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due tonite...
im gonna start doin mine right now..cuz i cant stay on all nite...
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10-20 lines
regular rules
u spit 1st..
due tonite...
im gonna start doin mine right now..cuz i cant stay on all nite...
OK ILL DROP BETWEEN 200 AND 230............................................... .................................................. .....................FELL FREE TO DROP UR SHIT FIRST IF U WANT 2
Religiously you represent a MORMON tryin to get MORE MEN to bow down on der KNEES and BLOW a prayer
Niggaz' like Restricted IS bending down to older men untill his lips are on the level of his MIDDLE like the EQUATOR
dis battle was already OVER SINCE the first time the REFREE was EXECUTED
My raps CAUSE HIGH voltages DAT will leave you BIBLE READING ASS hanged CUT and electrecuted
We best DISPUSE it
I'll MELT your face and LEAVE you lookin like a USED CANDLE
MELTED WAX(cum) COVERING YOUR LIPS not allowin you to scream for HELP! when I beat YOU TO DEATH with my sandle
Dis is da' end of the dis BATTLE representin da' END of your LIFE
I'll stab your SPLEEN with a MARKER grab your tonsils outta your neck and tie them around around my rosary LEAVIN YOU permanently TIED DOWN to a cross like J.CHRIST
so Consider it the end of the WORLD when my MIC DROPS
THIS religious nigga is in over his ankles like MIGETS rockin high TOPS
hit this up......................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=73357
checking in...
anti-hero..ya fuck that this kat is also somebody else but no need 2 reveal ur other identity/
ill make u think u won...that embarrase ur ass as though i was jamie kennedy//
antie hero..couldnt save shit...like his losses gonna creep up on him like a pick pocketer//
yo ur lines r shut down like the northeast & its black out and like that blame it on the monitor
*speedin up*
trip ur from behind as though playin a prank/ull never beat me "over the hill"even if u r Hank/
(Hank from "from the cartoon "king of the hill"
ur body remains r driftin a way like drift wood//poor bitch sellin foakleys on the streets in hollwood/
violently slapin ur ass as though a baby bein disobdient//but unlike that im not gonna be leinent
styles all in the past like true love n peace... fold ur shit in half like a letter and burn from ends 2 the middle crease..
i spit the biggest shit in R&B and awarded 4 outragious//but i know bitin 4 u is contagious//
so i step back with a leash tied around ur neck/u go at wood(ies) like a fullgrown woodpeck/
anti-hero is a bad comic book/torn shakin and shook/ priced down 2 5cent so ppl will just look//
slowly wins dicending//but warlords losin 2 so they stop'd lending//looks like u sockin warlords cock the way u keep bending//
itchin ur ass as though a lazy employee//u be bribin the warlords askin plz just employ-me//
no ~never~/i couldnt believe it i thaught the warlords were more clever// but bullshit so W/E//
instantly fallin 2 crisp and crumble..yo mistakin me as a bee but with out the bumble//
u startin 2 hullicionate//but ur d/r boyz probably can relate/cuz u be givin head at and outragiou rate//
slap u back 2 ur enterainment dayz// cuz ur still the only guy that i ever knew that tried 2 fuck male sting rays//
ravin and rantin//cuz ur boyfriend wasnt pantin//but still u wher caught "o warlords o warlords" chantin//
Finisher******
bitch rite here talkin shit 2 my boy mortality//but did u think ud get out without ur name in the paper sayin death 2 fatality//
ya fuck u/ fuck us bein kool i dont need wanna be hero's//but yet u still lookin nasty. damn i must have forgot 2 take out all those cancer pills in ur cheerio's/
UPPIN FOR VOTES HERE PPLE.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...........
Religiously you represent a MORMON, tryin to get MORE MEN to bow down on der KNEES and BLOW a prayer,
Niggaz' like Restricted IS bending down to older men untill his lips are on the level of his MIDDLE like the EQUATOR
dis battle was already OVER SINCE the first time the REFEREE was EXECUTED
My raps CAUSE HIGH voltages DAT will leave you BIBLE READING ASS hanged CUT and electrecuted
We best DISPUSE it
I'll MELT your face and LEAVE you lookin like a USED CANDLE
MELTED WAX(cum) COVERING YOUR LIPS not allowin you to scream for HELP! when I beat YOU TO DEATH with my sandle
Dis is da' end of the dis BATTLE representin da' END of your LIFE
I'll stab your SPLEEN with a MARKER grab your tonsils outta your neck and tie them around my rosary LEAVIN YOU permanently TIED DOWN to a cross like J.CHRIST,
so Consider it the end of the WORLD when my MIC DROPS
THIS religious nigga is in over his ankles like MIGETS rockin high TOPS
i did this to help pple to read it a lil better
Even know I can't officially vote I think that Restrcited got this one with way better punches and the flow was on also, good batte but Restrcited looked like he wanted it more.
Vote Restrcited
PLEASE HELP ME OUT, NOOBS NEVER GET VOTES:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=73372
restricted, you are corny. male sting rays??? full grown woodpeck?? this slacker homo said you have better punches. either a serious dickrider or your fuckin alias. no multis, basic ass flow, corny ass "punches" if you can call em that.
plz. if yall understood flow you see that anti-heros shit is complicated but is almost a flawless flow, if you can read fast. stayin on the religious thing, he had a lotta wordplay, couple multis and the shit was not corny.
so vote anti-hero.
other guy needs to elevate
peace
This was not particularly close for me.
Anti Hero's verse may have been a bit fellatio-oriented, but he did have a centralized theme of religion, as well as some wordplay and I had no problems with the flow. There were punches as well. It was a fairly consistent drop, hard to point out best and worst lines.
Restricted seemed to rhyme-to-rhyme. Lots of shit didn't make sense. Say for instance...
instantly fallin 2 crisp and crumble..yo mistakin me as a bee but with out the bumble//
u startin 2 hullicionate//but ur d/r boyz probably can relate/cuz u be givin head at and outragiou rate//
Why can his boys relate because he gives head at an "outragiou" rate?? And the bee without the bumble? Holy shit dude... nah.
no ~never~/i couldnt believe it i thaught the warlords were more clever// but bullshit so W/E//
?! Well, simply working on the flow an layout would help for technical measure. Which you need polishing on. Your third bar could come closer to meeting the mess of words on the second bar. perhaps a simply, happy "what-the-fuck-ever" Helps.
Speaking of... type out WHATEVER, so people don't have to decipher your internet-speak. Kills the flow.
In addition... come up with something more clever than tossing in "whatever". Do you frequent shopping malls and wear shell necklaces???
Driftin' like driftwood... dope fucking simile there.
Sting Rays? Holy shit...
violently slapin ur ass as though a baby bein disobdient//but unlike that im not gonna be leinent
Disregarding the gramatical mistakes of misdirection against english... how is striking a child lenient??
Woodpecks? Fucking ridiculous dude.
Seriously, your stuff upset me with the lame effort.
Especially when you have a well-established winning record.
Who did you beat???
Sorry couldn't get more feedback on Anti-Hero.
But,
Vote=Anti Hero
yeah....anti hero took this in my opinion......he had some better punches and wordplay....restricted u had some tight shit....but ur rhymes were pretty simple and ur punches were weak...nice battle from u both though.....aight...
peace
4:20
yeah jus wat i w3anted to say reallyQuote:
Originally posted by MP5K
restricted, you are corny. male sting rays??? full grown woodpeck?? this slacker homo said you have better punches. either a serious dickrider or your fuckin alias. no multis, basic ass flow, corny ass "punches" if you can call em that.
plz. if yall understood flow you see that anti-heros shit is complicated but is almost a flawless flow, if you can read fast. stayin on the religious thing, he had a lotta wordplay, couple multis and the shit was not corny.
so vote anti-hero.
other guy needs to elevate
peace
anti hero took this with Harder Hitting punches........both drops were nice and resricted had a lil batter flow, in my opinion, but stronger wordplay and punches won this for anti-hero
vote=anti-hero