kautious vs carmen

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10 lines max

no hate- dick riders- crew votes


thas it

........... lets go, drop tonight.......................

I thought we agreed that you would drop first? So I'll wait for you to post a rhyme then I will go afterwards. That's what we agreed to right?

Alright anyways, I'll post first. 5 bars, short and sweet.

I battle by way of deception I display rhyme trickery
The only thing obvious about me is that I claim victories

Of course there was no way for you to see this an unfair fight
And I'm not going to give you head but I am fucking you tonight

I stalk you for thrills like that flick surviving the game
It's not your fault your lyrically challenged and deprived in the brain

I'll knock out your lights like city wide black outs
I move systematic got 9 different attack routes

Twist your head till your neck break what a sucker
Too easy for me this is check mate muthafucker...

Now there's mine, let's see yours. Holla back.

What's up kautious? Are you going to answer back or what? Where you at? Come on now. If you're not going to battle after all how about you at least tell me why...

Carmen

yo im hear im hear

yo im dropping in a few

nice verse

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5 bars

seriously this kid is so wack… I don’t know tah say
I could put down periods… that way your verse would look really gay

With 5 bars you get quickly eating like fat people at small buffets
Face it kid you fake and played like pre-worn toupees

Ripping you through this faze like sex in a female virgins state
U hit ‘rock bottom’ when battling me… Guess u could say I put a ‘hard end’ to your fate

This faggot Carmen ain’t harmin me with his weak attempt to win
He’s going out easier then porn stars taking a quick shot to the chin

Like the ‘Berlin wall’ you going on a ‘down fall’ when im hitting – pure demolition-
Im ending this ‘cold war’ now from rapper I turn to a mortician – like a fuckin magician-

Death has bin served to this bitch Carmen
Lets get some votes!!!

kautious won this....not by a lot....but i was feelin' his verse more............his punches hit harder, flow was even, carmen's verse was just off
Vote=kautious
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kautius-vote
because carmen was good but
he/she wasnt as good as some
of the lines kautius spit. kautius
you had some nice lines that was
able to win this battle but truth is
u wernt consistantly ill and that
could cost u.
-insert

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=78821
^^hit up with honest vote please

uppin for votes

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after reading it once i was going to go with carmen but then i read it again and saw that kautious had better flow
Flow:Kautious
Wordplay:NEITHER
Punches:Carmen
Metas:Neither
Multis: NEITHER
but overall verse goes to Kautious

Vote: Kautious

uppin for last votes

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I write with agression, and i fight with expression,
All the hype that i'm stressins, like the nicest of lessons
Like a knife when it's left in, you'll get sliced to perfection
I'm the type to keep it tight, Cause my life is a blessin

...... save it for a battle ......................


need votes on this
holla back wiit votes

wanna finish this

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Originally posted by Rappad
kautious won this....not by a lot....but i was feelin' his verse more............his punches hit harder, flow was even, carmen's verse was just off
Vote=kautious

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Very Well Put.Both Verses Seemed To Be Nothin But Fillers And Weak Punches.

vote-Kautious

I think I'll have to go for Kautious
probs to both though, but he came out a lil harder and he had some betta punches. Carmen you came out strong too though, no hate. I was just feeling Kautious a lil more.
So that's why mah vote goes to him.

Could you return? This is being slept on. thx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=79460