RiVa vs. 24 karats

deadline saturday midnight..
10 lines max..
no biting.. no hate.. no d/r...

this is my check in...1

checkin in................................................ .....................

..............................M...........U....... R........D........E..........R....E........D

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this kid is edible,bitch card is gettin pulled,
and its incredible...
how i can eat 24 karats without gettin full
fuck this rookie,My Punches serve a purpose,
will it hurt? Shit...
im Hittin Karat so hard,a Grape'll grow from its Surface
im certain,a loser wit no friends,everyone smashes on
bitch even got a Tattoo,& the shit tried to slash his arm
ya ass is gone fuck mercy,ya fuckin wit a Mastodon,
and my styles off the wall,unlike ya ass at the prom
stiff yuppie,bitches laugh at you so its clear, huh?
that if bitches laugh at u,ya must me crackin up ya mirror

My Rhymes will give u 'blurry' vision.. like sand in your 'eyes'//
This is like a snow 'flurry' for you...you spit cold..pickin me..your 'unwise'//
*Knock Knock* its the 'FBI'.. they want a refund on your 'rhymes'... everyone that heard u rap died//
Sometimes you gotta five up what u love.listenin to u rap... thats like a death wish.... commitin a crime//
You think you a killa but ur the one gettin murdered, slaughter, literally killed//
Afta your divorce.. you couldnt get nun.. so you boned your daughter, now your dreams are fulfilled//
Your 'rhymes' are too 'whack' for me...like 'drinkin gas'//
I shoulda got myself a 'big mac'...but i thought Id b more fun kikin ur 'sorry lil ass'//
Its a 'law in Michigan that u arent 'allowed to smile'//
U look so 'bad' that u killled that slut from '8 mile'//
My punches make u not see 'straight' like 'gay porn'//
Afta gettin dissed that bad...nigga... u must b 'worn'//

Uppin fer votes ya'll drop one here too

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=74467

up...dont come in here with returning the vote favors either...i been back for 1 day and already that homo shit has started again...

Uppin 1...................this is gettin slept on please dont just vote fer the best..................... come on come on come on vote vote.... do me a favor............................................. ............ VOTE!!!

honestly....i think 24 karats took this.......he just had a better overall verse.............punches, wordplay...everything......P C Z

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Originally posted by RiVa
up...dont come in here with returning the vote favors either...i been back for 1 day and already that homo shit has started again...

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^^Got banned for being a herb...........now left on his own accord for being a pussy, im not going to vote on this battle, because either way it will look like hate or dick riding......peace

24 karatz took this easily..... he had better flow, punches, originality.... the whole package.... nice verse..... RIva you need some uppin

uppinn fo mo votes.. thanks fo the votes ya'll uppin uppin
uppin uppin uppin
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24 karat easily took this, Rivas verse was wack and 24 just had better everything IMO............................................... ...........

can u hit this battle up with an honest vote???


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...576#post723576

24 karat merked this newbie in every catagory

vote-24 K

Flow-24 Karat
Complexity-24 Karat
Punches-24 Karat

Im gonna drop a vote here.....say ima hater or whatever if you want......but 24 karat had a better all-around verse
vote=24 karat
need one more vote to finish this kat...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=74960