XMAN VS MR.Spits

ok dude ima spit my verse from that no show battle.....good luck....
no d/r
no hata
no crew votes
spit asap.....

MR. Spits like a penis im gonna teach this dick how to be dissed,
Im gonna hit this bitch "seemless" extract the urine, im takin the piss.

Im not clever but im more intelligent than you,
Cuz im killing ya brain cells and you only had a few.
Your spitting false lines and im exposing the truth,
Im reversing your rhymes making you black and blue.

Ima stamp down on your style and put pain to your smile,
I guess im licking you now cuz ya wack and on trial.
You couldnt serve me justice if ya name was judge dread,
You ripping ya self to shreds son like ya name is fred.

Iight! 10 lines......


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UH! UH! 4REAL!

yo, ~XL4REAL~'s bout to ~FEEL~ da ~REAL DEEL~ wen my ~PUNCH~'s are landen and ~CRUNCH'S~ his bone's. have him ~SHAKE~'n like an affect from a earth ~QUAKE~ and watch his skin start to ~PEAL~( ya no earth quake and it shakes and da ground starts to rip open)

cause this bitch has neva ~FELT~ and ~DELT~ wit a nigga dats ~UNSTOPPABLE~ its like im battlin split eyez and he beats me nigga use doin the ~IMPOSSABLE~( split eyez is 1-9 )

ya faggot ass couldnt spit in multiples even if ya had ~2 BRAIN~'s but i only have one and i can still ~MAINTAIN~ to keep up wit ~YOU~

so im ~THREW~ deelin wit ~YOU~ cause ya no ~CONTEST~ ya ~MEST~ wit da ~BEST~ now use gonna lay ta ~REST~ cause ya braught a knife to gone fight and ya forget ya ~VEST~ and just wit only one punch to da ~CHEST~ and rip out ya ~HEART~ its like ya just got a divorce ya gonna be ~DEPREST~ and ripped ~APART~

aight we uppin fo some votes nigga's holla............................................. ...............................

yo my votes gota go to xl4real on this one
although his verse was shorter he made up for it in qaulity
his verse also made sense and made me laugh
yours was alriight though mr spit ya jus have to improve on sticking to the beat

break down

punchs spits
wordplay xl
multi's spits
flow even
structure even
complexity x
vote spits cause i think who ever comes harder wit punchs should win and thats what spit did

I'd have to go with Mr.Spits with the reason that his disses made a harde impact....y'kno

XL needs to use harder lines than "im more intelligent than you"........that aint gon cut it.....feel me?

Vote = Spits

aight we uppin this bitch holla .................................................. ............................................

i think spits took it with the better wordplay,,
so my vote is gonna have to be =mr spitz''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''' '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''' ''''''''''''''

Ima go wit Spits on dis one. He brought more heat and the way MC Thrilla laid it out wuz perfect so diddo wat dat cat said.

vote- SPITZ

flo-real
punches-spits
structure-real
multi's-spits
overall-spits

Why?.....basicly because it seemed that xl4real actually dissed himself in his first two lines....hard to recover from...had he not done that i think he woulda one....

its obviouse that he's trying to be way to complex than what his mind can circumfer.....some times basic understandibility is better...

it was here.....vote-spits

i liked the heat that spits brought but i think ya should start thinkin bout a new stucture son coz it was hard to read..............xl can come hard but this was xtremely poor..........nice spit spitz............cant vote due to crew........jus feedbk

aight im uppin fo da 3rd time hurry up peeps befo i run out of upps .................................................. ..............

Vote=Spits

Thought he seemed more experienced

Xforeal u need sum elivation dawg, if u want sum help pm me sumtime ide more than happy to help u out, cuz u been here a long time, u need to start bringin in wins~