you spit first
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you spit first
10 lines
no d/c/h votes
no bitin
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how about this in 10 mins we both post at the same time.............................................. .........
brb ill post soon got ta do some shit
i dont feed so if you wanna post go a head.............................................. ...........................................
you ready .................................................. .................................................. ........................................... for the same time post or what?
do you need more time?
i got a lot to do today so thats why i cant go first so ill by tommorow
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so i wasted my time.............................................. .................................................. .....................
Now listen
And bring your ears closer to this verse,
And let me explain why all your families dispersed
its not you its me, im the curse above your head
and it started when I found you and your boy-friend in bed
I heard screaming but ears deaf to the word you said
I strangled the air out of you till you laid there dead
Your mother came in face pale and white
So I had ta kill the bitch, noose round her neck tight
Struggling stopped, she couldn’t put up a fight
Coz an Anaconda held her. Both heading towards light.
xeon gives me a rude jesture and thats when i begin
youve never killed anyone before but i think youve in prison/
cause judging from the scars on your ass buba wasnt missin/
stop droppin the soap for funsumtin you cant forget about/
your shits jammed so far up your ass youll need a Laxative to get it out/
for you rapin is like women something you dont know/
and your iq is like your dick something that wont grow/
mabye if i slow the words down a bit you might know em/
quit rappin forever and go home to write a poem/
the words are echoing in your mind so thats something i dont have to repeat/
you cantsee me so i guess you are finally gonna learn defeat/
how the fuk did xeon win any battles........
punches and everythin else=anaconda......not a bad verse either.....no need to bold tho...pz
vote=anaconda
how the fuk did xeon win any battles........ - Brixton
Lol , I was thinking the same thing ........... First off Xeon ... Mom jokes is so played , you read it and want to skip over it. No matter how clever it may sound to you , I think it turns off a lot of voters. Your Rythme scheme was very simple , flow wasnt bad , but your verses didnt contain much , no multis , word play , nothing .....
Anaconda , Your verse cracked me up , nice rythme work , some of yer lines had me howling .... Funny shit , good verse , Nice Job.
CE
Peace
Dis Wuz A One Sided Battle...
Xeon's Verse Was Like A Story...
Anaconda's Punches Were Just Hittin Harder...
Betta Flow...
Betta Everything...
Vote-Anaconda For Obvious Reasons...
Anaconda got this battle...the flow was nice...and he had some funny linez...as where Xeon had some played linez...and Anaconda also had multi'z whereas Xeon...didn't...lol
flow..Anaconda
punches..Anaconda
vocab..Anaconda
personals..Anaconda
Overall.. Anaconda
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anaconda got this one with punches and vocab nice match x uses words simple light fight like that u gotta use better vocab like prison mission u know