Nice ...
Damn kiddo... How you even think you can beat me...
Push ya buttons for better verses.. starting with the delete key...
... Ha ... Good ...
Seriously wack as fuck... we all loathe this biting bitch...
Especially fans who keep they hands up... praying for you to quit...
... Dope ...
Not a FAG... but still bordering on being gay...
Careers in the fast lane.. but speeding the wrong way...
... Nice ... Coulda had a better finisher ...
Avalon
fat flow obese as ever... I'm shakin this whale,
Good things come to those who weight... but Chrit keeps breakin
the scale...
... Nice opener ...
& he's the type to write poop, no wonder no one likes you,
When ya battles raps suck worse than King Of Thieves open mics do...
... Nice ...
get some slim fast fat ass... I mean this faggots just ooze round,
he's throwin english curreny to sea... hopin ta lose pounds...
... Dope ...
Fat Fuck... ya plain Suck... Chrit stop with the burgers n' cakes whore,
keep ya 'eyes open' for ya next punch..? I'll drink coffee to make sure...
... Dunno ...
while he sucks a large coke... Chrit even bites the straws guys,
I never slept at night... Ryan not on RB's a' site for soar eyes...
... Blah ...
lines from my open mics leave this kid stuck when I quote it,
Cause when I said Av ghosted... for admins I meant for Chrit when Av wrote it...
... Dope ...
dickrider... Let's be honest Cryptic... in lipstick you do suck,
and with quotes... you add my drug name like... "Avalon's dope... PLUS..!"
... Nice ...
don't show up, calm ya nerves, stop pretendin you're rowdy,
Cuase battles are metaphors for ya sex life... both situations are cloudy...
... Dope wordplay ... Dope line ...
Av's bringin the feast on... you're a midget losin feet dog,
plus, only think you brought to the table is your booster seat homes...
... Ehhh ...
you clock is tickin... silently... soon you should fail fine,
n only time would tell... now you wishin you could tell time...
... Nice ... But coulda had a better finisher ...
Overall
This was a nice battle ... Both came with good verse ... But my final vote is going to have to go to Chrit ... Cuz he had some dope punches that I feel hit harder than Av's ... No disrespect tho ... That's juss the way I saw it ... Props to both tho ... Peace
Vote : Chrit
CHrit....u my boy...no doubt.....but i read this battle twice....cuz
i enjoy good battles...u came wit some nice punches....like two
or three made me say...oohh...that was nice and original...u did
have some played ones though...but good job wit that verse....
Av....what can i say?.....ur shit was nice....i mean seriuosly....
prolly more than half ur verse i was like...damn kid....nice punches
and great wordplay....both of yall my niggaz no doubt...(that even
means u chrit...u do fall into the 'nigga' category)....but...i'm
gonna go wit Avalon on this one for better originality...punches...
and wordplay...
vote=Avalon
his battle raps suck more than my open mics do?????? lol...if my open mics are so horrible than how come I was in KO Crew...and if my open mics are so horrible then how come I beat Evolve in SS preseason??????
Vote deleted.
He cant even vote in here.
Chrit obviously had a better flow... it was structured well
and thus led to an easily read verse...
came strong with some punches... some were unique, and
some were, well, played... but nice job on the hits... kept me
inthused...
Wordplay was very nice... I was really feelin the part about
"I dont usually eat pussy" lmao.. that cracked me up...
overall I rate your verse on a 1-10 scale... an 8 due to
some played punches... but nice drop.
Av- your structure wasnt as good as Chrits, but I could still follow
your flow... you didnt have too much for multies and such, but
it was still nice to read...
Punches- you rocked a shit load of original punches... very nice,
your a very creative person... some of your punches didnt really
make much sense, but a lot of them also hit pretty damn hard...
your wordplay was fucking outstanding... like your opener...
props^....
vote- Chrit... even though he threw a few played punches,
is original punches hit hard enough to take it, plus his structure
was a lil better... mad props on the wordplay to both on this...
^^^Props^^^
my bad... I didnt read the line for line vote rule...
but it wont let me vote anyway... so... take this for what its
worth... props to you two
^^^^? same IP? alias? guess you didn't know which one you were logged in with...costly mistakes....oh welll....peace
avalon.. i erased your post with your alias. just in case you didn't want kids to know its you. post agin with the alias if you want.