No Sleep=Lyrical Cyanide vs kaos theory

Aight listen biatch…follow these and its all good, defers all wak rappers away from our battle and brings the true lyricists!
Requirements:
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10 Lines Maximum!!!
Deadline is within 30 mins after you or I drop. If you don't drop or show within those 30 mins it'll be considered a win…NO EXTENSIONS!
Rules:
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No Bitin
No Feedin
No Editing
No Bitching
No Building
No Recycling
No Countering
No Hate Votes
No Crew Votes
No Freeposting
No Vote Swaying
People Who Cant Vote:
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Deaths pistol where Eva he is……
Capcom coz i dissed him......jus dont trust him
Other:
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5 Consecutive Votes Is A KO
5 Total Vote Is A Defeat

OH YEAH, TAKE IT EASY WITH STRETCHIN YOUR LINES…MAKES THE BATTLE SHIT IF LINES ARE TOO LONG…AROUND UP TO 15 WORDS PER LINE…GOOD LUCK SON! IF YOU ACCEPT THEN I’LL SET IT UP JUS ANSWER WITH ACCEPT AN D CHECK IN THE THREAD IN FRONTLINES

accept!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!

'lyrical cyanide'.. ur "skill levels" been 'vertically denied'

here i go

i wanted a "challenge".. bitch ur tha 'wrong type',
afta this battles done.. ur face will look like a 'bomb site',
ur 'moms a dyke'..fuck "virginity".. ur bout lose "lyrically" like on 'prom night'//
shuve 'toxin down ya lungs'.. fighting backs like 'boxing wit no arms',
put "explosives" in ur "thoat".. till u 'caughing up bombs'//
"stain ya brain".. from tha 'ink in ur pen'..kill ya "mind".. before u 'think u can win',
"melt ya organs".. so ya chest will 'sink to ya skin'.. rip ya "eyelids" out so u cant 'blink again'//
"crush" u wit 'over powering palms'.. then hit ya "ass harder" than 'showering cons' and 'tower bongs'//
coming wit 'hot nines'.. when ur coming wit 'stock ryhmes',
u could "sneaze" while "sniffing coke".. and still wouldnt 'drop lines'//

dont got any sites.... not allowed to vote on battles

ur turn.........................30 minutes remember!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

good luck.... dont hurt too much brain cells

Instead of this inbred Theory, I’ll be tha one causing unprecedented Kaos,
You’re Homo that’s lame and Dreary, so stay the fuck back and lay Off.
Couldn’t get a insane, oblique, psycho feeling addictive and Aggressive,
My rhymes got you bouncin off walls, so the feeders left Possessive.
And now you’re pissed off, that I’ve been pissing on your Grave,
Ya imitating each of my lines, coz shallow feedings wot you Crave.
Well if it’s my material that you want, then I’ll serve it on a Platter,
Here, take each one of my lines, you won’t win, so it doesn’t Matter.
These last two lines will make you crumble and give me Gravity,
Coz each one of my words dismantles, then rips at your chest Cavity.


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wut can i say bout this battle...........

newb like...............

yall both need to up ya game but

ma vote goes to kaos...simply because he had better punches...

even tho they were simple this one was decent

"stain ya brain".. from tha 'ink in ur pen'..kill ya "mind".. before u 'think u can win',
"melt ya organs".. so ya chest will 'sink to ya skin'.. rip ya "eyelids" out so u cant 'blink again'//

vote- kaos.

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yo i gotta give this ta Lyrical Cyanide jus cuz i think it was more personal an had better flow. vote = Lyrical Cyanide

fuck sorry still wont let me poll vote, always says i need an explanation even if i already posted 1 so i guess my vote doesnt count, peace.

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Punces:Ly
Flow:Ly
Mulit:Both
Structure:Ly
Vocab:Kaos
Enoyability:Kaos

Overal-Ly

Not a bad battle at all, it was pretty good, had some nice disses and both MC's came pretty hard, good, props to both.


Drop and explained vote here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=80975

lol, this was bullshit man, these votes are wacked kaos... you better watch whos votin' man...

check it...

kaos - Your punches were there, but only TWO of them made sense, your flow was there and your rhymescheme kept up, but it was newbish, no multis to count, no metas, no name play, nor wordplay, you worked a lil on similies... but they didn't add up right, your creativity lacked alot, and stayed on point... at least some...

Lyrical - You lacked in everything man, you didn't throw one punch that came recognized, it was all flow for you and you didn't even come hard on that, you were too newbish all in all dawg... your flow n rhymscheme followed up well, no sims, metas, multis... blah blah blah... you need to work on it dawg...

kaos - put "explosives" in ur "thoat".. till u 'caughing up bombs'//
"stain ya brain".. from tha 'ink in ur pen'..kill ya "mind".. before u 'think u can win'

those were the only lines that weren't played, even tho the first had been used quiet abit... work on that because that was the only thing that i could point out in ya verse...

vote - Kaos

I'm giving this to Cyanide because of originality...

Lyrical really didn't hit all that hard.
Could have been alot more effective with his punches.
But at least they were his.

Kaos came with, it seemed, every played line in the book.
Boxing with no arms - Real, real played
Explosives in throat - Real, real, played
Sneeze on coke - Played to death

He had some nice flow, but I can't vote for a verse with THAT MANY played lines.

One or two maybe, but his shit was stocked with em.

Sorry, Kaos.

Vote: Lyrical

aight i got two real votes of quite respectful peeps.......this fag be chopping riders...........aight uppin 33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333 333

ur bout lose "lyrically" like on 'prom night'//
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how do u lose lyrically on prom night?.....
didnt make much sense to me-rest of the verse wasnt much better either.......Koas-Elevate

Cyanide....your lines were streched to much-which thru the flow off and your punches weren't that hard either.....also-Elevate

overall this battle was very newbyish......and overall i would have to say koas took this simoply cus he was alot meaner wit his verse....

vote-koas.....Both Improve...No Hate...Pc*1*