Battle of the Sexes
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lol
DON'T FREEPOST IN MY SONG THREAD!!!
is that a joke?
that was somthing else.
dont wanna be negative so keep at it.
you will get there. good luck
At least it's not false advertising.
At least I'm not 1-2....WHAT BITCH?
your 18-4 in what ?....text right.....
this is bad..i cant lie...its real bad...and makes me laugh...
rap isnt for you man...no offense..its not for all...
keep at the writing though
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huh..i didnt like this at all..yea stick to writeing...and a record dont mean shit...gohead say something like im 0-1 ohh..
i got a loss fucking around in a text battle,so what,i aint ashamed,,now whean you do a song and put your time into it and it sucks,thats whean you should be ashamed..peace
............................. stop rapping in a quater note rhythm...
your rhythm is like.. 1 ... 2 ... 3 ... 4 ... and so on...
boring..
learn something about rhythm
THANK YOU, constructive criticism is what I'd like, and in musical terms which I understand. If you don't have anything nice to say, at least let it help me become better.