Spit First
5 bars max
No crew/dr/hatin
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Spit First
5 bars max
No crew/dr/hatin
checkin in and i thought u were spittin first and i wont feed off ya verse
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not what I said in my callout..but w/e..here it is...
see I am the real showstopper, rap battlin topper, you version number 2, your time is past due
Ima rip out your organs without your donor card, on your toes, tutu wearin ballerina bitch
can't rape you in battle cause your willin, cock in your ass is illin//
we like Bonnie and Cldye, 96 verison me slittin your hide, dumpin ur ass with the tide
ima your thug drug, fuckin up your mind with lyrical punchies, phatter munchies than chronic dope, I'm coke injected adrenaline, pulsin through your veins, leavin needle scratched stains//
you gunna fuckin fight like a man? or do I gotta fight you kneelin where I stand? ya mite drop your pants, cause your used too, gosh golly I just can't find it I came up empty, farewell adieu your dick withdrew to your stomach, jerkin off, slipped and shoot it off wit ya glock//
hicky tickey tickey, showstoppa got no dicky, can't get a licky even if he begged ricky, compacted compressed, need's his mother to get him dressed, osbourne fashion sense, fuckin earin nonsense, hence another broken mirror//
Ya got less power than an iraqi army, always retreatin wit acme weapons, Wile E ya should go catchin the roadrunner, proudly fade away, at least yall get more respect than strikin Safeway employees, loss number 5, signed sealed and delivered//
not at bad effoet m8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! looks like a winner!!
check this battle out : http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=73063
aight ima spit in a min
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get on wiv it showstoppa !!! lets see watya made off! u got a good history so go 4 it m8!!!
Chek it : http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=73063
aight im bout to spit in a min sorry i was doin somethin and no freepostin before verses please
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4 hours later..I am still waitin for you to drop..where the hell are you man?? you takin your sweetass time
aight check it
you battlin me is like "misplacin a fire stick", you "lost a match"//
my rhymes are "amputatin your head", try to "think with your head detached", im "slittin your throat" makin a "diagonal cut resemblin a scratch"//
my keys a bliss, obscene spits rip through your body leavin you defeated bitch//
no chance your ever winnin this battle, quit while your "a head", like "aborted fetuses" trick//
nobodys "feelin you like" bitches with "amputated hands with an urge for masturbation", for me to beat this prick takes as much time as someone with "premature ejaculation"//
Ill "send a bullet through your liver" to see if your "bile can digest it" while your "heart beats hasten", my rhymes will leave you wit a "damaged lung" in the hospital bed wit "frustration awaitin lung and liver donations"//
my rhymes "packin more shit" than you mom goin through constipation, look at this fake ass bitch, thinkin he gangsta cus his computer performed an "Illegal Operation"//
im tearin out your "hands and salivary glands" so when you "spit you can carry a conversation"//
watch for my votes as they come in, this bitch "shits on pussy" like girls who "wipe to the front" end//
Im rippin your "vital organs out and scatterin them", then we'll play "treasure hunt wit blind people and you still wont win"//
sorry it took so long man
uppin fo votes (1)
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uppin fo votes (2)
drop a link and we'll peep urs
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Vote=dashow
damn this was a pretty close battle, both of you had some ill shit.
My vote goes to dashow, i think he had better punches and his flowed better, but this is a tough call.
Anywayz, nice battle, no hate and props to both.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=73150
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=72921
^^will you guys hit these up? they're getting slept on
thanks fo votin uppin fo mo votes
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Yo im guna break this down. Sorry I cant vote so I'll give good feedback
DaShowstoppa won this in all areas
he had sum good Metas and Punches and that is what wins battles, along wit nice smooth flow
Lighting, you gota werk on ur flow, its kinda choppy and hard to follow dog, you had sum good punches, but ya need to use more of them and logs of Similies and Metas, you verse was justa little too basic ya know
Break Down
flow-DS
multis-niether side
Creativity-DS
Metas-DS
Punches-DS
Vocab-sort of a tie, but more towards DS
Nice battle, Thanks for the vote on my battle Lightning
Showstopper can u return the fav cog and vote on this, thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=73106
DS2 won this in all aspects period..........White's flow was off and his Punches weren't hittin very hard.......................
Vote = DS2
Show drop a vote on my battle against M.O.B. and ATL killah aight, Peace