Arising from the bottle ( ft. RULE n HAZY)

RULE
Minding my own business on a peaceful night..caught in'a desert
Lookin for a place to keep a shut eye tight..found a lamp clustered
Didn't know what it was i picked it up an rubbed it gently
Unknown gold lamp out came a prize a beuatiful lady
Sayin im her master an 3 wishes of my choice she'd grant me
What should i choose? A question i was scared to use
Said ask for your desireTo secure my life to my loved ones that show satisfactions let your heart be re-used
I asked for a Talent..anything would do to please a country
On the countriair i felt she was misguided by my proficy
Maybe I should have listened from such a franchize
Between my fingers infront of my eyes were a genie lie
Her name was Hazy B, a restricted character wit caliber
My second wish was a hard pick but i chose wit a pation
She had a weird look in her eye dispized my actions?
Asked her wut the deal, told me she wasnt to blessed
Suffered for a moment hesitant to my last quest
Said if you so lonely i'll wish for somehting fo you
Told me not to do it but i had to pull through
Said wit my words "i wish for you to be what ever you want"
Turns out the wish came true but i never found out the responce
So until this day my genie of power is blooming like a flower
But i have lost her...perfect...then gone quicker then the towers
hazy
( As a genie i had to reply to him before i was to leave...hoping that this poem would send to his heart and be recieved)

I thank you for raising me from my contents---wishes, grants, remorseful repents---
To you I am owed deaths devotion... to you I bring something more powerful than a wizards potion---
‘Rule’ me with every thought and to you I grant any request...belly dance my way to ‘captain hooks’ treasure chest---
tho’ master the same rules do apply, I cannot kill, nor conquer cupids duty, but rub my bottle and out will arise this cutie---
you see in that bottle I remained for 300 and 7 years---through out deceit of my being free I unleashed many unyielding tears---
The world is what I can give you , money upon a tree, food upon a golden plate, a women of Saudi beauty, an imprisoned family set free, a prince of the finest rate, the softest soul turned snooty, anything to you I bow and offer my all---
Tonight is your night of luck if the sky fell dark, the stars gone, the moon hidden, you may wish for these three--- light replenished, stars of constellations, and the moon in your eyes of dignity---

And when you are through, i return to be locked once again, trapped only hope through ink and pen, waiting for the touch to send me a flight, i beg of you please don't use all of your requests this beautiful starless night---

wow this was totally different, not any of the usual topics 'drink, dope,rape, family disputes' that i hear everyday (not being a hypicric, i write masses on those topics) but this hit a spot that i've never really touched on before, because i've never heard anything like it before..i think Rules verse started off really good, the vocab seemed sort of dream-like, but near to the end it broke into a reality, that was a good tecnique, Hazys part was iight, i loved the line.

you see in that bottle I remained for 300 and 7 years---through out deceit of my being free I unleashed many unyielding tears---

that held a lot of emotion, the ending was great as well and the whole collab flowed really well.

i salute you both for trying something different, it worked really well.

and to Hazy: sorry for sleeping on these things the past few days, i been busy na mean? need anything else uppin, just pm me, i'll try to get it checked out...thanks

peace and respect to liquer

This was trippy as fuck..*on drugs ROFL*
But yo...when I saw the title...I thought it was gon be a poem about overcoming alcoholism...ROFL...JESUS! But this was a nice piece babes :) Nice vocab..I really dunno how to rate these...but nice job ma :D ((-god I hate these ugly ass smilies they have herre-))

Peace Out and PCP!

Hmm.. nice drop here...

Slightly different styles here...
Meshed well together to bring forth nice imagery and emotion...

I like the fact it wasnt a played topic...

Nice work...

Hazy B..i gotta give you props ma, you came ill...an thanksfor the dope topic...great creativity...keep up the good work...peace

that was sumthin, in wayz different to tha whole of tha poem community, as well as in each other, but it worked as any collab should, there should be a difference in tha portrayal of tha topic, just not to slide to far off, decent drop...

not bad....

why not add the chorus: im a genie in a battle babey! LMAO jp


good stuff!

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Maybe I should have listened from such a franchize
Between my fingers infront of my eyes were a genie lie
Her name was Hazy B, a restricted character wit caliber
My second wish was a hard pick but i chose wit a pation
She had a weird look in her eye dispized my actions?
--- Dats what was nice from rule.. Nice Good Wordage .R.S Was good no doubt.

tho’ master the same rules do apply, I cannot kill, nor conquer cupids duty, but rub my bottle and out will arise this cutie---
you see in that bottle I remained for 300 and 7 years---through out deceit of my being free I unleashed many unyielding tears---
The world is what I can give you , money upon a tree, food upon a golden plate, a women of Saudi beauty, an imprisoned family set free, a prince of the finest rate, the softest soul turned snooty, anything to you I bow and offer my all---

This the stand out peace from hazy..
It I liked it my mind just followed that part the easist thats why thats my favorite part from u....

G.P

thanks for teh love

no probz Hazy my girl. Hey check 'the body in the bath' if you havent already, love to you. And will you pleez tell me where you get those cool avatars? pm me!